ExplodingClay Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Seto Kaiba has gathered the 8 strongest duelists in the world to battle in a great tournament. Yugi Motou, Seto Kaiba, Jaden Yuki, Zane Truesdale, Aster Phoenix, Jhesse Anderson, Yusei Fudo, and (yours truely) ExplodingClay have gathered to Face off. The rules are simple: Matches are determined by a random draw and each duelist can only use one banned card in their decks. And then, the Superstar Tournament begins!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 1. You use an author insert. 2. Why are these eight guys coming together? How are they in the same time period? Magic tournament? BULL. 3. Your capitalization is weird. 4. Attachments aren't allowed. And besides, it looks to me like it's just a picture of Deidara, by not clicking on it. Uhh, WHY!?!? 5. Superstar Tournament? That doesn't sound AWESOME enough. 6. Seto Kaiba gathers himself. It needs work already. WOW, this is gonna need work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExplodingClay Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 funk You!The tournament consists of 3 rounds. He who wins the contest wins the prize card. Good luck. Let the dueling begin!_____________________________________________________________Prize Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Jeez. Your reply just set the future of this thing in stone. This has no potential. You don't want to improve it an it sucks and makes no sense, so you're going down the wrong path. It's happened many times before. Just listen to her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExplodingClay Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 funk you too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Please read this rule, Mr. Narutocharactermanonayugiohforummakingitlookawkwardlikeallofthoseotherpeoplelikethat. The Jack Witt Clause You must be able to take criticism for your fanfic. Neg-repping a person just because they gave you a bad review or told you that your fanfic was bad in any other way is NOT OK. And most definitely, you should NOT REPORT IT. Instead, learn to live the comments and improve from them. Now, you can't seem to handle any sort of criticism, so you've just broken that rule a tad bit there. LEARN FROM YOUR MISTAKE AND STOP BEING SO... SO... RUDE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExplodingClay Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Do you think I care what you say? funk off! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Sheesh, trolls nowadays just aren't as tactful as they used to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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