SushiTheLegend Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 [align=center] Cloudian - The Ragged ReaperThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Cloudian" monsters from your Graveyard. When this card attacks, you can place 1 Fog Counter on a face-up monster on the field. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can remove 1 Fog Counter from the field to Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. When a monster with a Fog Counter is destroyed by battle, except by this card, you can add 1 "Cloudian" monster with 1500 or less ATK from your Graveyard to your hand. My second round entry for the Battle Royale hosted by Arc. So yeah I was hunting Nightmarian's archive when I came across a Cloudian like image which is why I chose to create a Cloudian support. Now I've probably screwed this up but I'm quite proud of the result, anyway enjoy my first Cloudian monster.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 I like it. Pic is great. OCG is good. Might be 1 error. Effect is nice. ~9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Thanks for the rate Leo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Its first effect cancels the Graveyard summon out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Hm... According to lolwikia. Cloudians are either WATER Fairy-Type or WIND Aqua-Type, but I guess WIND Fairy-Type is just as good. (Just thought I'd point that out) Normally, Cloudians aren't able to be destroyed by battle while in Attack Position and destroyed by their own effect while in Defense Position. Maybe tie that into your card in some way? If you do, you would have to change your 3rd sentence. As your card effect is now, the 2nd and 3rd sentence go against each other because in the 2nd sentence you say it can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Cloudians while in the 3rd sentence, you say you can Special Summon it. I like that it can search your Deck almost every, if not all, Cloudians. This is a great card overall, just make sure your effects don't go against each other and that if you make a card that goes with an archetype, you follow that archetype's similarities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Good card, I like the image, it fits the name nicely, and the OCG is fine. As mentioned by Monkey though, the 2nd and 3rd sentences contradict each other. Maybe just add "or by its own effect" at the end of the first sentence. It seems relatively balanced otherwise. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Actually according to general OCGness, the first means for the first summon, the other would take effect AFTER that. But I do see your point on that, I also checked a few of the cards and Eye of the Typhoon didn't have that effect Monkey I think. Also Ghost Fog has no mention of it either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Really good card, awesome effects and pics. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Actually according to general OCGness' date=' the first means for the first summon, the other would take effect AFTER that. But I do see your point on that, I also checked a few of the cards and Eye of the Typhoon didn't have that effect Monkey I think. Also Ghost Fog has no mention of either.[/quote'] Ok, but I would just clear that effect up just so somebody doesn't mistake that effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Well since it was for my entry, I can't really change it now. x.x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Oh I see... But for future uses, clear that part up and give it 50 DEF for the lulz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 shame it has 0 def for it. The picture looks awesome and the effect is balanced, where did you get the pic? 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Nightmarian's Image Archive in Showcase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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