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"Bloodstained" A Manga Story - Chapter [7] Sent! (Updated)


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@Fog38 - Yay! I'm checking it out right now. (^_^)

 

@sleepy - It's popular? I do hope so. (^_^)

 

 

Now that I think about it, I have bad penmanship. (>_<)

And I shouldn't have ate that Cheetos. (Smudge is on the last page of Chapter 1) LOL

 

Anyway, please continue supporting. I'm sure the other chapters would be added pretty soon. ;)

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*Cries from happiness* :cry: I now know what I was put on the Earth to do.

 

What would that be?

To stalk Blamo and make sure that he finishes Bloodstaned' date=' then to get ever copy in mint condition and sell it for 5 million dollars.

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OMG a STALKER! XD

LOL. I don't think it'll reach that high. XDDD

Besides, its gonna take me a lot of time to finish it. (^_^)

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Wow. I can't believe I funking missed this.

 

It's drawn great. (At least, better than me.)

 

However, since I'm a writer, not an artist, I'll be review your plot and such.

 

-pulls out scholarly glasses-

 

Alright then.

 

First of all, I'm going to be very blunt with you.

 

The whole, 'guy meets girl, guy kicks demon ass for girl' thing is cliche and has been done. So, that's not to good on your side. Naru seems like a cliche 'manga teenage boy that becomes a hero/villain'. Same goes for his lovely female friend. So, you have several cliches on your side now.

 

HOWEVER~

 

The great things about cliches is that you can always make them turn things around and make them original. So, you have that to your advantage.

 

If anything's missing, it's the innocent friend/acquaintance that ends up getting involved with stuff he does not want to get involved in. Aka, the running gag.

 

Still, I love the art style and have my hopes for this.

 

So yeah, continue.

 

Or I'll find you, and shoot you.

 

With a shoe.

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