Organization XIII

[Dad]

The plot in the Pokemon games sucks.

 

We have to make it more interesting. Like the plot Nexev proposed.

 

We need more serious pokemon gangs. I'm talkin' guns and sheet. Motherfuckin' terrorist Squirtle.

[Skuldur]

You know that most of what Nex wrote is backstory and could just be put in some book in the game that the player has to read or something. >.>

 

We will downtone the plot a little but most of that is possible.

 

@DP:

[Larxene]

The plot in the Pokemon games sucks.

 

We have to make it more interesting. Like the plot Nexev proposed.

 

We need more serious pokemon gangs. I'm talkin' guns and s***. Motherfuckin' terrorist Squirtle.

 

...yeah, no.

 

Our original plan was to have 3 teams. DiZ's team (Team Data), Ansem's Team (Team Darkness), and Zero and Vilayna's team.

 

We'll keep Zero and Vilayna's for sure, but they won't do much til near the end of the game. If we can only keep 1 of the other 2 teams, we'll probably keep DiZ's team.

[Dad]

...yeah' date=' no.

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I was being sarcastic, but okay. xD

 

 

@DP:

 

HE NEEDS A TURBAN AND A PISTOL. NAO.

[Skuldur]

Kamina Squirtle >>>>>>>>>>>>> Terrorist Squirtle

[Dad]

Kamina Squirtle >>>>>>>>>>>>> Terrorist Squirtle

 

THAT'S RACIST. D<

[Nexev]

Look here is how it would work according to the plot.

 

You go around trying to catch orgymon. Getting a certain number allows you to do optional things like go to certin ares.

 

You beat up gym leaders. In dditon thier are tournaments where ou fight a bunch of randomized trainers. The tournaments you can enter depends on your badge.

 

DiZ is bad, and does bad things. He gets in your wy an you kick his ass.

 

Then you have to seek out DiZ to kick his ass to save world and get a orgymon.

 

Then you kick the ass of elite four.

 

You get to beat up gym leaders again and get more super orgymon.

 

Then you beat up boobed chick, some super people, and Satan.

 

Then you eat up developers.

 

Then you are done.

 

Is that honestly to complicated?

[Larxene]

Nope. xD

 

Although Ansem the Wise is the professor in the beginning of the game, he's actually completely insane and reveals himself to be DiZ toward the end of the game.

[Marisa Kirisame-ze]

You all do realize that there are a lot of limitations on what we can do in this game? >.>;;

 

Where are you guys creating this? RPG maker, yes?

[Skuldur]

I think were using Advance map.

 

That way we can hack the Pokemon game.

[Infinitus]

@Fire Haze:

 

No. They are hacking a Pokemon game.

[Marisa Kirisame-ze]

@Fire Haze:

 

No. They are hacking a Pokemon game.

 

Oh' date=' right, right. Orgy[b']mon[/b]. That makes more sense.

[Infinitus]

Well, I just put all my points in the new YCM Lottery. Hopefully, I'll start a trend, and then some guy with 1 ticket will win.

 

Discuss stupid decisions.

[Phantom Roxas]

Nex, my brother could use your help for a manga he's planning. Your plot-writing abilities will be very useful.

[Sailor Gourmet]

Well' date=' I just put all my points in the new YCM Lottery. Hopefully, I'll start a trend, and then some guy with 1 ticket will win.

 

Discuss stupid decisions.

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Decision to cut off coffee for a week.

Never made it past the third day, I was so tired...

 

Oh, and in addition, you can bet I'll download Orgymon as soon as it comes out.

An improved Pokemon game is what I need nowadays. ^^

[Nexev]

I stayed up till 6 o'clock making that men in black/kingdom hearts thing.

 

NOBODY commented on it. So I probably shouldn't have done that.

 

Anyway what kind of manga is your brother doing?

[Infinitus]

I stayed up till 6 o'clock making that men in black/kingdom hearts thing.

