Azwolop Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Characters.... Arron Williams14 years oldDuelist, Anti-Government, Quiet And Cool Unless He's Dueling, Best friend too Matt.DECK: Mokey Mokey Matthew Cain14 years oldDuelist, Lazy, Worrying when needed, Best friend too ArronDECK: Power Beat Down Jerry Oldmaster14 years oldDuelist, Shy, MusicalDECK: Gravekeeper Deck Greg Mca14 years oldDuelist, Gamer, FunnyDECK: Warrior deck Arron's Mum?? years oldMother, Worrying, EmbarresingDECK: ??? Shop Keeper?? years oldElderly, Kind, Kinda scaryDECK: ??? Luke Robinson15 years olddull, big headed, no friendsDECK: Machine Episode One, A New Day As the sun slowly started too rise over the cityscape, making the faces of buildings light up as if on fire, the sun shone into one certain window, and landed upon a dueldisk lying on a simple wooden table. The owner of the dueldisk, was Arron. Arron was well known around the city, mainly for his dueling ability, or simply for his laid back personality, but he was not an average boy. As the sun slowly crept from the table and slid across the room, it shone upon Arron's face, causing his eyes too twitch before making him groan and roll over. Arron: Arghh come on mann... The sounds of the streets were bustling already, although far up from the street, Arron's room was almost silent, that was before... Arron's Mum: ARRON!! GET OUT OF BED ALREADY!! Arron: -Groans- CHILL OUT WOMAN!!!! Arron shouted while his head was muffled in his pillow. But after yet another groan, he finally pulled his head away and slid over too sit on the side of his bed. Arron wiped his eyes and rubbed his face before pushing himself off his bed and walking over too his wardrobe, he scrounged around before pulling out a pair of baggy black jeans and sliding on a plain black shirt. Arron never did dress too impress, and he found anything with a logo was just another way for the Government too sell or advertise there products. Arron fit his fingers through the holes that had been made in his sleeves and then walked over too his window. The view from his room was quite incredible, it saw the whole of the city, but was high enough too see atop of all the buildings, and out to the sea. Arron smiled as the sun slowly rose up into the sky, but yet again the silence was broken Arron's Mum: FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ARRON GET DOWN HERE!!! MATT'S BEEN WAITING FOR AGES!! Arron's head dropped and he sighed, before spinning around and walking towards his door, grabbing his dueldisk from his table on the way out. As Arron got too the bottom of his stairs, he placed his foot on the ground and as he did, he was confronted by his Mum. Arron sarcastically jumped as if she had scared him. Arron: Yeah, so where's Matt? Arron's Mum: He isn't here, and Good morning too you to! Arron: But, you said he was waiting for me? Arron's Mum: Well you had too get out of bed sometime! and i need some milk, run down the shop and get some. As Arron's Mum finished her sentence, she turned away from Arron and walked into the kitchen. Arron groaned, realising he wouldn't be able too get out of it and walked towards the front door. As Arron stepped out the door he looked up into the sky too see a flock of birds glide by, before looking down and walking out into the muddle of pedestrians walking down the street. As Arron dodged in and out of the passer-bys, he got suddenly stopped by a boy around about the same age as himself. The boy had dirty blonde hair and was wearing a green shirt with a pair of scruffy jeans. Arron noticed a dueldisk on the boys right arm, and a trumpet attached too his back by a thin piece of string. ???: Care too join in? The boy asked while handing Arron a flyer of some sort, Arron looked down too see a image of the Dark Magician standing next too large words. " Attention All Duelists, Kaiba Corp Will Be Hosting An All-City Tourname.... " Arron stopped reading and let out a disgust groan, before dropping the flyer and pushing past the Boy, walking into his shoulder on the way. Arron carried on down the street, leaving the Boy standing there confused. Arron had always been a huge fan of dueling, he was a great duelist, but he had never been a fan of the government. This affected Arron's personality alot, the way he talked, the way he looked, and the way he thought, but it made him individual. You could say that he was a hippie, but true to his reputation, Arron hated anything that was fueled by 'The Man'. As Arron walked down through the crowds of people, he switched his view from the sky, to his feet, he never did bother too enjoy the view of the city, but it was hard not too. As the streets started too clear of the crowds of pedestrians, Arron walked out into a huge opening of the city, benches everywhere, cobble-stoned floors and crowds of people watching duels all over the place, it was known as the Hallow. Arron had no idea why but didn't seem important enough too care about. He continued too walk through the center of the Hallow, duels all around him. Random Duelist: I summon Mystical Elf(Mystical Elf|LIGHT|Level 4|Spellcaster|ATK 800|DEF 2000|A delicate elf that lacks offense, but has a terrific defense backed by mystical power.) In Defense mode!... Arron's head glancing from side too side too see the different duels, but still he walked Another Duelist: I activate Dian Keto The Cure Master! (Dian Keto The Cure Master|Spell Card|Normal| Increase your Life Points by 1000 points.)