Mod David Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 The set is not made yet.So far I have one card.I am shure the grammer is not perfect so if you can help me fix it I would enjoy it.First card so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 Wow. I hope you are not really a Moderator. First click the "Effect" box on cardmaker for the effect card style, it's "lose" not "loose." and i think it's a bit overpowered... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mod David Posted December 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 I dont get your post.I put looses not loose,and dont be flaming me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 and in card effects, Lp is spelled out, Life Points but other than that, 9/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 I don't get the effect. so when it attacks directly, your opponent only loses 100 Life Poins, or does he/she lose 1700, or what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mod David Posted December 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 the opp looses 100 lp.So how would I write that loses life points? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 I'm not flaming you-I'm trying to help you. GAWD. It's "lose". Period. Sweet and simple. Or rather, this is what your card should say: "This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, inflict 100 points of additional damage to your opponent's Life Points." ..Or something similar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mod David Posted December 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 OK thank you fixing it.Would I get flamed for making like 10 cards of the same image accept recoloring it like white for soul hunter of air? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 Indeed. Besides taht would be flat, 2D, and boring. Half the fun is finding the pics! (Grimaces as a muscle twitches) :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 Hmm.... good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mod David Posted December 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 I was going to use that reaper for like 9 more cards and than make cards to help them but I guess it isnt a good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 I was going to use that reaper for like 9 more cards and than make cards to help them but I guess it isnt a good idea. you can do whatever you want =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mod David Posted December 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 I am going to work on another card tommarow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gungeransu Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 "This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card, destroy it immediately. The amount of Battle Damage this card inflicts to your opponent's Life Points is increased by 100 points." Or something like that. I'm not sure of the last part, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 pretty good actually =D4.5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mod David Posted December 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gungeransu Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 FIRE monsters are usually associated with Direct Damage, but I don't know about this guy. He seems like someone who can only be Special Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Not bad, 100 additional points seems rather pointless, for a 5 star monster. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.