Yugioh: Wrath of Ages [Chapter 2 up] [Accepting new characters apps PM me if you want] [PG-13]

[Rook Bishop]

I basically found scraps of a story I work on long ago and decide to make it into a fan-fic. Since the story was incomplete and I needed to characters, I will accept any app of a character they you want to be feature in here. When I you submit your characters, I will post them on this post. They will appear chosen to the way the story outcome. I will promise that all accepted app will appear in the fan-fic. Just pm the app. Note: I may need something else and I will pm you it. Also your decks may change (minor) to strengthen it as the story progress.

 

 

[spoiler=Here the App:]

 

Name: (optional if you want a nickname)

 

Gender:

 

Age: (Optional)

 

Personality: (needed to describe how the character acts. Can be included in the Bio)

 

Appearance:(can submit a pic or describe him/her (Optional you can submitted one like this at http://www.tektek.org/dream/ )Ex: but I prefer the other way but this is fun to do somehow. Just don't be flashy.)

 

Bio: (needed to relate some history with the character but can be brief)

 

Deck: (Deck List or Deck type if deck type I make a custom deck of that catageory [You can use custom cards must PM me pic of cards or link]You can use synchros)

 

Fave/Signature Card: (Deck will be overall around this card. Can be custom cards and more than one.)

 

Aligment: (Good/Neutral/Evil)

 

Sided with: (Seku/Yugi/Teku group)

 

 

 

[spoiler=Characters (work in progress)]

 

[spoiler=Yugi/Atem]

 

Name: Yugi Moto /Atem 'King of Games'(Duh lol)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 17

 

Personality: Caring, Kind, Determined

 

[spoiler=Appearance:]

[spoiler=hint at my other fan-fic in the process]

 

 

Bio: The King of Games who always has his nose in some game. Yugi is especially adept at playing Duel Monsters, a.k.a. Magic and Wizards. He wears the Millennium Puzzle, one of the, supposely, seven Millennium Items and an ancient Egyptian artifact holding the spirit of the pharaoh around his neck. When Yugi is playing a game or under stress, the spirit inside the Millennium Puzzle surfaces and the 3,000-year-old nameless pharaoh (5,000 in the English version) takes partial or complete control of the body.

 

The pharaoh Atem who sacrificed himself, thus saving the world from destruction. His soul is trapped in Yugi's Millennium Puzzle. After eight long years of effort, Yugi puts together the puzzle pieces and releases Atem, who then possesses Yugi's body. Atem calls himself "Dark" ("Yami") because he lost the memory of his previous life. His favorite card is the Dark Magician but he also holds the three Egyptian God Cards.

 

Deck: Dark Magician and Girl/Egyptian Gods

 

Fave/Signature Card: Dark Magician/ Egyptain Gods/ Kuriboh/ Royal Knights/Dark Magician Girl/Magnet Warriors/Gear Warriors/Chaos monsters (alot more but I not saying all of them)

 

Aligment: Good

 

Sided with: His/Seku

 

 

[spoiler=Tea]

 

Name: Tea Garner

 

Gender: Female

 

Age: 17

 

Personality: Tea is sweet and supportive to everyone.

 

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

 

Bio: Tea (like Anzu better) is Yugi's childhood friend. Although her dueling ability is decent and she regularly defeats Joey, Tea is not a game-player and her ability is well below that of Yugi. She is sweet and supportive to everyone. During Duels, she and Tristan are basically cheerleaders for Yugi and Joey. During here years, especially in the beginning, Tea is somewhat of a "tomboy". She is athletic and secretly works at a fast food restaurant to save money; her dream is to attend dancing school overseas in New York City, New York, United States. Tea has romantic feelings for both Yugi and Atem, creating a love triangle.

 

Deck: Fairy and Spellcaster Deck

 

Fave/Signature Card: Mystical Elf, Fire Sorcerer, Maha Vailo and the Dark Magician Girl

 

Aligment: Good

 

Sided with: Yugi group

 

 

[spoiler=Joey]

 

Name: Joey Wheeler

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 18

 

Personality: Joey is rash, hot-headed, and tend to jump at things without thinking.

