Yugioh Domino Academy(book 1 finished)(next made characters will go to book 2)

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

sorry but I was asking why it didn't make sense that means theres a problem somewhere.

[blackthunder]

I think that this fan fic is too similar to GX

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Most fan fics are similar to GX because everyone likes the fact about academies.

 

Also if you want to know where book 2 is its on my sig infact im changing my signature.

[TenThousandFists]

Just o u know, monsters can't attack when u activate Misfortune.

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Just so u know, Daimond Dude's effect only affects Normal Spell Cards.

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You really need to look at card effects before you make these chapters, cuz u made a lot of mistakes.

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Well my mistake about dimond dude and misfortune however,2 mistakes is not a lot it's just a minor mistake ive seen other fan fics with more mistakes but it doesn't matter because everyone I repeat everyone makes mistakes even you made a small mistake on the post you made.Thanks anyway ill sort the misfortune thing soon is see for dimond dude.