... Until eventually Arron came too a duel that he couldn't just simple walk past, he pushed through a small group of people and observed the two duelists, one alot younger than the other... ??? #1: Haha!! not so cocky now are yah?? I activate Final Flame! (Final Flame|Spell Card|Normal|Inflict 600 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.) Meaning you lose 600 lifepoints! ??? #2: Whaaa?!? A serge of flames launched towards the opposing duelist, searing his lifepoints ??? #2's Lifepoints: 200 (800-600) ??? #2: Dude, that totally hurt, I draw! The duelist launched his hand away from his body in a dramatic way and then pulled his hand towards his face, he smiled. ??? #2: I activa... As the duelist was about too play a card, a elderly woman pushed through the crowd and past Arron, who was still standing there with his arms folded. Elderly Woman: Come on now Jon, it's time too go Jon: But mumm!!! im dueling!!! Jon jumped up and down in a strop ???: Haha don't worry little man, you can go. It was a good duel! lets just say you won. The older looking duelist shouted then winked too the young boy. The boy smiled then ran off with his mum. Arron approached the Older duelist smiling. Arron: What's wrong man?? you losing that much you gotta duel little kids? Arron said cheekily while smiling, he raised his hand out, Matt: Oh! that's real big coming from you! Matt laughed and slapped his hand towards Arron's Arron Heyy atleast you let him have the win, that was righteous Matt: Well that's just the kinda guy i am! Matt smiled at his own joke. Matt: So what you up too man? it's not like you too be up this early. Arron: Haha yeah i know, Mum got me up too go get some milk. Wanna come? Matt: Yeahh sure, why not. A Surprise Encounter After talking about why Matt was dueling a kid about half his height, Arron and Matt stopped outside of a casual looking newsagents, Arron: Yeah alright man I'll be back in a minute Arron walked through the small door, stepping over newspapers on the way into a tiny, crowded box. All that was in there was a counter, and shelves with the shops products crammed on. Shop Keeper: Ohh Hello Arron! are you here for your weekly booster? Arron: Oh yeah i totally forgot about that!, but i also need milk Shop Keeper: Ah no problem The Shop Keeper turned and rooted through some papers and magazines while Arron stood there glancing around the room, wondering how many of those products were out-of-date. The Shop Keeper was a kind old woman, she knew almost everyone in the city, or so she claimed, but no one ever believed her. Shop Keeper: Andd here you go loverly She placed a carton of milk on the counter along with a foil packet that reflected off the dim light. Arron grabbed the carton and put it under his arm, before grabbing the packet and tearing it open. Arron: Hrmmm.... Avatar of the pot? nah... Archloard Zerato, not bad not bad...Mystik Wok! now that's what i needed... the rest just seems too be... yeah rubbish. Matt: YO ARRON!! GET OUT HERE MAN Matt shouted from outside the shop, Arron put the cards in his pocket and ran out the shop, leaping over the newspapers again, and through the narrow door. The bright sun shone into Arron's eyes, causing him too raise his hand too block the light, but as his vision slowly came back, he saw Matt standing with a smaller boy, he looked about the same age as Matt, and seemed too be giving him something. As Arron walked closer he realised who it was, he dragged his feet over next too the boys. ???: So do you wanna join? Matt: Yeah sounds like fun doesn't it Az? The smaller boy turned and faced Arron, ???: Oh, it's you again, may i ask, why you were so rude before? The boy's posh accent annoyed Arron Arron: Why are you handing out these flyers? Your just publishing another of the Governments ways too own everyone in this city, it's a disgrace. Anger was building up in Arron's face Matt: Az, come on calm down, he doesn't know how you feel, and like i said, it could be fun. As the anger slid away from Arron's face, he was looking down at his feet ???: Is there anyway i could persuade you too join in? Arron's head rose and he smiled Arron: What about a duel? Matt: Woooo!! yeah do that!!! that'd be immense!! The younger boy squirmed before smiling, he put the flyers down next too him and lay his trumpet down next too them ???: My name's Jerry by the way. Arron: Hhm, friend's call me Az. Jerry: Alright then, Let's Duel! Arron and jerry both threw their arm out to the side causing both of their dueldisks too light up, Arron's LP: 4000 Jerry's LP: 4000 Arron: You can go first