 

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

 

Bio: Joey is Yugi's best friend. Initially nothing more than a street thug and bully, Joey is touched by Yugi's behavior towards him and they become loyal friends. He likes playing games but usually loses to Yugi. Joey is rash and gets himself into trouble quite often.

 

Deck: Warrior and Lucky Dragon/Warrior Deck

 

Fave/Signature Card: Red Eyes Black Dragon, Flame Swordsman, Jinzo, ScapeGoat, Kunai with Chain, Time Wizard, Gearfried the Iron Knight, Legendary Fisherman, and Insect Queen.

 

Aligment: Good

 

Sided with: Yugi group

 

 

[spoiler=Rebecca]

 

Name: Rebecca Hawkins

 

Gender:Female

 

Age: 13

 

Personality: Not Childlike, Annoyance, Stresslike, can HACK software, a Genius (do I need to say more.....she college student for crying out loud)

 

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

 

Bio: Rebecca is the American Duel Monsters champion. She is also the Intercontinental Champion. Rebecca is also the granddaughter of Arthur Hawkins, an old friend of Yugi Muto's grandfather, Solomon Muto. Rebecca encounters Yugi as Yugi returns from Duelist Kingdom. She accuses Solomon of stealing her grandfather's prized Blue-Eyes White Dragon and demanded he duel her for it, when asked about how she knew that Solomon "stole" the card, she replies that Keith Howard told her, although it can be presumed that Keith merely lied to her out of annoyance, indicating that she tried forcing the information out of him. As he was recently discharged from the hospital, Solomon cannot duel, so Yugi duels Rebecca in his place. Rebecca also seems to be slaving under the delusion that Yugi is her boyfriend, something which makes Téa Gardner jealous. This doesn't seem to be a pretend crush as she has devestated when Yugi's soul was taken and tried to defeat Valon in vengeance, showing she has true feelings for Yugi.

 

Deck: Shadow Ghoul, Life Points/Fire Princess, Big Bang USA Decks

 

Fave/Signature Card: Fire Princess, Guardian Angel Joan, Millennium Shield, Marie the Fallen One, and Diamond Head Dragon

 

Aligment: Good

 

Sided with: Yugi group

 

 

[spoiler=Tristan] Name:

 

Gender:

 

Age:

 

Personality:

 

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

 

Bio: (needed to relate some history with the character but can be brief)

 

Deck: (Fave/Signature Card: (Deck will be overall around this card. Can be custom cards and more than one.)

 

Aligment: (Good/Neutral/Evil)

 

Sided with: (Seku/Yugi/Teku group)

 

 

[spoiler=Kaiba]

 

Name:

 

Gender:

 

Age:

 

Personality:

 

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

 

Bio: (needed to relate some history with the character but can be brief)

 

Deck: (Fave/Signature Card: (Deck will be overall around this card. Can be custom cards and more than one.)

 

Aligment: (Good/Neutral/Evil)

 

Sided with: (Seku/Yugi/Teku group)

 

 

[spoiler=Sekuur]

 

Name: Sekuur (Seku)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: Unknown

 

Personality: Calm, Knowing, Respectful

 

Appearance: brown-skinned, wear a gold trimmed white robe with black marking. Has a outline symbol on his forehead that sometimes appear.

 

Bio: Sekuur's past is anicent as time itself. Only those close to him know about him and yet they can't tell how he thinks. He was said to led a research team on the studies of certain artifacts until he force to lead some of his people to war against Tekuur. After the war, he seal Tekuur and his ultimate beasts in stone tablets forever imprisoning them until modern Egypt and the introduction of Duel Monsters.

 

Deck: WOD Deck (Wrath of Destiny)

 

Fave/Signature Card: ???

 

Aligment: Good

 

Sided with: His and Yugi group

 

 

[spoiler=Tekuur]

 

Name: Tekuur (Teku)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: Unknown

 

Personality: Dark, Evil, Hateful, Calm, Feared

 

Appearance: brown-skinned. Wear a gold trimmed black robe with white markings. Has a outline symbol on his forehead that appear when he enraged or summoning his ulimate beasts.

