ThatPhantomGuy Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 I got this idea from WeatherReport and his Fan Fics. I tinkered around with the idea for a comedic 5D's story, so I decided to make Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's: The Fan Fic. Please enjoy! In the distant, distant, distant, distant, distant future, people rode motorbikes and played card games, and rode motorbikes while playing card games. Then there are these dragon tattoos... And a guy from Australia who steals a bike and a card from his friend... And this freakish mini clown-guy... And a city where the residents are forced to work in factories cleaning trash (Don't ask)... Anyway, this is their story, Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's!!! The 'D' stands for... D... Dacryocystorhinostomy. Yeah Dacryocystorhinostomy. Look it up. Well if you have a better word that starts with D post it! XDWeatherReport says: Dog-doo [spoiler=Episode 1][spoiler=Part 1]Meanwhile, at New Domino City... In a large stadium near the sea, the crowd was in an uproar for the duel that was about to commence. "Duelist in diapers and in retirement centers, professional and n00bZ alike. It's the moment you've been waiting for the last four months for!!!" a high-pitched, girly announcer spoke over the speakers that projected around the stadium. Near one of the entrances smoke shot up and a bunch of other useless dramatic effects to show a man riding a single-wheel motorbike. "OMG!!!! IT'S HIM!!! IT'S THE KING!!! OMG! OMG! OMG! I LOOOOOOVE YOU!!!!" the announcer broke into screams of joy. Spotlights covered the driver, as he rode out into the open, "I AM THE KING!" he pounded the air with his fist in a cool-like manor. The crowd cheered wildly for the King. With dozens of fan girls screaming, along with the announcer. The announcer slowly came back to his normal girly behavior, "N-Now the King, Jack Atlas, is trying to keep his undefeated streak against this punk nobody, Generic Villain Name #1!!! Does Generic Villain have a chance to defeat the undefeated King of card games?! Like me and everybody else here, we say; No. But let's watch the King completely destroy him anyway!!!" Jack clenched his fist, "How about we kick things into MAXIMUM OVERDRIVE?! I AM THE KING!!!" "Uh, well we can't really start yet. Yusei has to do his monologue, and Generic Villain Name #1 is getting his booster seat." the announcer said in a dumbfounded tone. "Then who would like to see me drive pointlessly around in circles?! I AM THE KING!" Jack asked the giant crowd, and they respond in cheers and 'yay's. Meanwhile, at Dump City... Smoke and terrible gas covered the city, it was dark and vision was impaired by the gases... You would think it was Mexico. There was a huge split on one of the streets, under that street was a subway. A duelist on a red motorbike rode down the dark subway. "Alright. Monologue time. I hate you Jack... Yep. That should do it. Oh, and I am going to get my card back too." Yusei thought as he glared down at the passage, his speedometer was going crazy. Meanwhile, at New Domino City... "It looks like Generic Villain Name #1 finally showed up! Eeeeeeeek!!! It's soooooo exciting!!!" the announcer squealed with joy! Both Generic and Jack stopped at the starting line, so they can race, er, duel... Raceduel. Jack pushed one of the various buttons on his motorcycle and 'Hyperdrive' started to play. "I love this song. I AM THE KING!" Jack smiled proudly, then pushed another button and a card showed up on his motorbike's screen. "RaceDuel engage, switching to auto pilot." the motorbike spoke in it's inappropriately voiced electronic tone. The area around the two racers turned a light purple. And the announcer went to explain what was happening to the audience, even though most of all of them have seen RaceDuels before. "For you n00bZ who don't know what's going on, please do not panic, you are not on drugs. This is what happens when the duelist activate RaceDuel! The only spell cards the duelist can use are