man The two boys both drew 5 cards. Jerry: Don't mind if i do, Jerry flung his arm away from his body, swiping a card in the process, he pulled it up and placed it in his hand. Jerry: Alright then! i place one card face-down in defense mode, then il set myself a face down, your move Arron: Totally righteous move man! Jerry: Ermm... are you alright? you seem different Matt laughed from the sideline, Matt: That's what Arron does man! he's strict and cool on the outside but when he's in a duel, it's like he has a split personality and that's when the true Az comes out! Az: Alright man i guess it's my draw The slightly dopey Az pull a card from his Dueldisk then grinned Az: Well alright man, here we go! I place one card face down, then i'll summon my Mokey Mokey! (Mokey Mokey|LIGHT|Level 1|Fairy|ATK 300 DEF 100| An outcast angel, nobody knows what he is thinking at all, Sometimes he gets made and that is dredful) A blue puff of smoke appeared infront of Az, and after clearing, left what seemed too be a large marshmellow with wings, floating ever so hapily Az: Well seeing as how i just summoned my Mokey Mokey i'll activate me Trap card! The league of uniform nomenclature! (The League of Uniform Nomenclature|Trap Card|Normal|Select 1 face-up Level 2 or lower Normal Monster on your side of the field to activate this card. Special Summon from your Deck to your side of the field as many cards as possible with the same name as the selected monster.) Meaning i get too bring out 2 more of my Mokey pal's! Another two puffs of smoke appeared, again leaving behind 2 Mokey Mokey's, while the trap card disintegrated behind them. Jerry: But... there marshmellows....with... wings? Az: You won't be thinking that next mann, cause check this, i play my Mokey Mokey Smackdown Card! (Mokey Mokey Smackdown|Spell card|Continuous|While a face-up "Mokey Mokey" is on your side of the field, if a Fairy-Type monster on your side of the field is destroyed, the ATK of all "Mokey Mokey" on your side of the field becomes 3000 until the End Phase of this turn.) Jerry: What does that do?? Az: All in good time buddy!, now i think i'll throw 2 face-downs, your go! Jerry was standing there gormlessly, staring at a row of blue flying marshmellows, Jerry: Erm alright then? my draw! great! now i flip my defense monster too reveal Gravekeeper's Spy! (Gravekeeper's Spy|DARK|Level 4|Spellcaster|Effect|ATK 1200 DEF 2000|FLIP: Special Summon 1 Monster Card that includes "Gravekeeper's" in its card name with an ATK of 1500 or less from your Deck.) Allowing me too special summon Gravekeeper's Curse in Attack mode! (Gravekeeper's Curse|DARK|Level 3|Spellcaster|Effect|ATK 800 DEF 800|When this monster is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.) Meaning you lose 500 LP! Az: Duuuude not cool Az raised his arm as a cloud of black smoke shot towards him, but it wasn't strong enough too effect him Az's LP: 3500(-500) Jerry's LP: 4000 Jerry: Now i activate my spell card Secret Pass To The Treasures! (Secret Pass To The Treasures|Spell|Normal|Select 1 face-up monster with an ATK equal to 1000 points or less on your side of the field. During the turn this card is activated, the selected monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.) And i choose Gravekeeper's Curse! now! Attack his lifepoints directly! Az: I activate this righteous trap card man! Go Negate Attack! (Negate Attack|Trap|Counter|Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack. Negate the attack of that 1 monster and end the Battle Phase.) As another round of black smoke shot towards Az, a small hurricane shot out infront of him and absorbed all of the smoke. Jerry: Huh i guess i end my turn then. Az: Totally sweet man, i draw. Now go my Mokey Mokey! attack his Gravekeeper's curse! Jerry: But why?! your Mokey has way less Attack points than my Curse! The blue Marshmellow sprung towards the glowing egyptian, causing itself too get knocked back and destroying itself. Az: Aw man! look what ya did! you killed my little moke! The two remaining Mokey Mokey's on the field, their eyes widened and there skin turned red, they were not happy! Az: You see man, when Mokey Mokey Smackdown is on the field, and a fairy type monster is destroyed, any Moke's that i have on the field, their Attack increases to 3000, pretty sweet huh? The two Mokey Mokey's started bouncing up and down, smoke coming off the top of their head and eyes scrunched up in anger Az: Now i think i'll equip one of my Moke's with this, (Fairy Meteor Crush|Spell|Equip|When a monster equipped with this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.), Now my un-equipped Moke will show your curse his peaceful waves, go Moke! The angry moke opened its mouth and let out a silent roar, but vibrations shook across the field and smashed into Jerry's Gravekeeper's Curse. Az's LP: 3500 Jerry's LP: 1800(-2200) Jerry: I activate my trap! Rite of Spirit! (Rite Of Spirit|Trap|Normal|Select 1 Monster Card that includes "Gravekeeper's" in its card name from your Graveyard and Special