Dark Lightning Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 [align=center] Card must be FIRE and must have a REAL-TYPE. I am one of those people who can't stand Fake-Types...sorry... I'll go against the 1st person to post their card. When I get my opponent I'll post my card... [spoiler=Voters]VOTES MUST BE DESCRIPTIVE.Don't just vote, you need a reason... [spoiler=My Card]Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from you hand. When this card attacks a monster in DEF position, it can attack again this turn. When this card is attacked you may destroy 1 FIRE monster that you control in order to negate that attack. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell cards.When either of these effects was used, choose 1 monster that you control and remove it from play. [spoiler=DeMeNTeD's Card]Effect: If this card was Special Summoned, you can select 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster on the field (except this card) and have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by battle and your opponent controls more face-down Spell or Trap Cards than you do, remove this card from play. If this card was removed from play this way, the attacking monster cannot attack during your opponent's next Battle Phase. [/align] [spoiler=Prizes]Winner gets 3 REPS from Loser [spoiler=End Date]It Ends when 1 of us reaches 10 Votes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 I'll face you. Effect:If this card was Special Summoned, you can select 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster on the field (except this card) and have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by battle and your opponent controls more face-down Spell or Trap Cards than you do, remove this card from play. If this card was removed from play this way, the attacking monster cannot attack during your opponent's next Battle Phase. Btw, you need prizes and an end date. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Demented? Are you serious? *Prizes and End Date added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 demented a few reasons first off i dont want to sound noobish but his pic really is much bttr.second i cannot find any ocg errors in his card while in legendary lightnings he makes errors like"DEF position" when it should say "Defense Position" Also legendary lightning says "When either of these effects was used" when you should use "is" in place of "was" and "activated" instead of "used" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 demented a few reasons first off i dont want to sound noobish but his pic really is much bttr.second i cannot find any ocg errors in his card while in legendary lightnings he makes errors like"DEF position" when it should say "Defense Position" Also legendary lightning says "When either of these effects was used" when you should use "is" in place of "was" and "activated" instead of "used"[sarcasm]Thanks for pointing it out [/sarcasm] DeMeNTeD-1LL-0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 ha yea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Let's see. Reasons are: OCG is better. DeMeNTeD's OCG seems once again, flawless. Some OCG errors to point out for Lighting: DEF position = Defense Position. Spell cards = Spell Cards.And DeMeNTeD's card pic is good as well. Vote ----> DeMeNTeD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Both cards have good pics. Though demented's card has better OCG and is a bit more creative. Therefore, I vote demented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muluck Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Legendary Lightning your correct lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from you hand. When this card attacks a monster in Defense Position, it can attack again this turn. When this card is attacked you may destroy 1 FIRE monster that you control in order to negate that attack. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards. When either of these effects are used, choose 1 monster that you control and remove it from play. The fact that you are allowing someone to bring out a 2000 attack monster for only the price of two cards, puts the power advantage of this card at 1 strike, this would have normally been an automatic failure. But, you gave some good down falls, one too many i'm afraid. We'll get to that in a minute.Letting this monster attack twice if it attacked a Defence Positon Monster puts the power advantage of this card at 2 strikes.Aloowing this monsters owner to block an attack by sacrificing 1 FIRE monster, levels the thired effect out keeping the power level of this card at 2 strikes.The fact that this monster is un-affected by spell cards puts the power levels of this card at 3 strikes.The fact that the owner must remove from play 1 monster he or she controls whenever 1 of the above listed effects occur, makes this card extremeley underpowered. Because the owner does not have a choice in using these effects, except for the thired one. Beyond the Playbility aspect you had a couple grammar mistakes, such as the "was" in the last sentence and the incorrect phrasing of "Defense Position". Demented the only thing wrong with your card was the ending structure of the first sentence "and have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase." Therefore my vote has to go towards Demented's Card. Congratulations Demented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 The pics are both very good, I can't make a vote from that. LL has some little OCG errors, but overall not bad OCG. DeMeNTeD has perfect OCG, and a fantastic effect, although LL's is good too.I vote DeMeNTeD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Must I give a reason... I'm running out of stuff to say. Demented's OCG is flawless, like usual. Your picture is more fitting of a spell/trap card, but I don't like demented's picture either, your name seems more creative, but does not exactly suit the picture. sorry. Vote: Demented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Legendary Lightning your correct lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' date=' this card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from you hand. When this card attacks a monster in Defense Position, it can attack again this turn. When this card is attacked you may destroy 1 FIRE monster that you control in order to negate that attack. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards. When either of these effects are used, choose 1 monster that you control and remove it from play. The fact that you are allowing someone to bring out a 2000 attack monster for only the price of two cards, puts the power advantage of this card at 1 strike, this would have normally been an automatic failure. But, you gave some good down falls, one too many i'm afraid. We'll get to that in a minute.Letting this monster attack twice if it attacked a Defence Positon Monster puts the power advantage of this card at 2 strikes.Aloowing this monsters owner to block an attack by sacrificing 1 FIRE monster, levels the thired effect out keeping the power level of this card at 2 strikes.The fact that this monster is un-affected by spell cards puts the power levels of this card at 3 strikes.The fact that the owner must remove from play 1 monster he or she controls whenever 1 of the above listed effects occur, makes this card extremeley underpowered. Because the owner does not have a choice in using these effects, except for the thired one. Beyond the Playbility aspect you had a couple grammar mistakes, such as the "was" in the last sentence and the incorrect phrasing of "Defense Position". [b']Demented the only thing wrong with your card was the ending structure of the first sentence "and have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase."[/b] Therefore my vote has to go towards Demented's Card. Congratulations Demented.But that is itself correct, in terms of OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muluck Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Legendary Lightning your correct lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' date=' this card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from you hand. When this card attacks a monster in Defense Position, it can attack again this turn. When this card is attacked you may destroy 1 FIRE monster that you control in order to negate that attack. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards. When either of these effects are used, choose 1 monster that you control and remove it from play. The fact that you are allowing someone to bring out a 2000 attack monster for only the price of two cards, puts the power advantage of this card at 1 strike, this would have normally been an automatic failure. But, you gave some good down falls, one too many i'm afraid. We'll get to that in a minute.Letting this monster attack twice if it attacked a Defence Positon Monster puts the power advantage of this card at 2 strikes.Aloowing this monsters owner to block an attack by sacrificing 1 FIRE monster, levels the thired effect out keeping the power level of this card at 2 strikes.The fact that this monster is un-affected by spell cards puts the power levels of this card at 3 strikes.The fact that the owner must remove from play 1 monster he or she controls whenever 1 of the above listed effects occur, makes this card extremeley underpowered. Because the owner does not have a choice in using these effects, except for the thired one. Beyond the Playbility aspect you had a couple grammar mistakes, such as the "was" in the last sentence and the incorrect phrasing of "Defense Position". [b']Demented the only thing wrong with your card was the ending structure of the first sentence "and have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase."[/b] Therefore my vote has to go towards Demented's Card. Congratulations Demented.But that is itself correct, in terms of OCG. Oh? Let me ask you a series of question. It says to have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. The End Phase of what turn? This turn? Next turn? The turn that wins the game? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Oh man, I'm losing big-time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Legendary Lightning your correct lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' date=' this card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from you hand. When this card attacks a monster in Defense Position, it can attack again this turn. When this card is attacked you may destroy 1 FIRE monster that you control in order to negate that attack. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards. When either of these effects are used, choose 1 monster that you control and remove it from play. The fact that you are allowing someone to bring out a 2000 attack monster for only the price of two cards, puts the power advantage of this card at 1 strike, this would have normally been an automatic failure. But, you gave some good down falls, one too many i'm afraid. We'll get to that in a minute.Letting this monster attack twice if it attacked a Defence Positon Monster puts the power advantage of this card at 2 strikes.Aloowing this monsters owner to block an attack by sacrificing 1 FIRE monster, levels the thired effect out keeping the power level of this card at 2 strikes.The fact that this monster is un-affected by spell cards puts the power levels of this card at 3 strikes.The fact that the owner must remove from play 1 monster he or she controls whenever 1 of the above listed effects occur, makes this card extremeley underpowered. Because the owner does not have a choice in using these effects, except for the thired one. Beyond the Playbility aspect you had a couple grammar mistakes, such as the "was" in the last sentence and the incorrect phrasing of "Defense Position". [b']Demented the only thing wrong with your card was the ending structure of the first sentence "and have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase."