AfterBurner™ Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 ProloguePrologue The light was magnificent through the view of the large windows, the light rays from the sunset danced across the skyline like flames from a fire spitting in all directions. The man calmly placed his hand on the glass; the vibrations from the blurs of colour shooting along the motorways at increadible speeds was immense. Even though he was 12 levels high above the motarways he could feel the roar power that D-Wheels could produce. Looking at his watch he spun on the spot. The time was right; the lanes were filled with D-Wheels. Some filled with: workers, already this equipment has been used for domestic use and of course the duelists who come home from tornements and pro circuits matches. Walking slowly not waking the sleeping dog laying in the pleasant warmth from the suns through the windows, he reached the large wooden fireplace which was not yet lit. It seemed awfully out of place in the modern room filled with furniture from 2034. Reaching out with his strong yet thin hand, he grabbed a statue of a dragon with it wings spread wide: looking regal, gazing at the room as if it were it's domain. Pulling, it swung the fireplace to the left with a loud click a glass lift door opened. Stepping inside of it, without a button pressed or a command spoken the lift glided down passed the 12 levels of the building his office resided in. Into the depths below the ground, once the lift stopped the man stepped out in a room filled with TV screens. Another man alot smaller than the first, but alot older than him stood up as soon as he entered the room. "Sir, the system is up and running" the little man said almost speaking to the mans knees due to his height. "Good. Professor, will it work according to plan?" the first man asked quietly, "Yes, after 10 years the virus has developed to full power. But as it hasn't been used ever this is just a test, if it fails we can work out any kinks easily" Said the professor proudly. "Well god forbid it fails" said the man. They both turned to the TV screens the amount of them must of exceeded 100 all of them had different views of different highways from around the work. In the middle of a complex control pannel was a large red button. "Ironic, eh? has to be a red button professor" smirked the man "I do love the old spy movies with the mad professor who tries to take over the world" he opened his mouth to laugh but noticed the stern look on the man's face. The joke didn't go down well. "Do it. Press the button now professor" the man barked breaking the tension between them both. The professor reached out and pressed the button firmly and in unison the TV screens were filled with explosions. In each monitor somebody crashed randomly on thier D-Wheel causing large pile ups on the motarways. The plan had worked. "Well done professor the virus has worked you will be promoted for this" the man had already turned and entered the lift again. "Thank you sir, but where are you going now?" "Well our plan has caused a country wide disaster and as the president i have some duties to attend to" the lift doors closed and the president glided up to his office. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Please double-space your paragraphs; it makes it much easier to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 done is that o.k now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 It is short for my taste. I am used to writing long turns (see my Star Rider fanfic and TDDS), but this was only the prologue. I'll be happy to see what this will turn into. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Thanks so the story sounds good so far? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Yeah I am quiet waiting to see how you will continue it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 currently i'm working on the first proper installment it shall be calledPart I - Losing Control Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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