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"Bloodstained" A Manga Story - Chapter [7] Sent! (Updated)


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The art is good, but too basic. I feel different tones would help, but I suppose that would take photoshop, which means more work and time. Since it updates rarely as it is, that would hurt. I'll give you props for actually drawing your manga, compared to other sprite mangas on the site, though, and despite it is basic, it is pretty good, at least better than me.

 

The story...I suppose it is too early to judge, however, I'll judge it anyway. I would defiently say it isn't unoriginal, however calling it original would be a crime. I'll place it somewhere in between. It's fine, but the vampire thing is kinda random. Rain might as well be a demon, an angel, or some immortal being. So far she shows absolutely no characteristics for a vampire, other than perhaps being mysterious. I'm counting on you to explore this later on. Although the story is fast paced, it seems we haven't learned much since the end of chapter 1. At least from the preview for chapter 5, I see you will explore the idea of a "contract", so you better not let anyone down with this.

 

Tell Gaijin Manga to hurry up.

 

Hope this helps, and hope you continue this and it turns out well.

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Thanks for the comments, guys. I'm really happy you support it. (^_^)

 

Anyway... some updates... hmm...

 

- Well, since I've already given them Chapter 5, I'm sure they'll post it whenever they get the time.

- I'm currently making Chapter 6. And I discovered the "WILD WORDS" Font. So I'll probably use that on the next chapters so you don't have to suffer from my penmanship. XD

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wild words eh? that might help a bit with the delivery, but i didn't necessarily have a problem with your penmanship to begin with.

and tell those outcasts that people who follow the manga hate to be kept waiting. they need to add chapter 5, and they need to do it now. i mean, doesn't it occur to them that the manga as a whole will suffer due to their taking so long to post the chapters insofar as it taking so long could lead to a falling away from the series? of course, that wouldn't happen with me, but it is still a very valid and real concern, as i am sure you already know.

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Chaos Zero I agree full heartedly with what you are saying about the manga and losing fans due to it taking so damn long. And if there was anything I could do beyond tell our web site guy to hurry up I would.

 

So here's what I'm thinking; flood ([email protected]) with requests to hurry up on posting Bloodstained chapter 5.

 

If our webmaster sees a fan reaction to the slow updates then hopefully he will speed up the process in the future.

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