[/b] Therefore my vote has to go towards Demented's Card. Congratulations Demented.But that is itself correct, in terms of OCG. Oh? Let me ask you a series of question. It says to have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. The End Phase of what turn? This turn? Next turn? The turn that wins the game?When that effect activates, it means until the End Phase of the turn the effect was activated. I still think DeMeNTeD's OCG is flawless =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 mulock u are good for a 3 starbut when he says that is is part of the NEW ocg to make things simplified and it is an acceted fact that that is how to write it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muluck Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Legendary Lightning your correct lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' date=' this card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from you hand. When this card attacks a monster in Defense Position, it can attack again this turn. When this card is attacked you may destroy 1 FIRE monster that you control in order to negate that attack. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards. When either of these effects are used, choose 1 monster that you control and remove it from play. The fact that you are allowing someone to bring out a 2000 attack monster for only the price of two cards, puts the power advantage of this card at 1 strike, this would have normally been an automatic failure. But, you gave some good down falls, one too many i'm afraid. We'll get to that in a minute.Letting this monster attack twice if it attacked a Defence Positon Monster puts the power advantage of this card at 2 strikes.Aloowing this monsters owner to block an attack by sacrificing 1 FIRE monster, levels the thired effect out keeping the power level of this card at 2 strikes.The fact that this monster is un-affected by spell cards puts the power levels of this card at 3 strikes.The fact that the owner must remove from play 1 monster he or she controls whenever 1 of the above listed effects occur, makes this card extremeley underpowered. Because the owner does not have a choice in using these effects, except for the thired one. Beyond the Playbility aspect you had a couple grammar mistakes, such as the "was" in the last sentence and the incorrect phrasing of "Defense Position". [b']Demented the only thing wrong with your card was the ending structure of the first sentence "and have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase."[/b] Therefore my vote has to go towards Demented's Card. Congratulations Demented.But that is itself correct, in terms of OCG. Oh? Let me ask you a series of question. It says to have it gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. The End Phase of what turn? This turn? Next turn? The turn that wins the game?When that effect activates, it means until the End Phase of the turn the effect was activated. I still think DeMeNTeD's OCG is flawless =) That it does, but this is a card contest. The creators should use absolute perfect OCG when putting their cards up on the chopping blocks. Although I can see not a lot of people take the time to actually cover every aspect of the card it self. Thank you for that input ~AuXiLiArY~, I seem to have missed the announcement that this is in NEW OCG. I do apologize, but my vote still stands for Demented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Bump. Need more votes. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:~WhiteTiger~:. Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 LL's in still great but DeMeNTeD's card has better OCG and picture.It was close,but DeMeNTeD wins this battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Still need more votes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Demented your picture is of a guy >.> The only reason I know is because I read the authors description of it him. xD I vote Demented the other card was overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryKing Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Lightning your card is definitly broken.If you paired that card with ANYTHING that forces something into defense mode, and then with defense mode tokens, the card can attack to much, it that was its only effect that might be better... tho i did like your picture, and it has a decent name.DementedIt's good to see your still making cards as good as you used to.I'm not great at OCG but from what I can tell its all good for Demented. Vote------Demented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Sorry but I'm gonna have to go with Demented's card as well for the stated reasons. His OCG is flawless and while both card's are kind of boring (in my opinion) it's his card that would be better played. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Demented your picture is of a guy >.> It looked like a woman to me. =S Anyway, that's 10 votes, so I guess this can be locked now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Demented your picture is of a guy >.> It looked like a woman to me. =S Anyway' date=' that's 10 votes, so I guess this can be locked now.[/quote'] The artist said something about drawing a Shojo style, usually involving everything to look feminine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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