 

Bio: Tekuur's past is as dark and anicent as the shadow of time. He was the lead researcher of the unknown group, Uni, and the general of the war against Sekuur and his follower. He plague the lands and corrupted the people with his power making it obiviously that he was the ruler of the new world. His great beasts was made from his very essence and was consider formidable against any beasts or warriors that came in their way. After being defeated and seal away, he now appear in the Present Day, stealing certain Duelists' dueling souls (the essence that drive them to duel). How he was freed remain a mystery though?

 

Deck: WOA Deck (Wrath of Ages)

 

Fave/Signature Card: Soko, the Cost Free Monster God, Boko, the Cost Free Life Savior God, and Noko, the Cost Free Cards Savior God.

 

Aligment: Evil

 

Sided with: His group

 

 

[spoiler=Shan]

 

Name: Shan

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 22 (Modern Day)

 

Personality: Smart, Collected, Self-Power

 

Appearance: Wear mage clothes and wizard hat with a bell on the top hanging. Wear glasses and has a small scar on his left cheek of his face. His eyes are pure white and is sometime surrounded by a white aura

 

Bio: Shan was vice-chairman of research and development and Seku's part second-in-command of the Nameless War. Shan deal with summoning and magic that render his opponent dazzle when his 'seal the deal' with a counterattack. He is Seku's best friend and easily known as Chaos's rival. He specialize in Light and Spellcasters, with the tone of other Light based creature, while combining magic to make devasting or impressive combo that support other cards. Seku nickname him "The Mage Combo Caster" because of this.

 

Deck: Light Beckons

 

Fave/Signature Card:

 

Aligment: Good

 

Sided with: Seku group

 

 

[spoiler=Chaos]

 

Name: Chaos

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 22 (Modern Day)

 

Personality: Forward, Cocky, Ruthless, Protected

 

Appearance: Wear dark clothes and bands, has long hair, and beastlike teeth and nail. He is cover with scars and his eyes are pitch black. Is also surround by a black aura

 

Bio: Chaos is the Seku's friend and Shan's rival. He was also second-in-command of the Nameless War, due to the fact that Seku didn't want to rank them differently. Chaos etch his very soul into the gloomy and scary stuff. He prefer walking in the cold night's embrace and sometime is accompanies by Seku and Shan. Chaos only think of Seku as his only friend since their people consider him bad juju because of his nature. He specialize in Dark and Dark based monsters. Luring his opponent in the shadow of his creature and thus crushing and engulfing them. The Black Commander is what Seku named his due to the fact that he control any creature with a loving cold fist and completly engulf his opponent in the shadow. It is said he made a portal to seal to all souls in an everlasting torment and seal Tekuur's beasts true nature within.

 

Deck: Shadow Beckon

 

Fave/Signature Card:

 

Aligment: Evil

 

Sided with: (Seku group)

 

 

[spoiler=]

 

 

[spoiler=More to come]

 

will be add later thoughout the story

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Accepted Members]

 

[spoiler=Lord Ursus] creating app he give it too me later

 

 

[spoiler=Kazekage-------Gaara]

 

Name: Yomi "Marsuvees" Black (Goes by Black)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 25 (Appears real unknown)

 

Personality: (Dark, snide. Taunts, and loves to give confusing riddles.

 

Appearance:

 

Bio: An evil man from America. He was born of Black it is said, but not much is known. He is nicknamed after his favorite character from a book.

 

Deck: Clear and Dark (See my threads.)

 

Fave/Signature Card: Clear Vice Dragon, The Dark Creator.

 

Aligment: Evil

 

Sided with: Seku group

 

 

[spoiler=Yu-Gi-Oh 5D`S]

 

Name: Donald

 

Gender:Male

 

Age: 12

 

Personality: Happy and a good talker

 

Appearance:

 

Bio: His brother died in a car crash 2 years ago.

