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This is what I've got so far for the prologue....I did it through Dawn's point of view (which won't be done with any of the chapters). I'm still deciding if I should put the battle on this one or wait until the 1st chapter?

[spoiler=Prologue]

Operation 0: Rescue

It was a beautiful Saturday, the first day of Summer Vacation to. I had my entire summer planned out; spend times with friends, finish my homework early this time, if I have free time spend it on the net, but more importantly become part of something more important. But…….For the first time in 3 years my family decided to take a vacation and of all places to the old campgrounds.

 

Of course like any other teenager who’s had their phone taken away, I find myself bored to death just staring out the car window.

 

“Dawn if you want you can use my laptop.”

 

“Really!? Thanks dad!”

 

Saved, finally a way to get rid of my boredom and I may find that thing again… Thinking back it is still actually pretty weird. It happened only one week ago. I was finishing up my homework on the computer when an animated egg popped up on the screen.

 

“Oh great a virus, easy enough to delete.” When I was about to trash it the craziest thing happened.

 

“To the trash you go….Wait it….it hatched!? What in the world is this thing, it looks like a funny helmet wearing bat?”

 

The worst part about that was it ate my homework. “Hmmmmm…” I had to start all over too.

 

“Here we are everyone ready to go?” My mom asked over excitedly as we came into view.

 

As we slowed to a stop I realized that nobody else was there.

 

“We’re all alone today, what a weird feeling.” I said taking in the beautiful forest scenery.

 

Both my parents started to unpack the car and set up the picnic things when I realized I forgot to turn the laptop off.

 

“I’ll be right back.” I told my mom as I hurried back to the car.

 

When I got there I simply grabbed it and was about to hit the power button when I noticed one of dad’s programs came up. Usually I wouldn’t pay any attention but this wasn’t like the others; it was showing a chart with readings going sky high and a ringing noise that sounded a lot like emergency bells. Without a second thought I grabbed the laptop and ran back to my parents. When I got there I was out of breath (I still don’t know why I ran) and trying to explain what happened before handing over the laptop.

 

“D…da….dad something is….something is wrong with the computer.” I told him handing over the laptop finally getting my breath back.

 

It was an unsettling and eerie feeling see my smiling dad’s face turn into a shock of disbelief and horror. I can’t really remember how he tried to explain it, something about digital pulses and materialization. I have never seen anyone type as fast as he did after that, you would have thought he himself was a computer.

 

Suddenly the wind picked up and a beautiful aurora appeared in the sky. My parents and I stared at it; my dad had stopped typing given up probably. As we looked on a bright flash on the ground made me cover my face with my arms, temporarily blinding me. When the light faded I put my arms down to see the same bat like thing hovering….but it was real!

 

“Well, well, well, so this is the human world not bad. It’ll do nicely for my master.” The bat said.

 

My mom screamed as it spoke, to be honest if I could’ve spoke I would screamed too. The bat turned towards us and snickered revealing its bright yellow eyes, sharp teeth, and a skull in the middle of its forehead. It spoke again introducing itself as DemiDevimon.

 

My dad had moved in front of me and had found a branch to fight the little bat. To which the bat simply laughed off and brought out a huge dart from behind its back. The bat flew up and then drove straight towards dad yelling, “Demi Dart!”

 

I guess out of instinct I turned and grabbed the picnic basket and threw as hard as I could at the thing. With DemiDevimon still yelling the food hit his foot making him drop the dart. He turned to me as my dad took a massive swing and when hit sent the monster flying straight into a tree. As my family cheered the creature stood back up with the worst laugh I had ever heard.

 

“You think a weak human can beat a digimon? Think again….” As he said that he started glowing and dad’s computer made a louder sound.

 

“DemiDevimon digivolve to………..Devimon!”

 

After the light faded the bat was gone! But even worse a vampire took its place! This time no one screamed or even made a sound, that thing had just transformed…

 

“Now humans get ready to feel the true power of the digital world.” Devimon said as he approached slowly.

 

My dad charged at it and took another swing at it. The vampire easily smashed it and hit dad into the air and across the picnic table. As the ‘digimon’ laughed he came towards me and my mom, but not before another one of dad’s programs popped up and started making a chirping sound. With the aurora still in the sky the wind picked up again but it wasn’t like the first one. Devimon also had stopped and was confused by what was happening. All of a saddened all of it stopped and everything was silent. The vampire turned his attention back to us and took one step before it happened…..

 

It had the sound of the old sci-fi films when the aliens were being beamed to their ship but it looked like a rippling of water, but it was right over our heads! Soon enough my day got even weirder when a boy and another monster fell from the ripple in the sky. With a loud thud the black haired, oddly dressed boy hit the ground.

 

“That defiantly didn’t go as planned.” He said as he got up with his hand on his head. The creature that came with him used its ears to fly up and land on his shoulder. It wasn’t a scary one either; actually it was pretty cute looking. Just then he looked around, his eyes went over my mom, then my dad, and finally me. When he looked at me he winked and smiled asking.

 

“I hope I’m not interrupting anything, haha.”

 

 

 

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If it's the club RP, Chapter 1 should be hell long.

 

By the way, the prologue is confusing. So this boy is on the computer and then an egg shows up. He's about to drag it to the recycle bin when suddenly it hatches into a bat with a helmet. It then somehow eats the boy's homework while still being inside a computer?

 

Everything is messed up, including your grammar. And you forgot commas too in your dialogue. ^_^

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If it's the club RP' date=' Chapter 1 should be hell long.

 

By the way, the prologue is confusing. So this boy is on the computer and then an egg shows up. He's about to drag it to the recycle bin when suddenly it hatches into a bat with a helmet. It then somehow eats the boy's homework while still being inside a computer? [b']Facepalm, first off Dawn is a girl, second homework was on the computer and third digimon eat data. 0.o[/b]

 

Everything is messed up, including your grammar. And you forgot commas too in your dialogue. ^_^Yeah, Microsoft Word has been correcting it when I thought it was right. =/

I'm not much of a grammer person myself....would you mind helping out and proofread/fix the chapters before posted?

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If it's the club RP' date=' Chapter 1 should be hell long.

 

By the way, the prologue is confusing. So this boy is on the computer and then an egg shows up. He's about to drag it to the recycle bin when suddenly it hatches into a bat with a helmet. It then somehow eats the boy's homework while still being inside a computer? [b']Facepalm, first off Dawn is a girl, second homework was on the computer and third digimon eat data. 0.o[/b] How are we supposed to know that?

 

Everything is messed up, including your grammar. And you forgot commas too in your dialogue. ^_^Yeah, Microsoft Word has been correcting it when I thought it was right. =/

I'm not much of a grammer person myself....would you mind helping out and proofread/fix the chapters before posted? Too lazy. Right now, I'm learning how to draw manga with the help of one of my christmas presents.

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