RaceSpell cards, and if they use normal spell cards while RaceDuel is activated, their D-Wheel will explode!!! Generic Yu-Gi-Oh! reference!" The crowd looked at their data-pads, it showed the two different cards. "Uhuh huh huh. Purtty colors. Uhuh huh huh." one of the spectators said poking the pad. "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaalrighty then! Time to start this RaceDuel! Ready?!" the announcer jumped with joy. A holographic stoplight appeared in front of the two racers. "Three............. Two-one GO!" Jack shot off quickly as the hologram disappeared, leaving Generic Villain behind. Thousands of cheerleaders in bikinis were dancing on one side of the track chanting. "Atlas is hot, Generic Villain Name #1 is not! Jack is the King, Generic Villain Name #1 has turkey wings! The King is... Um, were running out of rhymes..." "Heeeeeey! That wasn't faaaaaaaaaaaair!" Generic whined profusely, smacking his motorcycle. "You have to be awesome to beat me. But only I am awesome, so only I can defeat me!" Jack said still flying down the track. "Well, I can try!!!" Generic Villain yelled. The crowd fell silent, and a distant '...You suck...' was heard. Generic drew a card, "I summon-" Jack cut him off, "Sayhellotomybigreddragon, Archie!!!" A giant, evil-looking, red and black dragon with horns roared fiercely when it appeared next to the King's motorcycle, and he spun his motorbike around to face Generic's. "I-It was myyyyyyyyyy turn!!!" Generic whined again. "Too late! Archie! Destroy him in one attack even though your attack power isn't enough to take out all his life points, but do it anyway!" "Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Mama, I lost a card gameeeeeeeeeee!!!" Generic Villain cried as his motorcycle stopped, with smoke coming from it. "And guess what else Generic Villain Name #1?! Your mother never loved you." Jack smiled as he stopped his motorbike. "Waaaaaaaaaaah!" Generic got off his bike and threw his helmet at it, then the helmet bounced back and hit him in the face, "Id broked ma nose..." Meanwhile, at Dump City... A part of Yusei's motorbike exploded, "Friggin' crap!" he skid his motorcycle to a stop. He looked at the part that smoke was coming from, "Curse you Dean's Motor Shop." Yusei glazed at the sky with extreme coolness. Yusei started pushing his bike down the tunnel. Meanwhile, at New Domino City... Jack pointed towards the sky, "Who rules the duels, and looks... Cools?!... I AM THE KING!!!" "OMG he pointed at me! He pointed at meeeeeeee!" the announcer started to hyperventilate. Generic Villain was running around in the background holding his nose and crying. The crowd cheered Jack as he keep racing around the track. Meanwhile, at Dump City... Yusei was gasping for air as he reached his secret subway hideout. A couple of people were huddled around a small TV in a tan colored tent at one of the abandoned subway stops. "Whoa! Isn't Jack just awesome?!" the small, fat one said. "Yeah! He totally the best duelist ever!!!" the tall, nerdy-looking one replied. "Ha ha ha! And to think Yusei wants to duel him! He's so stupid to think he could actually win!" the punk one wearing a bandana laughed. "Uh, guys? It's me, Yusei. I called you eleven times to help me with my D-Wheel and you never answered." he pushed his motorcycle up the ramp near the Hobo Tent. "Is it true that you stole that D-Wheel and a card from some bum in Dump City?!" the announcer asked him on the TV. "Yes it is. And for no reason at all; I can take on anyone, any day, anytime and still be victorious!!! Except for you Yusei, you smell like wee-wee. I AM THE KING!" Jack pointed at Yusei even though it's being broadcasted through television. "Hey Turd, you should probably turn off the TV, Yusei might get scared. Haw haw haw!" the one with a bandana said. The small fat one of Yusei's 'friends' turned off the TV and looked at him, "So didja crash?!" he asked in his deep voice. "No. My CPU exploded Turd." he muttered trying to fix his motorcycle. "Oh. So ya crashed?" another 