Guest Welche Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 [align=center][spoiler=Monsters]Soul KnightLevel 6 / Warrior / Water2400 ATK / 1300 DEFSoul Knight is a fallen angel. He was in heaven until he developed a taste for battle when he dot sen to earth to repent. He corrected his ways, but God has cursed him. He can rome forever on earth, but to enter heaven he must live out a life as a normal human and suffer all their weakness'. He chooses to stay immortal and wanders the earth, always training his ability with the blade of any weapon and searching for a way to tap into the magic in the air around him. Soul HarvesterLevel 3 / Spellcaster / Dark900 ATK / 900 DEFThe number of cards on the field determines this cards effect:Even- Increase the ATK of all cards with "Soul" in their name by 600 and decrease their DEF by 600Odd- Increase the DEF of all cards with "Soul" in their name by 700 and decrease their ATK by 400 Ten-Thousand Soul StatueLevel 5 / Rock / Earth900 ATK / 2500 DEFFLIP: This card gains one of the following effects depending on who's turn it is.Your's- Once per turn, pay 1000 Life Points, draw one card.Your Opponent's- Once per turn, on your opponents turn, you gain 500 Life Points and your opponent draws one card. [spoiler=Spells]Gospel of the SoulSpell / NormalPay 1700 Life Points. Special Summon 1 "Soul Knight" from your Graveyard. It gains the following effect: This card can only be attacked by a DARK monster. [spoiler=Traps]Soul BlockTrap / NormalYou may pay 1000 Life points to negate an attack. The monster who's attack was negated loses 1000 ATK. If their attack become lower then 0, change their level to -5 and make their attack 0. [/align] Link to comment
Luna Lovegood Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Interesting Flavour Text. Spelling could use some work, butt i like it Link to comment
destron Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Interesting story, but because you have no support/effect, the card itself is boring. So yeah, maybe do an effect version below it? Link to comment
Guest Welche Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Maybe, but maybe I will just add a support card.... Link to comment
玄魔の王 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Interesting story' date=' but because you have no support/effect, the card itself is boring. So yeah, maybe do an effect version below it?[/quote'] Nothing I can say that cannot be summed up by this point. 6/10 until support arrives; maybe then I'll change by verdict. Link to comment
Guest Welche Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Support will come, maybe.... Link to comment
玄魔の王 Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 3000 Life Points is too steep a cost. Drop it by half. Link to comment
Guest Welche Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Done, thanks for the help. Link to comment
玄魔の王 Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Good job man. Those work much better. Link to comment
Guest Welche Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Thanks, might add a few more if this thread stays alive long enough Link to comment
玄魔の王 Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 Pretty good new cards, but the monsters seem dissonant. Bring them together better. Link to comment
Guest Welche Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Maybe, but I think it wud be cool to see in a tv series, you know, the ultimate monster that keeps geting better. Link to comment
Guest Welche Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Thanks for the rate Link to comment
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