 

NOBODY commented on it. So I probably shouldn't have done that.

 

Anyway what kind of manga is your brother doing?

 

What is it? A youtube video? Cards? What?

 

Whatever it is, I'll be glad to comment or something. I hate to see hard work go to waste.

[Nexev]

A manga is never a video. It is a Japanese comic book.

[Infinitus]

A manga is never a video. It is a Japanese comic book.

 

No, what were YOU working on? A manga?

 

Whatever it is, I'd be glad to comment on it. Like I said, I hate to see hard work go to waste.

[Nexev]

It was these things:

 

Yay.

 

Okay I got the men in black thing done' date=' if anyone gave a crap.

 

If no one did tough.

 

Note heavy artist interpretation here.

 

Okay, much to the obliviousness of normal people, the worlds are occasionally visited by denizens of the real of darkness seeking political asylum from the crusades hosted by the realm of light.

 

These escapees are called heartless after a famous piece of crusade propaganda drawn by Jimmy the cricket portraying the dark people as evil, cruel and indeed heartless.

 

The government, lead by Yen sid does not in fact appericate the crusades (hosted by the leader of the church of Heartism (the all powerful religious organization) Mickey). So Yen Sid managed to persuade Maleficent to secretly leave Radiant Garden and make a group of agents who's job it is to find these heartless and find them places where they can live freely. These people have been codenamed "nobodies" since they don't exist on government record. Among the nobodies several prominent stand out, unlike the others their names are renowned throughout the worlds. However this is because these nobodies decided to become a fake terrorist organization in order to distract the worlds from he activities of the other nobodies. This terrorist group is known as Organization XIII, while it is officially stated that it is named so because of that's the number of leaders within t, in truth it's named that after a famous statement by Zexion predicting "Complete and absolute victory within 13 months."

 

Next would be characters.

 

Personally I like this idea since it takes KH and MiB and makes something completely different.

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So nobody cared about the cast?

 

We'll since this will drive me crazy otherwise you get to see it anyway:

Heroes

Xemnas: Head of Organization XIII' date=' calm collected and unusually determined for their to be no failures in finding heartless a place to go to. This is because a long time ago he was a kid living in the seedier part of Radiant Garden. He was injured severely in drive by but was nurtured to health by a old heartless woman. He later managed to get a degree in a prestigious university. When he came back he learned that the woman was killed by some religious radicals while he was away. He never completely got over the guilt which is why he is so determined to not have another innocent ever die. He wields a red cane as a weapon that used to belong to the woman. The cane is virtually indestructible and surprisingly light.

 

Xigbar: The teams scout. His job is to find heartless so they can transport them to a safe location. He doubles as an assain against high ranking church leaders. Sarcastic, can't seem to take any situation seriously. He was an old war veteran who tried to retire a while ago to learn that since the church did not sanction the war he was considered a villain instead of a hero. He got pissed and got in a bar fight... against the entire bar at once. It cost him his eye and he continued to drown himself in liqueur until Maleficent found him. He wields a two machine guns akimbo. He is remarkably accurate with them and can hit people from 50 feet without a scope.

 

 

Xaldin: His job is to subdue potential threats. He does so by planting information that causes Heartism belief to be shaken as well causing infighting among he church. He was a psychologist until the church banned psychologists since it contradicted church theory on the heart. He took up life as a shaolin monk in Land of dragons following this. He joined after the monastery was attacked for accepting a heartless as a student. He is very calm and insightful, and a believer of zen Buddhism. Xaldin wields two 3 section staffs but the staffs can separate and combine at will, making up to 6 2-foot poles. Also the staff can become rigid at will.

