Crystal Alien Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Turns, Out i can't write for crap so. You won't see meh, in the Fan-Fic section inless i'm reading em. - Ryan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 First, let me start with unoriginal title. : P Horrible grammar and spelling, and I don't forgive you for that. I will not continue reading this. Not impressed. -_- Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Alien Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 First' date=' let me start with unoriginal title. : P Horrible grammar and spelling, and I don't forgive you for that. I will not continue reading this. Not impressed. -_- Sorry.[/quote'] Sorry, I fail'd, You where right about the plot, but no the first Chapter, I did run that threw it. :D Sorry for any Grammar, Or spelling errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Lol... No. And I saw the sorry thing. Why do you think I said I don't forgive you for them? : P Any bolded things are corrected. This story may involve Yugi in way far.There was one dark day' date=' one very late night. When yu-gi-oh first [b']entered[/b] the world, as Shadow Duels. These three cards, where the first ' cards ' to appear on this earth, and yet no one knows they're even real. These three cards, where supposed to be hidden, forever not to be found. These were only emergency cards, for the kings of the land, these cards were locked away, in a box that had an 8 digit combo lock. This case was deemed unbreakable, and it could never be guessed by any human, or thing that tries to get in. These cards names where, ( You'll have to read to find out ) supposedly, lost in history for ever. 'Till or Until one day when a explorer, that was looking through the bog he had found a wooden board underneath his feet while hiking threw the swamp. To his surprise when he went to pull it up the water he was on sucked in, and made him fall into the hole. When they found him 4 days later he was mumbling about a great power, that was under this hole, but the problem was he couldn't prove any of it so he was labeled as insane, and thrown into a mental hospital, but he forgot to seal the path that led to the cards, so any one that was, or wasn't looking might just fall into their own luck. Sorry, I got too bored of correcting all of the errors, and gave up on the first chapter. Don't lie about spell-checking, because either you lied, or it didn't work. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Alien Posted October 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Lol... No. And I saw the sorry thing. Why do you think I said I don't forgive you for them? : P Any bolded things are corrected. This story may involve Yugi in way far.There was one dark day' date=' one very late night. When yu-gi-oh first [b']entered[/b] the world, as Shadow Duels. These three cards, where the first ' cards ' to appear on this earth, and yet no one knows they're even real. These three cards, where supposed to be hidden, forever not to be found. These were only emergency cards, for the kings of the land, these cards were locked away, in a box that had an 8 digit combo lock. This case was deemed unbreakable, and it could never be guessed by any human, or thing that tries to get in. These cards names where, ( You'll have to read to find out ) supposedly, lost in history for ever. 'Till or Until one day when a explorer, that was looking through the bog he had found a wooden board underneath his feet while hiking threw the swamp. To his surprise when he went to pull it up the water he was on sucked in, and made him fall into the hole. When they found him 4 days later he was mumbling about a great power, that was under this hole, but the problem was he couldn't prove any of it so he was labeled as insane, and thrown into a mental hospital, but he forgot to seal the path that led to the cards, so any one that was, or wasn't looking might just fall into their own luck. Sorry, I got too bored of correcting all of the errors, and gave up on the first chapter. Don't lie about spell-checking, because either you lied, or it didn't work. -_- Crap Dude I thought you where talking about the chapter it's self I acutaly did forget to run the Plot threw a spell checker I need to get my facts straight. Considering, I fail at this imma just stop writing it LOL. Wanted to give a try, and I mess up before the story even starts, xD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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