So...there is 2 baboons, but no forest?

[-Doodle]

Blue Baboon, Hunter of the Forest [EARTH]●

Level 7 ●●●●●●●

[beast\Effect]

When a Beast-Type monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Discard 2 cards from your hand to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.

2600\1800

 

Little Baboon of the forest [EARTH]●

level 3 ●●●

[beast\Effect]

Once per turn, you can add one level 7 Beast-Type monster from your deck to your hand. Then, destroy this card.

1400\600

 

Black Baboon, Ninja of the forest [EARTH]●

Level 4 ●●●●

[beast\Effect]

When this card is face-up on the field and a beast type monster you control is destroyed, You can discard the top 3 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard and special summon that monster during you next Standby Phase.this effect can only be activated Once per turn.

1400\600

 

Baboon's Forest

[X] Field Spell card

During Each of your Stanbye Phases,destroy this card or reveal on "Baboon" monster from your hand.

During the End Phase, if a Beast type-monster(s) was destroyed this turn, you can select and activate one of these effects:

● Gain 500 Life points. ● Return one removed from play Beast-Type Monster to your Graveyard. ● Add one "Baboon" Card from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

I'll Continue later

[Archelaus]

Black is really abusable and somewhat broken.

 

EDIT: Baboon forest is also broken.

[-Doodle]

Yeah i kinda thought it'll be broken :\

anyway is it ok now?

[Kyosuke Kiryu]

the monsters dont have ATK or DEF O_o

[-Doodle]

Edited alittle bit

S: i cant belive i forgot ATK\DEF

[玄魔の王]

[spoiler=OCG edits and my opinions]

Blue Baboon, Hunter of the Forest [EARTH]●

Level 7 ●●●●●●●

[beast\Effect]

When a Beast-Type monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Discard 2 cards from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard.

2600\1800

Fine

 

Little Baboon of the forest [EARTH]●

level 3 ●●●

[beast\Effect]

Once per turn, you can add one level 7 Beast-Type monster from your deck to your hand. Then, destroy this card.

1400\600

Does thing thing miss the timing for the bigger guys? If not, it needs to

 

Black Baboon, Ninja of the forest [EARTH]●

Level 4 ●●●●

[beast\Effect]

Each time a Beast-Type monster you control is destroyed, you can send 2 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard to Special summon it during you next Standby Phase.

1800\1000

Definitely broken. Add higher cost or a drawback

 

Baboon's Forest

[+] Field Spell card

During the End Phase, if a Beast type-monster(s) was destroyed this turn, you can select and activate one of these effects:

● Gain 500 Life points. ● Return one removed from play Beast-Type Monster to your Graveyard. ● Add one card from your Graveyard to your hand.

Last effect needs costs

 

 

 

Not bad, but follow as said. For now, 7/10.

[-Doodle]

I edited again and thank you Genma no Ou^^

Is it ok now?

[Archelaus]

Black is a bit balanced now but still, its returning effect for a beast-type makes it a bit OP'ed.

 

Forest is also a bit balanced, but sadly, I think it's last effect makes it OP'ed.

[-Doodle]

Changed the black,and the forest,it was supposed to be like this i just forgot writing "Baboon"..

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but i still think there's some OCG errors so fix it if you can please..

[-Griffin]

Personally, I think that the origional version of Black Baboon was just fine as it was, it required him to be face-up so 90% of the time your opponent would just destroy him before another Beast. The word "discard" doesn't need a capital in the first card. The word "Deck" should be capitalised in the second card.

Third card should be:

When this card is face-up on the field and a Beast-Type monster you control is destroyed, You can send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon that monster during you next Standby Phase. This effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

I changed "and" to "to", it makes it a cost but seems to fit the card better.

 

Forest should be:

During each of your Standby Phases, destroy this card or reveal on "Baboon" monster in your hand.

During the End Phase, if a Beast-Type monster was destroyed this turn, you can select and activate one of the following effects:

● Gain 500 Life Points.

● Return one removed from play Beast-Type monster to your Graveyard.

● Add one "Baboon" card from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

Seems a little UP'd, except the last effect. I'd add something to send any 1 Beast-Type monster from your Deck to your Graveyard instead of the first effect.

[玄魔の王]

Personally' date=' I think that the original version of Black Baboon was just fine as it was, it required him to be face-up so 90% of the time your opponent would just destroy him before another Beast. The word "discard" doesn't need a capital in the first card. The word "Deck" should be capitalized in the second card.

 

[b']Um... free revival every turn is balanced? (Deck mill is not a cost these days.)[/b]

 

Third card should be:

Once per turn, Wwhen this card is face-up on the field and a Beast-Type monster you control is destroyed, You can send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon that monster during you next Standby Phase. This effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

I changed "and" to "to", it makes it a cost but seems to fit the card better.

 

Forest should be:

During each of your Standby Phases, destroy this card or reveal one "Baboon" monster in your hand. During the End Phase, if a Beast-Type monster was destroyed this turn, you can select and activate one of the following these effects:

● Gain 500 Life Points.

