Guest Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 So this week at my school (I go to art school btw) we started to write our own lyrics, yesterday being my first time ever writing a song. Wanted to know if anyone else on here wrote lyrics oh and i wanted to post what i wrote yesterday :P This is murder, this is for pride.You have shattered it all with your lies!This is sorrow, this is death.The rider will come with hate in his gaze,Waiting to kill you, setting it all to a blaze! We shall never forget your ever lasting sin,We shall strike when the lights grow dim.Forever burning, forever dying,We know the end draws near! You shall rot with little remorse.You will burn for what you did.This is the day that you will die,For we will finally win. Do you remember what you did?Do you bleed for your sins?Will it truely matter, aren't you already dead?This will forever be the end,For I'll kill you again! Death will make you bleed with his haunted steed,waiting for you to cry for a final goodbye.You will forever die for your crimes. We shall never forget your ever lasting sin,We shall strike when the lights grow dim.Forever burning, forever dying,We know the end draws near! Now within your cold dark cellYou will see the other side of me.The anger, the blood, the loss.The glory of laughing at your pleesFor I've finally won. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LewieGee Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 You shall rot with little remorse. That's a good line.I write lyrics too, though usually more abstract. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 I do too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 I write lyrics too. I write songs as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 I like your lyrics alot. I used to write lyrics once upon a time, then I switched to poetry and ditched both in the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 I don't, but you're pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 These are nice, but no I don't write.I beatbox though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 They would get my posting rights taken away, right master? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 I write both lyrics, and poetry, I used to write lyrics all the time, but my poetry seems to be gradually replacing that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyosuke Kiryu Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 I write songs. I love the song of the acoustic guitar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 I've written roughly 25 songs and have like 5 recorded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 I write lyrics too' date=' though usually more abstract.[/quote'] I do too. I write lyrics too. I write songs as well. I write songs. I love the song of the acoustic guitar. I've written roughly 25 songs and have like 5 recorded. You guys all write lyrics.But you don't post 'em.Why?X_x They would get my posting rights taken away' date=' right master?[/quote'] Lol if it's porngrind then yes probably.xD Shadius: This is not bad at all really. Some of the lines seem a tiny bit forced (This will forever be the end - For I'll kill you again!) but I guess it'd make a nice Metalcore tune. Or maybe something like Ex-Deo, battlefield revenge stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 My lyrics suck, they're all sappy and emo, but hey, they exist, and they're a great emotional output. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 maybe i'll post some tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Crimson King Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Here's a song I tried to write: It all started a long time agoAround what time, I really don't knowMy life has changed around that timeI have not since commited a crime "You have no say""Right here you stay""Surrender your life""Pick up the knife" My life was crushed a long time agoJust how long, I really don't knowI have been living a lie, and living it wrongThe time has come now to edit my wrong "Under the knife""You have no life""We take it away""You have no say" I realized that my life was a lieI will run, I will fight, but I never will dieThe things I was told corrupted my mindThe truth I now see, no longer I'm blind "We still have control""You don't ask us why""If it's the answer you seek""Time to say goodbye" "You have no say""Right here you stay""Surrender your life""Pick up the knife" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyosuke Kiryu Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Oh Opal, you want me to post my lyrics.Tis' Pizza btw. Huh? DO YA. DO YA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 I write lyrics and rap. You ain't half bad Matt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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