 

Deck: Rampaing Current (Water deck)

 

Fave/Signature Card: Puenguin Shoilder

 

Aligment: Good

 

Sided with: Yugi group

 

 

[spoiler=Kingnova unlimited]

 

Name:Justin Braker(also is known as sephiroth.)

 

Age:Unknown,but most think he is 27.

 

Personality:Evil and Condescending, looks down on people he believes are inferior.

 

Appearance:

 

Bio:A man who's origin's are unknown,but most believe he comes from another world.

 

Deck:Black Knight and Dragonic Fury.

 

Fave/Signature Card:Black Knight Cloud Strife.

 

Alignment:Evil.

 

Sided With:Seku group.

 

 

[spoiler=]

 

Name: Kenizo Tren

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 17

 

Personality: Kenzio is a rather odd boy, and beleves in a world with life on another planet. He thinsk everything is a joke, and laughs at everything even when it's not going his way. He normaly acts unusual alot of time.

 

[spoiler=Appearance:]

 

 

Bio: Kenzio grew up in a very odd family. He is casted as ' evil ' for what he did as a kid, Most people around his age, remember his story on the news for ' playing ' with matchs at least thats what he told the cops. Both his mom, and dad died in the fire, and he didn't so any sign of damage. He was only 8 when this happend, so he couldn't really have any adult charges. So they sent him to live with his grandmother, which was a nut, and caused him to beleve in life on other planets so much, he started to base a deck off of them. One night he found some rare, cards no one had touched, and tresured them, but doesen't tell any one how he got em` ( These are the ones, you pick from my Alien Card Thread. ). He has dueld with them every sense, and hasn't lost alot with his deck. Because he's so freaky, most opponents are freaked out before they even get into a duel with him.

 

Deck: His deck is based off aliens, You may use some of the orginal Alien Arch from yu-gi-oh, but if you would add some from my Alien card thread, that you would see fit, please do so. ^-^

 

[spoiler=Fave/Signature Card:]

 

( Please pick at least this card from my thread. )

 

 

 

Aligment: Neutral ( Alother most people consider him Evil, from the news report. )

 

Sided with: What ever one is Neutralish?

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue]

 

Time Unknown

 

A battle torn landscape is seen throughtout the area; humans and monsters cover in anicent armor piled upon each others. The number of dead....too great to count. Far upon the landscape, battles are still going. Though scatter, their noise can be heard throught the Nameless Area. Suddenly, a warrior riding a blue dragon fly across the area and blasted any foe it see. The warrior cries as she hears the screams of the once known comrades and friends gone or slain because of this war. She glided to dragon to a campsite fill with battle scar monsters and fatigued humans.

 

 

A man ran to the lady as she step off the dragon. "What say you on the front?" the man said. The Lady replied, "The battle continues on. When will be prepare for the assualt?" The man shook his head. "When the sun rise....." The Lady's was silent. (That soon, huh.....) "Where is our Messiah? Our Keeper? Our Hope? Our Bearer?"The man pointed. "He is in the tent.....still planning." The Lady nodded. "Thank you."

 

 

The Lady walk toward the smallest tent and step in. There she see a man who is cover with markings and is surrounded by books. The Lady smiled, "I suggest you get a better protection spell around this place, my Lord." The Bearer didn't look at her when he responded. "I told you, Ako, I'm not 'your Lord' nor any other of those silly titles." Ako smiled again. "My apologizes..."

 

 

The man raise his hand to stop her from speaking. "Get out!!!" the Keeper screamed. The man spear Ako out of the tent as it was suddenly engulf in flame. Ako pull out her swords and look around. She saw nothing. She turned to the man. She saw him raise his hands and spoke words. "Ais la pa roko..."

 

 

Energy ripples came from his hands revealing dragons and flying beasts above them. "Battle station!!!!! They're here!!!!" Ako shouted. The confusion and orders drove everyone in a frenzy. The humans abruptly started to let loose the monsters. The enemy had launch a sneak attack. The beasts came speeding down attacking anything that moves or stood out. Ako suddenly fell to the ground as she felt thunderous footstep from the distance. Ako rushed to the edge of the site where she saw waves of monsters and humans. The enemy's forces spread out farther than the eyes could seen. "By the divine...." Ako said with a shock.