Summon it. This card's activation and effect are unaffected by "Necrovalley".) Allowing me too bring back Gravekeeper's Curse in defense mode! Meaning you lose another 500 points! Az's LP: 3000(-500) Jerry's LP: 1800 Az: No matter man! Now go my Moke! Attack his Curse again! And due too Fairy Meteor Crush, the difference between Curse's Defence And Moke's Attack, goes as direct damage to you! The Mokey let out another Silent roar, but just because it was silent, didn't meen it was harmless. Gravekeeper's Curse shattered infront of Jerry's eyes. Az's LP: 3000 Jerry's LP: 0(-2200) The Mokey Mokey's dissapeared as the duel had ended, the small crowd that had been attracted to the duel wandered off, leaving Matt standing there smiling at the sight of such a great duel, Arron, back to his cool, quiet self, walked over too Jerry and smiled Arron: Good duel, i guess that Tournament will be fun, but only aslong as your there Jerry looked up at Arron and smiled. Arron: Come on Matt, we gotta go, Arron turned and walked off with Matt not far behind. Yet again, Jerry was left there standing. ...... Elderly Battle As Arron and Matt continued to walk down the empty street, it slowly started to crowd with the daily rush of workers, running around from shop to shop in search of food, hoping to get back before there lunch break was over. Matt: Yeah dude so how come you we're so harsh on that guy back there? I know your normally grouchy but sheesh! Arron: I dunno really, guess I just woke up in a bad mood. The two continued too talk about the boy they met, while dodging and swirving past the on coming pedestrians, but in Arron's case, just barging through them. -MMMMMMMMMPH.....MMMMMMMMMMMMPH- Matt: Tha your phone? Arron rustled around in his pocket before pulling out a black flip phone. He glanced at the dark red light which was illuminating the small screen before whipping his arm out to the side, making the phone flip open, he pulled it to his ear. Arron: Erm, hello? ???: Yes, Arron? it's Mr Jenkins, your next door neighbour. Arron: -Arghh-.... Yes Mr Jenkins? Mr Jenkins: Yes im sorry to bother, but my wife is complaining about the noise coming from your house, we've told you so many times but can you please tone it down abit, you and your bloody dueling, it doesn't need to be that loud! Arron pulled a confused expression, while Matt wondered what was going on. Arron: Mr Jenkins, your just making it up now, im not even at home, but simply because i do not want too carry on this conversation, I'll say okay, Bye bye then. Arron flipped his phone back over. Matt: Wha' was that about? Arron: It was that idiot Mr Jenkins again, he seems too thin.... Arron stopped and looked at the screen on the front of his phone, Arron: Ooh crap, Mum ain't gunna be happy! I've been way more than i should have been, come on. Arron slid his phone back into his pocket and sprinted down the street, without even lifting his head too see where he was going, obviously causing him too knock into a huge amount of people, Matt confused, trying too keep up. As the two eventually got too Arron's street, they slowed down, Matt still trailing behind. Matt: -Huff- -Huff- Whoooooooo! now that was tiring. Matt was leant over with his hands on his knee's, making sounds as if he was about to die, Arron, being who he is, found it quite comical. Arron: Haha dude, you should really work out ya' know? Matt: Yeah yeah get over yourself 'Mr. Physical'. Arron: You duel as bad as you run. Arron turned and walked towards his door, with a cheeky grin on his face, and Matt trying to think of a comeback. Rising his hand too open the door, Arron paused, ???: Now i summon....! Arron: Wha' the hell? He pushed open the door and stepped in, glancing from side to side to see if he could find the source of the noise, but all he came upon was his Mum in the kitchen. He walked towards her with a suspicious glare. Arron: ....Mum.... you didn't happen to hear anything... strange did you? Matt came walking in behind and sat down at the table. Arron's Mum: No, of course not 'hun. Arron's Mum talked with a calm tone in her voice, but for some strange reason, she didn't move,she was all stiff and she just continued too keep her back faced to Arron, it seemed like she was holding something. Arron: .... Mum... what are you holding? Arron's Mum: Nothing... now go get ready for tea Arron continued too glare at his Mum, knowing something was wrong. Arron: ... Oh look!, what the hell are you doing Matt?! did you just spill sauce over my Mum's favorite table cloth?? Arron's Mum: WHAT!? She spun around amazingly fast and leaped towards the table, her eyes glancing side to side in search of a spill, Arron laughed before looking up at the kitchen counter to where his Mum was concealing, and saw a simple Duel Disk. He walked over and picked it up. Arron: Haha! is this my old Duel Disk? Arron's Mum lifted her head and turned to look at Arron, her face puzzled as if to look for an answer. Arron's Mum: Hrm... yes it is. From the back of the room, Matt stood