● Return one removed from play Beast-Type monster to your Graveyard.

● Add one "Baboon" card from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

Seems a little UP'd, except the last effect. I'd add something to send any 1 Beast-Type monster from your Deck to your Graveyard instead of the first effect.

I'll agree with that assessment.

[-Griffin]

Personally' date=' I think that the original version of Black Baboon was just fine as it was, it required him to be face-up so 90% of the time your opponent would just destroy him before another Beast. The word "discard" doesn't need a capital in the first card. The word "Deck" should be capitalized in the second card.

 

[b']Um... free revival every turn is balanced? (Deck mill is not a cost these days.)[/b]

 

Third card should be:

Once per turn, Wwhen this card is face-up on the field and a Beast-Type monster you control is destroyed, You can send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon that monster during you next Standby Phase. This effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

I changed "and" to "to", it makes it a cost but seems to fit the card better.

 

Forest should be:

During each of your Standby Phases, destroy this card or reveal one "Baboon" monster in your hand. During the End Phase, if a Beast-Type monster was destroyed this turn, you can select and activate one of the following these effects:

● Gain 500 Life Points.

● Return one removed from play Beast-Type monster to your Graveyard.

● Add one "Baboon" card from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

Seems a little UP'd, except the last effect. I'd add something to send any 1 Beast-Type monster from your Deck to your Graveyard instead of the first effect.

I'll agree with that assessment.

 

Except it's not free revival every turn. It's free revival if your opponent is an idiot and chooses to destroy a monster other than Black Baboon. The original effect only worked while Black Baboon was face-up and couldn't revive himself, so he'd just end up getting removed from the field first, which isn't hard with his ATK.

[玄魔の王]

Personally' date=' I think that the original version of Black Baboon was just fine as it was, it required him to be face-up so 90% of the time your opponent would just destroy him before another Beast. The word "discard" doesn't need a capital in the first card. The word "Deck" should be capitalized in the second card.

 

[b']Um... free revival every turn is balanced? (Deck mill is not a cost these days.)[/b]

 

Third card should be:

Once per turn, Wwhen this card is face-up on the field and a Beast-Type monster you control is destroyed, You can send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon that monster during you next Standby Phase. This effect can only be activated once per turn.

 

I changed "and" to "to", it makes it a cost but seems to fit the card better.

 

Forest should be:

During each of your Standby Phases, destroy this card or reveal one "Baboon" monster in your hand. During the End Phase, if a Beast-Type monster was destroyed this turn, you can select and activate one of the following these effects:

● Gain 500 Life Points.

● Return one removed from play Beast-Type monster to your Graveyard.

● Add one "Baboon" card from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

Seems a little UP'd, except the last effect. I'd add something to send any 1 Beast-Type monster from your Deck to your Graveyard instead of the first effect.

I'll agree with that assessment.

 

Except it's not free revival every turn. It's free revival if your opponent is an idiot and chooses to destroy a monster other than Black Baboon. The original effect only worked while Black Baboon was face-up and couldn't revive himself, so he'd just end up getting removed from the field first, which isn't hard with his ATK.

 

It's also not hard to get out 2 of them, in which case you could revive the first with the second.

[-Griffin]

It'd go like this:

* They destroy your Black Bab#1

* You discard 2 cards and it'll revive during the Standby Phase

* They destroy Black Bab#2

* You can't revive #2 because there are no other Black Baboon's on the field

 

OR

 

* They destroy both at once (Lightning Vortex, Judgement Dragon, Black Rose Dragon, ect)

* You cannot revive either

 

Two of them doesn't create a loop, at all, and was balanced to begin with. 2 Dupe Frogs would make better protection.

[玄魔の王]

It'd go like this:

* They destroy your Black Bab#1

* You discard 2 cards and it'll revive during the Standby Phase

* They destroy Black Bab#2

* You can't revive #2 because there are no other Black Baboon's on the field

 

OR

 

* They destroy both at once (Lightning Vortex' date=' Judgment Dragon, Black Rose Dragon, etc)

* You cannot revive either

 

Two of them doesn't create a loop, at all, and was balanced to begin with. 2 Dupe Frogs would make better protection.

[/quote']

 

Vortex, really?

 

Either way, the monster gives the ability to revive monsters that are powerful enough to browbeat opponents, and for no cost at all. Even if they create a time lapse, they still allow for continuous field presence.

[Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP]

Where's teh King Baboon D=

 

Anyway, I liek dis. 8/10

[-Griffin]

Genma, they don't allow for much field presence. They opponent can just attack a Black Baboon and he will get no effect, and if you get 2, then you only end up protecting one of them, and for a single turn.

[玄魔の王]

Genma' date=' [b']they don't[/b] allow for much field presence. They opponent can just attack a Black Baboon and he will get no effect, and if you get 2, then you only end up protecting one of them, and for a single turn.

 

The existing Baboons only allow so much also, and yet the first is Limited and the Second will also be either Limited or Banned.

[-Griffin]

The existing Baboon has become unlimited and the other one is a lot worse than him...