 

 

She suddenly stood there as a five headed dragon hover in front of her. She was in shock that see could move. The creature reared it heads and fire a powerful blast.

 

Ako thinking, (My Lord.......Sekuur)

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1]

 

Present Day

 

Yugi and his friends were on their way to Kabia's Grandest Dueling Competition. Yugi only agreed to join if his friends was able to come. Kabia was sitting at the backseat beside Mokuba while Yugi and his friends was on the other side. They was watching the final matchup of the second round.

 

 

"Did you guys seen that last duel? It was awesome!" said Joey. Joey was sitting straight as he was watching Kabia's TV. Yugi turn at Joey with an amazing look. "Yea, Intense! Who know that the reigning Champion of the Egypt would lose to a beginning rookie."

 

 

Kabia frown upon hearing this. "If you ask me, I say he cheated! Kabia turn off the TV and look outside the window. Yugi and the others look at Kabia. Deep inside Kabia knew that a rookie beating a champ mean trouble.

 

"He kinda remind me of you, Yugi. He may be even better.

 

 

Joey suddenly snapped at Kabia "Kabia, I would say a good decent words to you, but there a lady present." Kabia smiled. "Spare me the threats, Wheeler! I just saying that Yugi should be proud that someone is following in his footsteps." Mokuba was looking at his brother. (Seto....)

 

 

The limo suddenly stop to a halted. Kabia demanded the driver why he had stop. The driver pointed to the front window to a body in front of the limo. Tea look out the window and gasped. "There someone in the road." Yugi and the other got out of the car to see if the stranger was alright. Mokuba came closer to check on him. "He fine you guys."

 

 

Everyone had sighed, expect for Kabia who begin walking back to the limo. "Mokuba say he fine! Now let get back on track!" Duke got in from of him and look at Kabia. "Is that all you think about? We just can't leave him in the desert like this." Kabia look at Mokuba. "Fine! Bring him!"

 

 

Everybody pick the stranger up and put him in the limo. Atem's voice suddenly appear in Yugi's mind "Don't you think it a little strange that we suddenly met this stranger in the middle of nowhere. Yugi was look at Atem. "Yeah, but at least he safe." Everybody was getting in the limo until Atem saw something around the stranger's neck. "Yugi, look! Around his neck.....is that?" Yugi looked at Atem while he also holding a card in his hand. "I believe so...."

 

 

Yugi showed Atem the card "Atem look! It the "Seal of Orichalcos." He's a member of Dartz!" The necklace around the stranger's neck begin to glow brightly. Everything suddenly begin to shake. Joey was in the air a little nervous. "Heeeeey!!!!! Whaaat haaaaapppeeen?" Yugi shouted to the other inside while he seeing the limo moved. "Everyone!!! Get out!!! Everybody jump out of the limo as it was beginning to rise. Suddenly, it crash back down. Duke got to his feet but Yugi grab him. "Hey, that kid is still in there!" Yugi got to his feet. "I know.....I think he is the one causing all this."

 

 

Everybody watch as the limo's door open letting the stranger out. "Well, well. I guess you figured it out before anyone else could, Yugi. You was always the smart one." Yugi took a step forward. "What's your name....Soul Collecter? Tell us why you are here." The stranger frown but suddenly grinned. "My reasons are mine to keep, Pharoh." "Why that?" Yugi asks as he was preparing himself. The stranger smiled as he said, "Because I choose to keep it that way. Whereas my name is some concern, call me Tekkuur....for short anyway.

 

 

Joey was right beside Yugi. "I believe my friend ask you a question, Tefuka." Teku frowned. "My name is Tekuur, Mr. Wheeler. You don't want to get me mad when I only here for Yugi and the Pharaoh." Yugi was started to feel something."What do you want with us?"Teku grinned a big grin while holding his face. "Obviously, isn't it.....I want to rid the world of you so that may plans may go a little smoother." Joey, Tristan, Duke, and Tea came in front of Yugi shielding him Teku. Joey then open his duel disk. "You have to go through us first." Teku smiled. "Glady.... Teku raise he duel disk until suddenly Kabia was in front of him with his duel disk and deck already out. "You going to have to duel me if you want him."

