Skippy Canoe Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Well, my story is at a HUGE cliffhanger. One of the characters possibly died, but it isn't revealed whom. When a Dæmon dies, flames come out of them. Here's an excerpt from the Fan Fic. "Let's go then," Mandy said. After she said this, everyone began changing. Eve formed into a crow, Elle into a cardinal, and Mel into a dove. After this, they took off from the roof. ... It was now about fifteen minutes from taking off. It was quiet. The silence was suddenly broken as each Dæmon was bombarded with screeching, reptilian-looking vultures, followed by a burst of flames. If you know what a Dæmon is, you'll understand, but just to clarify... A Dæmon is pretty much the manifestation of a human's soul in the form of an animal. In other words, an animal that follows them around, and is a part of them. If someone's Dæmon dies, so do they. Elle - Kristen's Dæmon (Female, Female) Eve - Adam's Dæmon (Female, Male) Mandy - Kevin's Dæmon (Female, Male) Mel - Kari's Dæmon (Male, Female) Please post what should happen, as in who dies, or if something else happened. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 You should make something completely random happen, like a gigantic, big-headed cartoon cat-person appears, destroying a large wall. Then the main characters leave it alone, thinking that it could hold no real power or evil, but just then, it becomes the next Big Bad of the series, some regular-sized lady who has control over anything with hair on over 50% of its body! And so, the biggest fight of the series draws near as she summons her bigfoot and chupacabra army to help take over the world (they work for her so that they can inherit the lakes when she rules over everything). And even worse, her daemon's special ability is to be able to turn shadows bright green! How will they ever get past this ability? To be continued in a young man's heart... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 This should be quoted. ^_^ I won't do that, but I may add an extreme twist later. The whole plot of the story is that all the humans are unconscious by a witch spell, and their Dæmons are trying to save them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Aw, man, what a cop-out! Just because my plot was incredibly stupidly idiotic, it can't be used?! That's some bull! That's so wrong, yo! [/sarcasm] Anyways, thanks for your time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Do you have a serious suggestion? ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Whatever, I'll choose then. : P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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