Trap card Idea

[enzo51]

Here's a bit of a revision of a trap I did months ago though I'll be scrapping it for now, so...

 

Trap Card / Continuous

Name: None as of yet

Effect: Select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. The monster cannot attack or change its battle position. The controller of this card must then pay 800 Life Points in each of his or her Standby Phases in order to keep this card in effect. When the selected monster is removed from the field, destroy this card. The controller of the selected monster takes damage equal to its original ATK.

 

OCG Corrections? Feel free to Reply

[Bringerofcake]

I only see 2 major errors:

 

1. during your Standby Phase

2. You didn't specify a time for when the last effect activates.