 

 

Teku look at Kabia. "You're arrogant. You know that right? I have no inte...." Kabia suddenly interrupted him. "Well, I guess you better start getting interested because I the one destined to beat Yugi." Teku frowned but suddenly smile again. "Bold? Aren't you now?" Kabia look at him with a cocky face. "It come with the job and prove I'm the best."

 

Teku was snickering when he commented. "Alright then. I'll duel you and take you 'will' away." Yugi mind suddenly was in question. (What does he mean by that?) Kabia, I think maybe.... Kabia hold his hand out. "Spare me the lectures, Yugi and watch how I going to finally beat you. Teku laughed as he and Kabia shuffled each other deck and step a few feet away and spoke. "Let Duel!!!"

 

 

Teku spoke. "The winner of this duel get to duel Yugi and prove that he is the best." Kabia had smiled. "Don't worry! I just that good to know I am. Teku growled but had smile in the end. "I starts things off since I gave you an excellent hand and all. I will draw and set 1 card on the field and end my turn." Kabia drew a card as his Life Point had displayed 4000LP. "Is that your best move? I draw. Kabia then look at hand. "I summon 'Lord of Dragon' on the field. Attack my warrior." Lord of D. came rushing at Teku and suddenly slash at him like a dragon. "Next I set 1 card down and end." Teku was humming as his Life Point to 2800. "I draw and set another card on the field. I end." Kabia smirked and smiled. "This duel ended before it even begin.

 

 

Meanwhile the other was the duel. "This dude isn't putting up much of a show. Kabia got this one in this bag." Joey said with a sure face. "What did you expect? My brother is the greatest!" said Mokuba as he cheer his brother on.

 

 

Back on duel Kabia spoke. "You was right about giving me a good hand, which is reason for losing." Kabia drew. "I activate 2 'Flute of Summoning Dragon.' Now meet my 3 'Blue Eyes White Dragon' and 'Ryu-Ran'. Next I reveal my face down.....Polymerization. Now meet my 'Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon'." Kabia dragon merge as one to form he great dragon. Blue Eyes Ultimate hover in the air then suddenly roar at Teku. "Soon my Blue Eyes but I going to give you a boost. I activate from my hand....'The Fang of Critias'! Teku eyes had roses. "Now meet Blue Eyes Ultimate Fang Dragon!!!!" A huge three-headed fanged dragon appear from the sky. It roar was echoing as it destory 'Ryu-Ran' and 'Lord of Dragon.' "Finish this duel!!! Attack with Triple Fang Blast!" Teku stood there smiling. "You're dumber than you look."

 

 

Kabia had gasped. "What?!?!" Teku touch his facedown. "I activate my facedown 'Copycat Mirror'." A clone of Kabia dragon appear from the card and landed on the Teku side of the field. "Now I activate my other card......'Double Heads'. This card will double the attack of all monster I have making this my clone dragon's ATK 9200!!!!!" Kabia was shock. "But that mean......" Teku smile as he said silently. "You lose. Teku's dragon blast Kabia's dragon and chuck of the blasts hit Kabia.

 

 

Seto fell to the ground smoking. Mokuba ran to him and saw his eyes was pure white when he LP hit 0. "How could I lose to him!?!?!" Mokuba was shaking his brother. "Seto!!!!" He suddenly glared at Teku. "What did you do to him?!?!"

 

Teku simply smiled. "The same thing I about to do to Yugi Moto."

 

 

Yugi walk toward Teku and summon Atem. "I guess you get to duel me after all." Teku had a straight face. "Finally." Atem activate his duel disk. "When I win, I want you undo what you did to Kabia." Teku smiled. "Agreed, but if I win...I get another collection." They both rose they head up. "LET DUEL!!!!!"

