DDRGHKH Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Previously, on Yu-Gi-Oh! X, Kidd escaped Sector Security and out of the pipeline into New Domino City. 5 Days later... Kidd: How did Sector Security get guns?Mito: Why the hell are you asking me?Kidd: Because you know almost every single arms dealer in the freakin world.Mito: Right, but not a single arms dealer I know would ever sell guns to Sector Security.Kidd: So we don't have a single clue of how Sector Security ever got guns?Mito: Pretty Much.Kidd: Dammit! Are you sure?Mito: Yep.(Explosion Sound)Kidd: What the hell was that?Mito: That sounded like an RPG going off.Kidd: Oh don't tell me.Kidd looked behind him to find out that Sector Security actually has RPG's.Kidd: Aw, sheet. To Be Continued...[/b][/i][/u]Brought to you by the new Stardust Overdrive booster pack Contains the last 3 Earthbound Immortals! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 this is in script format and is a new chapter in a separate thread instead of in the same thread. this is two times that you broke the forum rules. i don't have anything against you or your fic, but you have to do much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 legendhiro said it better than I was going to say it and advice check other peoples fan fics like check the one that made you want to make one then you will know what to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 NO SCRIPT FORMAT! In other words don't do stuff like:Bob: I like cake.Billy: Me too! Something like that should be like:"I like cake." Bob said. "Me too!" Billy replied. But the first example is a bit boring. But I'm too bored to do anything half as good as I'm suppose to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDRGHKH Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Don't worry, I make Yu-Gi-Oh! X so awesome, that it will blow you away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Legendhiro's fan fics are great.You could look at it well I looked at his yugioh DA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Nothing can blow me away*. Script Format is banned. Your first chapter was a little OK but the chapters you're posting now are bad. *= Except a 1000000 word chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Nothing can blow me away*. Script Format is banned. Your first chapter was a little OK but the chapters you're posting now are bad. *= Except a 1000000 word chapter. Is this a challenge? I'm sorry, but, not worth the 15 seconds I wasted reading this. Script format also was banned a few months ago by the whims of fellow members. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marshmallon Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 how do you make a post mmmmmmmmmmmmmm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 TC: me thinks i r awsumLarry: I don't. Get lost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Lol everyones posting here more because of the thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Lol everyones posting here more because of the thing. Flaming can have 2 different outcomes:-TC gets better at writing.-TC leaves YCM.Both outcomes are good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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