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Lemniscate

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It is way too busy, and the black and white isn't helping.

 

No distinguishable effects.

 

Everything is really drowning everything else out, especially since it's black and white.

 

I would go for color if I were you, because, for one, it won't look like one huge lump when you first look at it.

 

It took me awhile to reconize the focal and the text.

 

The depth is there, but it's a bit akward, mainly because of how much there is in the tag.

 

Basically, it just needs to be cleaned up here, there, everywhere. Lessen the content of the tag and focus on the focal and it will look much better. ;)

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