 

 

To Be Continued

 

[spoiler=cards used] [spoiler=Kabia]

[spoiler=Teku]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2]

 

Tekuur drew a card. "I start things off this time. I place 5 cards on the field and end." Atem/Yugi look at him with a surprise look. (What he thinking? He place five cards on the field so one of them is a Trap. Luckily, I have something for that.) "I play Heavy Storm! Now all your facedown are destroys leaving you wide open." A gust of wind blew from the card destroy all Teku's cards expect for one. "What?!?!"

 

 

Teku smiled as two shadow hand came from the card as it was still facedown. One hand brought Teku's cards back to his hand while the other hand send Yugi's cards to the Graveyard and given him a new hand. "If you wondering what happen, allow me to explain. The card rose up and disappear. "That useful card was call 'Banished of the Beings'. Whenever it is destroyed facedown, I can bring back all cards that was destroyed during the same turn it was destroyed to my hand. In addition, you lose all cards that was you have in hand and draw a new hand equal to the cards you lost. It back in my Deck now since you destroy up to 5 cards that was on my field. And since you can use the hand this turn, you must end your turn."

 

 

"Now let see.....I activate 3 'Dian Keto, The Cure Master' to gain 3000 Life Points. Oh yeah I can also activate any Trap card from my hand now. I play 'Synch Replay'. With this card, I can replay any turn or chain link all for the cost of not doing nothing on the turn I activate it. Now I gain 3000 more." Sparkles of light shine on Teku as his Life Points meter increase from 4000LP to 10000LP. "I guess I end now." /Atem/Yugi was stunned by the displayed of how Teku use his cards. "Amazing! I must admitted you are good, but I have the heart of the cards.[/b]

 

 

Yugi drew. (4000LP) "I set this card facedown and set this monster facedown. I end." Teku smiled. "I must admitted too. You are doing better than anyone I ever fought in a long time." Teku drew. "I summon this card on the field facedown and set a card facedown and end." Yugi draw and shifted his cards. (This could work.) I do the same as before. Summon a monster facedown and another card on the field. I end. (Now let see what you do.) Teku smiled as he drew.

 

 

(I got a deck of tricks to show you Pharaoh.) Teku grinned. "I reveal my face down monster. It 'Avatar of the Pot'! Now I activate his effect.....I discard my Pot of Greed to draw three cards, but that not all I also activate my 'Synch Replay' again. Now I gain addition 3 cards making 6 cards in my hand." Teku look at his newly form hand and smile. Yugi saw this and smirked. "You got a suprise for me.....don't you?" Teku started to chuckled and laughed covering half his face.

 

 

"It been a while since I use this card. It only fitting that it will be your downfall." Yugi gasped as he saw Teku head reveal a symbol on his forehead. "What is this card that make you so certain you will win this duel?" Teku look at Atem/Yugi. "I won't keep you waiting. I activate the Forbidden Ritual Card 'Black Fames Ritual of the Cost Free Family'. Teku was surround by flames as the symbol on his head glowed more brightly. "Now witness my beast as I offer up my 'Avator and another card from my hand." The card in Teku's hand burn up as the Avatar was too engulf in flames. The flames intensify as three pillar bearing a Symbol on it rose behind Teku. The flame on the middle pillar jump in the air and landed on the field engulfing all of Yugi monsters and three cards from his deck in it black sea of flame. A slender man with a broke featherless wing and a full one appear out of the flame. His skin was deeply bright, but could be seen that it could darken. He was covering wrappings as his featherless wing show it bones. He open his eyes and glance at Yugi. He then smile while putting out a needle and begin marking himself. Yugi took a step back as the flames was being absorb in him. Yugi also saw 3 of his cards and his monster being burn to ash.

 

 

"What kind of monster is that?" Teku laughs madly as he very presence seem to change. "Pharaoh meet my guardian, servant, and friend....'Soko, the Cost Free Monster God'!!!! Soko spread it wings and sent a wind current at Atem/Yugi causing him to fall. "That was too real." Atem/Yugi got back up. "Your 'friend' may be strong but let see if he can stand up to his appearance and name. (A God monster that I never heard of. I must find it weakness.) Teku smiled. I end, Yugi. I want to see what you planning on doing.