up, with a large smile on his face. Matt: Wait... so you know how to duel?.... You having a dueling Mum.... haha that's immense. Matt started to drift off, still continually smiling. Arron's Mum: Yes, I've been learning how to duel, well i have been for a while, just recently I've been arranging a deck. Arron: Well how come you kept it secret? Arron's Mum: Because i knew you'd find it embarressing, I mean not every young kid's Mum is a duelist right? Arron: I get where your coming from, but come on! this is great, it means Matt won't be the only suck-ass duelist around here. Arron's Mum: Watch your language!... and HEY!, if your so cocky why don't you duel me?? Arron: Haha! i don't think so Ma', i wouldn't wanna embarress you for your 1st duel... Why not duel Matt? he's more around your rank. Arron started laughing, while his Mum turned and looked at Matt, with an expression on her face as if to say, "How 'bout it?" Matt: Erm... i guess so? but only if i get to have dinner here! Gotta love your chicken! Arron: Haha! this'll be a laugh, Have a good game. Arron whipped his Mum's Duel Disk through the air and into his Mum's arms, She spun around and slid it onto her arm. Arron's Mum/Matt: Let's Duel. ....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Nice :DRly nice! I'll give it a 8/10... you have some long boring blocks, try to shorten them :PAnd work on the colours.... it's confusing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Episode 2 added!! come on ppl it is good xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Wow, you're one of the best fan-fickers on the site... Maybe not as good as God Kaze though. You should add some of your own cards, I can't wait for Mokey Support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Wow! thanks alot!! lol ive been told im good at writing but i didn't expect tht kind of compliment! thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 LOL Jerry got smashed :DBut which @$$ doesn't play Giant Trunade first XD Good episode.And kizzi, you've never read my fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 well maybe jerry just didn't happen too draw a giant trunade! :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 You shouldn't bump threads unless they are on page 2 and it's least a day since you last posted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 my bad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 3, 2007 Report Share Posted December 3, 2007 Plz post Ep3 & Mokey Support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 BUMPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP peoples!!!! come on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Plz post episode three!!!!!!! Your fan-fic's awesome, just add another chapter for God's sake! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 :P like i said man! i probably will at teh weekend. actually, yeah i will, just for yoo :P but then im not gunna write any more unless its popularity picks up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Do you base the characters on YCM members? Can I be in the story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 ermm i was, so i guess u could join, theres a thread i made where u sign up, just look for that, but i dunno if im gunna create any characters from YCM, but go ahead anyway! and btw, did u read it? if so wha u think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 How much do I have to beg you for another Episode/Chapter?!?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 15, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 BUMPPPPP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 BUMPPPPPThere's not really much point bumping unless you add another chapter.The point I'm trying to get across is; ADD ANOTHER FREAKING CHAPTER! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 Nice episodes. I enjoyed reading them. A few grammer issues (like "to" and "too", and "there" and "they're".) but a good read none the less. I especially want to see some new Mokey Mokey support put to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 thanks for the review Kaze, means alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 BUMPPPPPThere's not really much point bumping unless you add another chapter.The point I'm trying to get across is; ADD ANOTHER FREAKING CHAPTER!Add the chapter already! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 lol dude i've left the site, don't expect another chapter until i get amazingly bored one day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Short Ep added, so BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Interesting :) Reaload your battery and continue XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Awesome!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.The lack of duels were disappointing, but the plot and suspense made up for it. 9/10.Oh, and I guess you were amazingly bored, yeah? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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