'friend' with a high-pitched nerdy voice asked Yusei. "No, I didn't crash Pencil! My CPU exploded!" A young girly-boy ran towards Yusei, "Hey! What a kowinky-dink! I have a CPU that I totally did not steal from a factory and got a maker because of it." "Thanks I'll use it." Yusei snatched it from Girly-boy's hand and put it in his motorbike. "So ya stole it didja Girly-Boy?!" Turd asked him. "Oh well, you caught me. And my name's not Girly-Boy, it's Rally!" she, er, he yelled at him. "Good that you didn't steal it Girly-Boy!" Pencil Head patted him on the back. "You guys are all retarded." Yusei said as he finished fixing his bike. Suddenly sirens and lights flashed over head through the giant crack over the subway tunnel, "Girly-Boy, this is the Security. We have evidence that you stole a CPU from a factory, and we caught you here since you have a marker. Come on out or we'll force you to play a card game!" "DAMN IT!" [spoiler=Part 2]Meanwhile, at the secret subway tunnel hideout... "We'd better make like a bannana and split!" Turd said surprising dramatic in his monotone. "Hey! You said you didn't steal it!" Pencil grabbed Girly-Boy by the shoulders. "Wait guys! Maybe if we are all quiet they'll go away?" Turd said as he stood still against the tent. "Turd, that is the most idiotic-" Yusei started, but was cut off. "Shhhhhhhhhhhh!" Girly-Boy, Turd, Pencil Head and Bandana Man Mike shushed him. Yusei and the rest said nothing, then after a while the lights and sirens slowly died down and disappeared. "Did it actually work?" Yusei asked quietly, still thinking it was a stupid plan. "Hold on, lemme see..." Turd walked out on to the subway tracks and looked through the giant crack above. "HEY, YOU GUYS STILL THERE TO CAPTURE US?!!!!" Suddenly the lights and sirens returned, "Oh, we thought you weren't there, sorry. We'll be capturing you all now." "M'kay, just checking!" Turd yelled back up and walked back to the rest of Yusei's group, "They're still there." Yusei sighed deeply with frustration then flipped open his hobo-computer, which was powered by a running Kuriboh in the background. "I'll buy you guys some time to get out of here, go out the west exit." Yusei sighed as he pushed random buttons. "Now fabulously jamming the Security signals!" a inappropriately electronic voice from the hobo-computer said. Meanwhile, above the secret subway tunnel hideout... "Urrrrrrrrrrrrgh! We are being compromised!!! There's nothing about hacking in the manual! Why didn't I go to flight school! Aghhhh!!!" the Security pilot operating a flimsy dark blue helicopter yelled with frustration! "Bob! Just press un-compromised button!" another Security officer spoke to the pilot through the radio. "Eeeearghhhhh!!! Now pressing the un-compromised buttooooon!!!" Bob yelled as he pressed the button. Meanwhile, at the secret subway tunnel hideout... "Were'dja get the money to 'buy' time Yusei? Didja steel it like Girly-Boy?!" Turd questioned him with mild anger. Yusei ignored him and packed up his computer and Kuriboh power source then got on his motorcycle, "Listen, you go left I go right. Simple like that." "Where are you going?" Bandana Man Mike said giving Yusei's helmet to him. "I'm, uh, going to distract them... Later!" Yusei raced down the subway, leaving his 'friends' behind at the tent, "Suckers." Meanwhile, at the streets of Dump City... Yusei flew up the stairs of one of the subway entrances, "Finally, those idiots will be gone for good." he muttered as he raced down the abandoned streets. A gruff-looking Security motorbike rider spotted him and spoke into his wrist, "This is Officer Tuffles, I have located a perp, and by 'perp' I mean perpetrator." "Cool it will the police talk Tuffles, we all know what 'perp' means! And stop talking to wrist, you have a headset!" an officer yelled at him via radio. Officer Tuffles revved up his motorbike, "10-4 that Bob, and by 10-4 I mean-" "Just shut up and catch that perp! Ack! I'm doing it too!" "Alright Bob." Tuffles started following Yusei with