I need help with this ocg on this card

[snyperfox2003]

well as the title says i need help fixing the ocg so if you can fix it for me without killing the main point of the effect +1 rep if i use it.

 

Spell - Continueous

While this card remains face-up on the Field, during each of your Standby Phases you and your opponent select 1 Monster from your respective Hands and reveal it to each other. The controller of the Monster with the lowest ATK loses 500 life points. Return the Cards used to their respective owner's Hand.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

FIXED:

 

Spell - Continuous

 

While this card remains face-up on the field, during each of your Standby Phases, you and your opponent select 1 monster from your respective hands and reveal it to each other. The controller of the monster with the lower ATK loses 500 life points. Return the cards used to their respective owner's hand.

 

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That's all it is. Just some minor capitalization stuff and you spelled "Continuous" wrong

[-Griffin]

I don't think that you 'control' cards in your hand. 'The player who revealed the monster with the lower ATK' seems better OCG

[Bringerofcake]

and "you and your opponent" are known better as "both players".

[snyperfox2003]

heres another card lore i need help with based of the reversing mirror from xiaolin showdown:

 

counter trap

Pay 1000 Life Points to Negate the activation of a Spell Card / Trap Card / Monster Card effect and destroy it. Then use the Negated Card's Effect as this Card's Effect.

[Bringerofcake]

Pay 1000 Life points. Negate the activation of a card effect and destroy that card. Then you can activate that card's effect as this card's.

 

That last part needs a bit of work, but I can't think of anything better.

[snyperfox2003]

idk if u watched xiaolin showdown, but the reversing mirror basically returned any atk back on the attacker, thats wat i was aming 4

[Bringerofcake]

The mirror basically reversed ANYTHING.

[snyperfox2003]

true something like solomn but idk