Wild C Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 I decided to make some new dragons for the metagame. I have made another Dragon card, and I will post it here instead of another thread, even if my Poll doesn't include this card. Please rate my cards and tell me what to fix, if anything. Please let me know if you like my new dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 1. do not make this between the effect..it looks bad and makes it hard to read 2.improve ur grammar 3.Dragon scales is kinda underpowered 4. i like the shadow dragon would be good in a graveyard dragon deck (i use that) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 ok, shadow dragons sweet....just raise its attack a lil...and dragon scales is really underpowered...make it like axe of despair, except with a few twists...nice cards other then that...7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 just needs a bit better OCG but pretty good4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parkourmania Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 i cant read the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wild C Posted November 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 1. do not make this between the effect..it looks bad and makes it hard to read 2.improve ur grammar 3.Dragon scales is kinda underpowered 4. i like the shadow dragon would be good in a graveyard dragon deck (i use that) 1. So basically when it has multiple effects, you would like to see a jumble of words. I thought it would be easier to read with the extra spaces. 2. Grammar: I have re-read the cards, and as far as I can tell, they are very easy to understand. But I can reword one of them a little bit. 3. If you think about certain combos you may think differently. Imagine a Big Koala equipped with this card, and Dragon's Rage on the field. You basically have a blue eyes that tramples over your opponent's defense. 4. It definately has it's perks. Do you feel that I should change the Atack power of the dragon? @ Parkourmania: Shadow Dragon. Can only be special summoned be discarding 2 level 7 monsters from your hand. Shadow Dragon cannot be destroyed in battle. Shadow Dragon can attack your opponent directly. Shadow dragon will be destroyed when it inflicts damage to your opponent. Dragon Scales: The monster equipped with Dragon Scales & Dragon Scales will be destroyed after 3 turns. Dragon scales makes the equipped monster a dragon with 300 extra attack and defense points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Nope. Instead of doing this put this symbol (-). BTW the card images are blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 K, I am now getting mad, I have now seen 5 cards like this in a row. Yet again, the picture is not good, and yet again, the grammar is not good. I am sorry if I am a jerk, but I have seen alot of cards like this today, and I have just woken up. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wild C Posted November 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 K' date=' I am now getting mad, I have now seen 5 cards like this in a row. Yet again, the picture is not good, and yet again, the grammar is not good. I am sorry if I am a jerk, but I have seen alot of cards like this today, and I have just woken up. 4/10[/quote'] Well, if you can tell me how to make the picture clearer than how I managed to get it, please do. They seemed fuzzy when I found them. Please explain how you feel the grammar is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 "While this card cannot be destroyed by battle, it is destroyed after it damges your oponent". I would say: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card inflict battle damge to your opponents Life Points, destroy this card. Also, don't put spaces between the sentances. It will make it tougher to read. I would also increase the ATK to 1400 or so, and decrease the DEF to 2000 or somthing. I mean, it is only a level 5.Here is a better picture:It is not the same one, but I think it will work just fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Don't use spaces on the card's effect. Other than that, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 just like so many befor me the spaces need to go you ca copy the format on harpies pet baby dragon for a multi effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 I edited the card. credit to Wild C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 ok you have some nice effects, but something that i dont understand is that people space there effects... so yeah, you dont have to have all that extra space, in the effect, lol but i wont penalize you for that, 9.5/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wild C Posted November 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 I edited the card. credit to Wild C I appreciate the edit, but the problem wasn't really grammar related, as my way was grammatically correct, it was kind of a word jumble, sorry. One thing I do ask is for you to make sure the summoning effects are correct. You missed part. As for the picture, I chose that one because it looks like a shadow, not a grey dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Nice effect for the fire. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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