Cool Jimmy Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 I edited this one. Didn't feel like doing anything this week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Nice mate ;D C4D blends in, or is that part of the stock?... =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Jimmy Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 What C4D and what stock. I started off with a render. Pen tooled some lines and the pillars are just some cheap effects I call mimic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 What C4D and what stock. I started off with a render. Pen tooled some lines and the pillars are just some cheap effects I call mimic. Ok, mimic blends in ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Sick depth, imo. I don't think the black lines fit too well. The compo is nice, too. Another problem, though, is the positioning of the focal, not so much it being in the center, but the way it makes the shoulder seem like the main focus. Maybe it's just me. Still, KIU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Jimmy Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Thanks both :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Damn this is pretty nice.Good job bro (:Are the pillars on the rite and left part of the render/stock? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Jimmy Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Nah. Good try though.thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 LQ at certain spots.The compo is boring, without any sort of interesting effects.Focal is fairly high on the tag, weakening it, move it around a bit.Lighting is off.Keep trying. I would suggest reading some tutorials on Crown Zero, you need to start experimenting with visually interesting styles, this is really boring to look at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cool Jimmy Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 pfft lol. suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuure. CrownZero is old bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
•:Elonar:• Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 .frission is right. I look at it and don't see much. Tho you did create your own depth of field, which is impressive. Just try to make it more interesting to look at, and it would be awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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