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"Bloodstained" A Manga Story - Chapter [7] Sent! (Updated)


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We haven't meet yet, but I'm a member of ALD. Fuzzball told me about your manga. And I have a lot to say.

-Character design and art is by far the best part, they look professional. Amazing work. The sisters were wearing the same clothing in chapter 1 but you fixed that. Other then that they are all great.

-The comedy parts are great, I couldn't help but laugh. Loved them. Also the paneling is high quality, if you're trying to be professional you are really close.

-As for the story telling, chapter one is a little bland, I don't find my self caring for any of the characters. But as the story progresses the characters become slightly less bland. Still need alittle work on that though.

-Backgrounds need more work, but there is improvement in the later chapters.

-Inking is nonexistent.

 

I own a small online company that publishes English manga, if you're interested in getting payed doing what you love send me a im, other wise I love your work. And I hope you keep it up. :)

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@Fuzzie:

- Well, the other demons were just small fry anyway. XD Thanks.

 

@Fog38:

 

- (LOL Fuzzball XD)

- Thanks

- Glad you like the comedy. Professional? Or are you just pulling my leg? (^_^)

- Yeah, Chapter 1 is kinda short. But I wanted it to end in a cliff hanger and it'd be too long if I combine it with Chapter 2.

- I suck in backgrounds. :(

- What's Inking?

 

You own a publishing company? Nice. Hmm... I'll think about it. (I'm not very confident with my work because my siblings often murder it with their critical reviews) (T_T). Btw, what's an "im"?

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@Fuzzie:

- Well' date=' the other demons were just small fry anyway. XD Thanks.

 

@Fog38:

 

- (LOL Fuzzball XD)

- Thanks

- Glad you like the comedy. Professional? Or are you just pulling my leg? (^_^)

- Yeah, Chapter 1 is kinda short. But I wanted it to end in a cliff hanger and it'd be too long if I combine it with Chapter 2.

- I suck in backgrounds. :(

- What's Inking?

 

You own a publishing company? Nice. Hmm... I'll think about it. (I'm not very confident with my work because my siblings often murder it with their critical reviews) (T_T). Btw, what's an "im"?

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@Fuzzie:

- Well' date=' the other demons were just small fry anyway. XD Thanks.

 

@Fog38:

 

- (LOL Fuzzball XD)

- Thanks

- Glad you like the comedy. Professional? Or are you just pulling my leg? (^_^)

- Yeah, Chapter 1 is kinda short. But I wanted it to end in a cliff hanger and it'd be too long if I combine it with Chapter 2.

- I suck in backgrounds. :(

- What's Inking?

 

You own a publishing company? Nice. Hmm... I'll think about it. ([b']I'm not very confident with my work because my siblings often murder it with their critical reviews[/b]) (T_T). Btw, what's an "im"?

 

Siblins will be siblings. My mom's sister used to steal her Barbie coloring books, scribble all the pictures out with a big fat "UGLY" over each one. My dad's brother used to flush my dad's Hot-Wheels down the toilet, but that's a completely different story of my family's.

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chapter 4, page 3. the gundam is on a poster or large piece of paper taped on the boys door. i think his name is kaoru?

 

by the way, i think inking has to do with shading, (which is actually a pencil technique) or more likely, has more to do with the fact that you don't 'color in' the different areas of your manga.

 

and they're suppposed to be critical. deal with it. listen to what they say, and if any of what they have to say is valid, try to incorporate it into your techniques. if not, then hit them with an invalid picture. for example...

invalid.jpg

see?

 

p.s. snake = epically awesome! :mrgreen:

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chapter 4' date=' page 3. the gundam is on a poster or large piece of paper taped on the boys door. i think his name is kaoru?

 

by the way, i think inking has to do with shading, (which is actually a pencil technique) or more likely, has more to do with the fact that you don't 'color in' the different areas of your manga.

 

and they're suppposed to be critical. deal with it. listen to what they say, and if any of what they have to say is valid, try to incorporate it into your techniques. if not, then hit them with an invalid picture. for example...

[img']http://i397.photobucket.com/albums/pp53/Jayson_Blaze/invalid.jpg[/img]

see?

 

p.s. snake = epically awesome! :mrgreen:

 

You found the 2nd Gundam. XD

(Kaoru is a girl. The boy is Naru)

 

Oh, don't worry. I follow all the useful advice I can get. My only problem is that I don't actually have professional materials.

 

I use:

- HB pencil

- PILOT Ball point pen

- PILOT Permanent Marker

- Orion Ruler

- My head.

- I draw on the floor. I got no table (T_T)

 

(I like MGS too. :))

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