 

 

Yugi drew and look at the card. "Alright! I activate my facedowns 'A Hero Vengenace' and 'The Rope from Beyond'. First, my 'Rope from Beyond' allow me to summon any monster from my deck when my monster is destroyed. Now meet 'Magus, the Spirt Caller' and for his effect...I allow to bring back all my monsters that was destroy on the turn he was summon. And now for the other card I activated. It allow me to destroy one monster you control when I my was destroyed and when that happen I can summon 1 monster who fall in the same class as it. Now say goodbye to you Cost Free God!!! A spirited warrior appear and flew at Soko. Soko just flap his wings once and the ghost was gone. "What?!?!?"

 

 

Teku laughed. "I forgot to tell you.....Soko is immune to your Trap Cards.

 

 

To be continued.....

 

[spoiler=card used] [spoiler=Yugi/Atem]

[spoiler=Teku]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3]

 

[spoiler=Cards useds

 

[Rook Bishop]

bump

[Guest Tainted Black]

Name: Yomi "Marsuvees" Black (Goes by Black)

Gender: Male

Age: 25 (Appears real unknown)

Personality: (DArk, snide. Taunts, and loves to give confusing riddles.

Appearance:

Bio: An evil man from America. He was born of Black it is said, but not much is known. He is nicknamed after his favorite character from a book.

Deck: Clear and Dark (See my threads.)

Fave/Signature Card: Clear Vice Dragon, The Dark Creator.

Aligment: Evil

Sided with: Seku group

[Rook Bishop]

Accepted. I realized your star level had double since the last time I met you

[Guest Tainted Black]

Yep. Just had more posts.

[Rook Bishop]

okay i typing in chapter 1

[Kingnova unlimited]

Name:Justin Braker(also is known as sephiroth.)

Age:Unknown,but most think he is 27.

Personality:Evil and Condescending,looks down on people he believes are inferior.

Appearance:

Bio:A man who's origin's are unknown,but most believe he comes from another world.

Deck:Black Knight and Dragonic Fury.

Fave/Signature Card:Black Knight Cloud Strife.

Alignment:Evil.

Sided With:Seku group.

[Rook Bishop]

lol accepted I try to make him appear in chapter 3

[Kingnova unlimited]

Cool.

[Rook Bishop]

Chapter 1 is up guys! Enjoy!

[Kingnova unlimited]

Awesome,its pretty good.

[Guest Tainted Black]

I concur.

[Rook Bishop]

thanks Gaara you will be coming up soon.....real soon (laugh manically...(coughed) choking) yea thanks

[bury the year]

Script format's banned, kiddo. Probably should change it.

[Rook Bishop]

okay.....

[Rook Bishop]

how that?

Chapter 2 will be up today guys....sorry for the delayed. I decided not to put in previously from the chapter before that it. Anyway who will win....the savior Atem/Yugi....or the beckoning Tekuur? A chapter that will feature exclusive cards and new faces.

[Rook Bishop]

Chapter is up! Sorry for the delayed.

[Lord Ursus]

I really hope you will not hate me for this, but you should study english more thoroughly. :/

 

You have serious lacks in past forms. Example: Kabia frowned upon hearing this. "If you ask me, I say he cheated! Kabia turned off the TV and look outside the window. Yugi and the others looked at Kabia. Deep inside Kabia knew that a rookie beating a champ meant (Allthough I would use "allways means trouble") trouble.

"He kinda reminds me of you, Yugi. He may be even better.

 

Another thing I noticed is that you don't use contractions properly. When you write things such as "it is", you would contract it to "it's". Instead you simply write "it".

 

Apart from that, this seems like a very good story.

 

Another notice: I don't think I will have the time to finish my application in a very long time. High school is extremely demanding and I don't think I'll have the time. Sorry, mate. :/

[Rook Bishop]

ok thanks for telling me. I don't like using past tenses that much.