his sirens blaring, "You on the D-Wheel! Stop! You have no chance of escape!" "Damn. They already found me. Time to make an escape!" Yusei swerved around on the road then flew down the dark alleyways of an abandoned factory plant. "OH NO! He escaped!!!" Tuffles yelled with great surprise! Officer Tuffles spotted Yusei's bright red motorbike a second later, "Oooh wait, there he is!" and soon Tuffles was again right behind Yusei, "Hey, you wanna RaceDuel?!" Tuffles yelled out to him. "Um, no, not really..." Yusei kept flying down the narrow alleyways. "Well too bad! I activate ForcedAgainstTheirWillRacDuel!!!" the officer quickly pressed a giant red button on his motorcycle! The area around them turned purple, "It's totally time to RaceDuel! Switching to autopilot!" the inappropriate electronic voice spoke with glee. "Friggin' crap." Yusei muttered as his motorbike switched to RaceDuel Mode. Meanwhile, to be continued...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 is the girly-boy rally I made the same mistake.Infact I one time thought leo was a girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Hey everyone! I just realized what the D stands for in 5D's. Don't watch it! Anyways, waiting for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Yes, Girly-Boy is Rally. And I thought Leo was a girl at first too... I will be getting out more episodes as fast as I can! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 NO.NO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 NO.NO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 [quote='ThePhantomDuelist' pid='3122717' dateline='1255306406'] I got this idea from WeatherReport and his Fan Fics. I tinkered around with the idea for a 5D's comedic fan fic, so I decided to make Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's: The Fan Fic. Please enjoy! [color=green]Oh, come on! You're supposed to ask for permission before using someone else's idea! One time when I was six, I was saddened by a depressing one-shot story some guy wrote, so I tried to continue it. Then I was banned for a while. Pokemon Crater is full of so many good memories... until they erase them for the next forum design. Anyways, I'm nice, so if this is good, then I won't yell at you. Time for a comedy Weather Report!![/color] In the distant, distant, distant, distant, distant future, people rode motorbikes and played card games, and rode motorbikes while playing card games. Then there are these dragon tattoos... And a guy from Australia who steals a bike and a card from his friend... And this freakish mini clown-guy... And a city where the residents are forced to work in factories cleaning trash (Don't ask)... Anyway, this is their story, Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's!!! [color=green]Okay, so it's in the future, an Australian steals stuff, a clown mentally scars millions, dragon tattoos govern the magic of card games, and thousands of accidents occur now from said card games. Sounds pretty suspect...[/color] The '[b]D[/b]' stands for... [b]D[/b]... [b]D[/b]acryocystorhinostomy. Yeah [b]D[/b]acryocystorhinostomy. Look it up. Well if you have a better word that starts with [b]D[/b] post it! [color=green]Dog-doo.[/color] [spoiler=Episode 1] [spoiler=Part 1]Meanwhile, at New Domino City... In a large stadium near the sea, was in an uproar for the duel that was about to comence. [color=green]Even in a parody, you must spell commence well. It helps it be funnier since at first glance it looks like a normal fic. Unlike Captain Hitsugaya's fic. It sucked.[/color] [i]"Duelist in daipers and in retirement centers, professional and n00bZ alike. It's the moment you've been waiting for the last four months for!!!"[/i] a high-pitched, girly anouncer spoke over the speakers that projected around the stadium. [color=green]You misspelled a few more things here, too, but oh, well.[/color] Near one of the entrances smoke shot up and a bunch of other useless dramatic effects to show a man riding a single-wheel motorbike. [color=green]What KINDS of special-- oh yeah, useless ones.