 

Vexen: He builds and designs all of the groups technology. Vexen is antisocial and completly mute, usually he would look at a person and continue his work only is perfectly friendly with Lexaeus and Zexion. He however is logical and intelligent if you can get him to communicate. Vexen was a scientist working on machines. The church found a mysterious giant key identified as by hem as one of their holy relics. They hired Vexen to figure out how to make it work which he did but after seeing what they did to a heretic he refused to talk. He was tortured but still refused to cave in till the point where it become psychologically imbued in him rendering him mute. Vexen escaped thanks to Lexaeus blowing up the prison. He is the only person who knows how to activate the mysterious keyblade relics. Wields a shield made from reversed engineered keyblade technology and can shoot lasers.

 

Lexaeus: Lexaeus is head of destruction. His job is to damage or destroy property and plant bombs. Lexaeus was a bodyguard for Sephiroth, one of the realm of lights biggest crime lords. Sephiroth trafficked medical supplies without tax and relatively low cost, which while was surprising noble and helpful to the poor prevented the church from collecting on the tax (since the church ones all the pharmacies and hospitals) sadly Lexaeus was defeated by Cloud (who was under church orders to defeat Sephiroth) and Sephiroth died. Seph's dieng wish was for LEx to take care of his kid which was Zexion. Lex is quiet but friendly, usually allowing Zex to do the talking. He follows Zex around like a bodyguard an they share a mix between big brother/little brother and bodyguard/employer. Lex utilizes a bomb ax, a bomb axe stores bombs in th blade that detonate on impact to increase damage by allowing the blast to only escape though certain holes. The ax holds 12 bombs so he can use it twelve times until reloading.

 

Zexion: The head of interrogation and investigation. Zex is observant and quiet, meaning that almost no ones talk in the trio. This is because Zex doesn't talk unless he has something important to say. Zex is half heartless and Seph's son. Zex decided to join Organization XIII himself and Lex followed to protect him. Zex carries a book that is notably dusty, however the dust is actually various different hallucinogens to blow at peoples face to get them to crack during interrogation. He also has a tranqulizer pistol with highly concerted doses of the drugs.

 

Saix: Saix's job is to plan out each mission Organization XIII undertakes, he is sort-of like that person who stays at base to provide field agents instructions. Saix was a world champion chess player who retired. He got bored and joined Organization XIII seeking thrills. He quickly realized that the Organization was not just fun and games however but stayed since he realized this was one of the few meaningful things he ever did. Saix enjoys Chess and strategy games of all kinds, he is analytic like Zexion but more about strategy and less abut people. Saix becomes violent upon consuming alcohol. He wields a rifle with a bayonet attached, he normally snipe a person from a distance but when drunk he attacks with the bayonet as well.

 

Axel: Axel is the most unpredictable of the members. He works in whatever mission interests him at the time. Axel is an escaped asylum patient for the criminally insane. However Axel is not insane, merely atheist and talks in a manner like Chesire cat. No one knos why Axel joined since he won't give a straight answer. Axel ususes explosives in battle.

 

Demyx: Drawing out hiding heartless and winning trust. Demyx is cheerful and optimistic, believing that if people find out how bad the church is that they would abandon it, also poetic. Demyx is a famous musician who was moved by this young beutiful girl he mt, they started dating and it turned out she was a heartless. This met nohing to him except that the church started looking for her. Thanks to the nobodies she is safe but until he church is defeated they cannot be together. Demyx uses a violin that has a concealed blades and metal plating (turning it to an ax/short sword duel wield).

 

Luxord: head of fiance. Luxord was a pokr dealer at a casino, dreaming of holding his own casino. The church deemed gambling unmoral and they all ran out of buisness. Luxord still hasn't lost hope so he kept on working as a bar tender to gain money. He defended a heartless in a bar fight and was later sent on the run because of this and his mony was seized by the church. Organization XIII picked him up. Luxord likes taking risks and allowing other people to feel that thrill. Shuffling calms his nerves and he is always playing Saix in a game of some sorts. Luxord uses bladed trading cards and alcohol as his weapon, he use these to ignite the cards.

