DDRGHKH Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Long ago, before the Zero Reverse, a legendary family lived happily until the Zero Reverse which scarred their middle born son, Kidd. But much later something even worse happens, Their oldest son, Graton, Murders their youngest son, Shannon, by throwing him off of a building. Kidd then finds out of his brothers horrible death and wondered who did it. Later, he finds out Graton killed Shannon and challenges Graton to a duel, he accepted and the duel started: Kidd VS Graton Kidd summons Summoner Monk in ATK mode and is automatically switched to DEF mode (1600 DEF). Kidd then discards Book of Moon to Special Summon Sabersaurus in ATK mode (1900 ATK). Ends his turn Graton summons Morphtronic Remoten (ATK 300) and activates Machine Duplication to play two more. Graton then Tuned both of them to Synchro Summon XX-Saber Gottoms, and then activates Wild Nature's Release to raise it's ATK equal to it's DEF (ATK 5700) and then activates Fissure to destroy Sabersaurus. Gottoms then attacks and destroy's Summoner Monk. Graton sets 1 face-down and ends his turn. Kidd summons X-Saber Airbellum in DEF mode (300 DEF). Sets 1 card. Graton activates Premature Burial and pays 800LP to summon Gottoms (3200LP) and activates Megamorph to have Gottoms ATK points double (6100 ATK) and activates Swords of Revealing Light and Stop Defense and attacks Airbellum (Kidd 0LP)Graton Wins. After that duel Sector Security is called, Kidd jumps on his Runner and Drives off at full speed. That was 5 years ago today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Eerrr... What?I didn't understand any of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Lol... Bad, just bad. Need I say more? Surpisingly good spelling though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 ^That's true. You write well, only you can't peice things together. Or at least, you don't. Description, Story, both bad. Only thing I know is that they're kids in the 'Zero Reverse'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Very impersonal and bland. I see no emotions, description, or even dialog from the characters. They're just dolls now; they do nothing except when they're moved. Give them life, make them think and perform actions. That's how to really write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 I wonder why people post on these threads..., but not on others, i.e. Skippy Canoe's, it at least has proper grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDRGHKH Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 I'm just starting out so go easy please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDRGHKH Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Wait, I got a reply from the legendary ⓢⓚⓘⓟⓟⓨ ⓒⓐⓝⓞⓔ? This is so awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 I wonder why people post on these threads...' date=' but not on others, i.e. Skippy Canoe's, it at least has proper grammar.[/quote'] I post on others... 7_7 Wait' date=' I got a reply from the legendary ⓢⓚⓘⓟⓟⓨ ⓒⓐⓝⓞⓔ? This is so awesome![/quote'] Lol thanks. *hugs* I am now a lot less happy with this, as you posted the other parts in other threads and in script form. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackthunder Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Hey DDRGHKH don't continue this fan fic because almost no one likes it.Start a new one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Well, to say the least, it could use a little work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDRGHKH Posted April 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 To all fans, I have know cancelled Yu-Gi-Oh! X. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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