[/color] [i]"OMG!!!! IT'S HIM!!! IT'S THE KING!!! OMG! OMG! OMG! I LOOOOOOVE YOU!!!!"[/i] the anouncer broke into screams of joy. [color=green]That announcer is pretty happy to see him. I hope that it wasn't the guy with the huge ducktail... he's cool.[/color] Spotlights covered the driver, as he rode out into the open, "I AM THE KING!" he pounded the air with his fist in a cool-like mannor. [color=green]GASP! Manner! What did the punch do to the audience...[/color] The crowd cheered wildly for the King. With dozens of fan girls screeming, along with the anouncer. [color=green]It made them go crazy!! Even the announcer! He's strange.[/color] The anouncer slowly came back to his normal girly behavior, [i]"N-Now the King, Jack Atlas, is trying to keep his undefeated streak against this punk nobody, Generic Villian Name #1!!! Does Generic Villian have a chance to defeat the undefeated King of card games?! Like me and everybody else here, we say; No. But let's watch the King completely destroy him anyway!!!" [color=green]The generic villain thing was a fine joke.[/color] Jack clentched his fist, "How about we kick things into MAXIMUM OVERDRIVE?! I AM THE KING!!!" [color=green]Now he looks stupid in a funny way. I like that.[/color] [i]"Uh, well we can't really start yet. Yusei has to do his monologue, and Generic Villian Name #1 is out drinking."[/i] the anouncer said in a dumbfounded tone. [color=green]Hm. Okay joke, but not really funny, but there's nothing better to say with the given circumstances.[/color] "Then who would like to see me drive pointlessly around in circles?! I AM THE KING!" Jack asked the gaint crowd, and they responed in cheers and 'yay's. [color=green]EVERYBODY LOVES DA KING!! WOO!! Just a few more spelling errors.[/color] Meanwhile, at Dump City... [color=green]Hey! The name made me chuckle!![/color] Smoke and terrible gas covered the city, it was dark and vision was impared by the gases... You would think it was Mexico. There was a huge split on one of the streets, under that street was a subway. A duelist on a red motorbike rode down the dark subway. [color=green]OOH, MEXICO JUST GOT BURNED DUE TO THEIR CRAPPY ENVIRONMENTAL LAWS AND POLICIES!![/color] [i]"Alright. Monologue time. I hate you Jack... Yep. That should do it. Oh, and I am going to get my card back too."[/i] the driver thought as he glared down at the passage, his speedometer was going crazy. [color=green]Yeah! Now the duel can start! Thanks, Yusei![/color] Meanwhile, at New Domino City... [i]"It looks like Generic Villian Name #1 finally showed up! OMG! It's soooooo exciting!!!"[/i] the anouncer squeled with joy! [color=green]SQUEE!! HE'S HEEERE!! Try to capture that kind of excitement next time; the type where their heads explode.[/color] Both Generic and Jack stoped at the starting line, so they can race, er, duel... Raceduel. Jack pushed one of the various buttons on his motorcycle and 'Hyperdrive' started to play. [color=green]Generic Villian is his real name?! Wow, you have the same knack for naming guys as I do. And that's a good thing.[/color] "I love this song. I AM THE KING!" Jack smiled proudly, then pushed another button and a card showed up on his motorbike's screen. [color=green]I HATE that song, myself. COMPARE IT TO THIS!! [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QRLopQwlpYw&feature=related]Now THIS IS an opening theme song.[/url] And yes, it IS an awesome theme song. Suck on that, Kingy-boy![/color] [color=#32CD32]"RaceDuel engage, switching to auto pilot." [/color]the motorbike spoke in it's inapropriately voiced eletronic tone. [color=green]AARGH, maybe you should type this up on Microsoft Word or something before posting, I'm sure that you didn't mean to type elephant-tronic. And the voice for that thing IS pretty distracting.[/color] The area around the two racers turned a light purple. And the anouncer went to explain what was happening to the aduience, even though most of all of them have seen RaceDuels before. [color=green]Okay, I'm ready...