 

Marluxia: The teams doctor. Marluxia is sly and manipulative but cares about his patients. He likes stirring up trouble to entertain him. Marluxia was a doctor who didn't like the church controlling his hospital and quite. He then saved a persons life outside the hospital with surgery and got arrested for performing without a license (the church revokes the license of anybody who doesn't work for them). He joined Organization XIII out of spite. Marly uses medical equipment modified to serve as traps in addition to a modified pacemaker.

 

Larxene: assassin. LArxene is a serial killer who was allowed out of jail if she would help the Organization. She doesn't care about the heartless or anything but if she loses she'll look like an idiot so she works as hard as everyone else. Sarcastic, sadistic and slightly perverted. She wields electroshock batons modified to include spikes for impalement.

 

Roxas/Xion: The twins, these two assist people on their missions whatever they may be. The two ar counted as one person not because one is less than the other but because they are two alike to seperate them. The two are heartless twins which as heartless twins share the same sense (they can see what the other sees, what the other feels etc).Because of this if the two are too far apart they get overwhelmed by the very different senses. The two are younger than any member besides Zex so the twins are slightly childish. However they are very determined to help the

ORganization XIII. Thier past is unknown, Axel simply found them abandoned in a alley 5 years ago and brought them to headquarters because they were interesting. Roxas wields Two Accross and Xion wields Aubade. Vexen handed the two the wepons from a item retrival mission he wen on it Zex and Lex

 

Xehanort: The younger brother of Xemnas. Xehanort constantly tries to compete with his brother and suffers from a ineriority complex because of that. Xehanort uses hand to hand combat unlike the others to prove he is good enough to not need weapons.

 

Next is villians. :D

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[Infinitus]

It sounds like a great idea. I found it quite interesting how you twisted the Organization's stories into more realistic, real life stories. I didn't read the cast yet, but I will. I did notice that Xehanort was Xemnas' younger brother, the classic 'Sidekick trying to prove himself'. I can understand how it took you this long, because it is extremely well thought out. I can see this going places.

 

A great RP IDEA!!!

 

However, I was dissapoint when it lacked Will Smith.

[Nexev]

Who the hell is Will?

 

Xehanort is not a sidekick, he takes solo missions and is one of the stronger members.

 

He is more of the leaders eternal rival. Like a more serious Might Guy to Xemnas's Kakashi.

[Infinitus]

Who the hell is Will?

 

Xehanort is not a sidekick' date=' he takes solo missions and is one of the stronger members.

 

He is more of the leaders eternal rival. Like a more serious Might Guy to Xemnas's Kakashi.

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Ah.

 

Anyway, I really like the idea. I'd love to see where this goes.

 

Also, I've always wanted to make a game, but the thing is, whenever I used the computer, it always went against me. Something didn't work, etc.

 

But, now I'm going to use pieces to make my own game. I'm currently trying to work out the Class Trees.

[Zexaeon]

Nex, you do indeed have awesome plot skills. I DID read your miB thing before, i just forgot to comment.

 

What you need is an outlet for your ideas. You should find a writer and collaborate to make stories.

 

 

Anyway, on the topic of Orgymon, Solus has a point - it's a Pokemon game, we CAn have some of the same guys. It just ptomotes originality to use mostly different teams.

 

My Team:

 

Ch.Zexion -> Zexion -> EX Zexion

Ch.Mateus -> Mateus -> HF Emperor

Ch.Mateus-> Mateus -> HL Emperor

Ch.Tina -> Tina -> EX Tina

Vilayna

Sin

 

 

I'm gonna say right now though - Shinryu is off-limits to everyone. He is the game's ultimate pokemon, and the only time he'll be fought is upon trying to capture him.

[Nexev]

What?

 

Aww....

 

I had an idea.

 

I think each Developer should have a original orgymon that none of the other characters have.

 

They are legendary and only after defeating the developers a third time do you get them.

 

However you get all of them.

 

These developer legendary are all based off superbosses. So Zex may have Penance, Lar: Yiazmat, I could have Chronodia, Roxas could use Ozma etc.