[/color] [i]"For you n00bZ who don't know what's going on, please do not panic, you are not on drugs. This is what happens when the duelist activate RaceDuel! The only spell cards the duelist can use are RaceSpell cards, and if they use normal spell cards while RaceDuel is activated, their D-Wheel will explode!!! Generic Yu-Gi-Oh! referance!"[/i] [color=green]So you changed the names of everything to be race-oriented, said that they'll die if they use normal spells, and reassures you that you ARE NOT high. That's pretty cool. But if it's all based on race-stuff, I hope that means that most D-Wheelers don't know how to turn left. Heh, Nascar reference. I bet that if they set one up that way, at least one person would crash.[/color] The crowd looked at their data-pads, it showed the two different cards. [color=green]WOAH! DATA-PADS![/color] "Uhuh huh huh. Purtty colors. Uhuh huh huh." one of the spectators said poking the pad. [color=green]He reminds me of Billy Hill's dad. I guess.[/color] [i]"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaalrighty then! Time to start this RaceDuel! Ready?!"[/i] the anouncer jumped with joy. [color=green]He's sure excited![/color] A holographic stoplight appeared infront of the two racers. [color=green]I hope it looked stupid, like a generic stoplight.[/color] [color=#32CD32]"Three............. Two-one GO!"[/color] [color=green]He can't count correctly! It's like he forgot what came before three! Or the one and two were squeezed together unfairly. Actually, that IS funny.[/color] Jack shot off quickly as the hologram disappeared, leaving Generic Villian behind. Thousands of cheerleaders in bikinis were dancing on one side of the track chanting. [color=green]Yay! Fanservice already![/color] "Atlas is hot, Generic Villian Name #1 is not! Jack is the King, Generic Villian Name #1 has turkey wings! The King is... Um, were running out of rymes..." [color=green]They sure can rhyme![/color] "Heeeeeey! That wasn't faaaaaaaaaaaair!" Generic whined profusely, smacking his motorcycle. [color=green]He's right![/color] "You have to be awesome to beat me. But only I am awesome, so only I can defeat me!" Jack said still flying down the track. [color=green]He's right![/color] "Well, I can try!!!" Generic Villian yelled. [color=green]He's wrong![/color] The crowd fell silent, and a distant [i]'...You suck...'[/i] was heard. [color=green]He's right![/color] Generic drew a card, "I summon-" Jack cut him off, "Sayhitomybigreddragon, Archie!!!" [color=green]It made me smile. : ) That's me.[/color] A gaint evil-looking dragon appeared next to the King's motorcycle, and he spun his motorbike around to face Generic's. [color=green]That's not much of a description.[/color] "I-It was myyyyyyyyyy turn!!!" Generic whined again. "Too late! Archie destroy him in one attack even though your attack isn't enough to take out all his life points, but do it anyway!" [color=green]Jack always rises to the occasion, baby! I wish I'd never said that.[/color] "Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Mommy, I lost a card gameeeeeeeeeee!!!" Generic Villian cried as his motorcylce stopped, with smoke coming from it. [color=green]Take that, Villain![/color] "And guess what else Generic Villian Name #1?! Your mother never loved you." Jack smiled as he stopped his motorbike. [color=green]You're missing a comma, but you're so right.[/color] "Waaaaaaaaaaah!" Generic got off his bike and threw his helmet at it, then the helmet bounced back and hit him in the face, "Id broked ma nose..." [color=green]What an idjit...[/color] Meanwhile, at Dump City... A part of Yusei's motorbike exploded, "Friggin' crap!" he skid his motorcylce to a stop. [color=green]He's right![/color] He looked at the part that smoke was coming from, "Curse you Dean's Motor Shop." Yusei glazed at the sky with extreme coolness. [color=green]I know where he's NOT going for auto parts anymore.[/color] Yusei started pushing his bike down the tunnel. Meanwhile, at New Domino City... Jack pointed towards the sky, "Who rules the duels, and looks... Cools?!... I AM THE KING!!!" [color=green]I like it when cool guys are turned retarded. Or atleast hyper.[/color] [i]"OMG he pointed at me! He pointed at meeeeeeee!"[/i] the anouncer started to hyperventalate. [color=green]Somebody help him out, I think his legs just gave out.[/color] Generic Villian was running around in the background holding his nose and crying. The crowd cheered Jack as he keep racing around the track. [color=green]What a jerk![/color] Meanwhile, at Dump City... Yusei was gasping for air as he reached his secret subway hideout. [color=green]How crappy was that hideout?[/color] A couple of people were huddled around a small TV in a tent. [color=green]Yeah, your ONLY flaw besides spelling is description, I've noticed.[/color] "Whoa! Isn't Jack just awesome?!" one of them said. "Yeah! He totally the best duelist ever!!!" another said. [color=green]"He so good, he even beat YOU!!"[/color] "Ha ha ha! And to think Yusei wants to duel him! He's so stupid to think he could acctually win!" [color=green]What jerky friends![/color] "Uh, guys? It's me, Yusei. I called you eleven times to help me with my D-Wheel and you never answered." he pushed his motorcyle up the ramp. [color=green]Like I just said.[/color] [i]"Is it true that you stole that D-Wheel and a card from some bum in Dump City?!"[/i] the anouncer asked him on the TV. [color=green]What we've all been looking forward to...[/color] [i]"Yes it is. And for no reason at all; I can take on anyone, anyday, anytime and still be victorious!!! Except for you Yusei, you smell like wee-wee. I AM THE KING!"[/i] Jack pointed at Yusei even though it's being broadcasted through television. [color=green]That was funny, too.[/color] One of Yusei's 'friends' turned off the TV and looked at him, "So didja crash?!" he asked in his deep voice. [color=green]Which one?[/color] "No. My CPU exploded." he muttered trying to fix his motorcyle. "Oh. So ya crashed?" another 'friend' with a high-pitched nerdy voice asked Yusei. [color=green]Which one?[/color] "No. I didn't crash! My CPU exploded!" A young girly-boy ran towards Yusei, "Hey! What a kowinky-dink! I have a CPU that I totally did not steal from a factory and got a maker because of it." [color=green]He's cool![/color] "Thanks I'll use it." Yusei snatched it from Girly-boy's hand and put it in his motorbike. "So ya stole it didja Girly-Boy?!" the deep voiced man asked him. [color=green]Which one is he?[/color] "Oh well, you caught me. And my name's not Girly-Boy, it's Rally!" she, er, he yelled at him. "Good thatcha didn't steal it Girly-Boy!" the deep voiced man patted him on the back. [color=green]Yes, good for it![/color] "You guys are all retarded." Yusei said as he finished fixing his bike. Suddenly sirens and lights flashed over head, [i]"Girly-Boy, this is the Security. We have evidence that you stole a CPU from a factory, and we caught you here since you have a marker. Come on out or we'll force you to play a card game!"[/i] [color=green]Whoops.[/color] "DAMN IT!"[/spoiler] [spoiler=Part 2]TBA[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/quote] DARRRRRRRN!! IT WAS A FINE CHAPTER SO I CAN'T BE COMPLAINING ABOUT HOW BAD IT WAS OR COULD HAVE BEEEEEEEN!! Good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Ah! I am sorry WeatherReport-sama. *Bows* I didn't mean to steal the idea... So if you want me to stop I will. Also, thanks for the review! I'll fix that stuff... Lastly; Barragan Luisenbarn And Fenrir... YES. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 YES WE CAN!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Meh.Tuffles = Trudge? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 "Is he still there?" "I'll check. HEY, ARE YOU STILL OUT THERE COMIN' TO CAPTURE US?" "Oh yeah, thanks for telling us where you are!" "OKAY, JUST CHECKIN'. Yeah, they're here." Cool. Also: Try five DERBY HATS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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