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Bounty Hunters! plz post Contructive criticisim


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This is a Bounty Hunter set, thought it would be pretty fun to play with. Had fun with it and named some of the cards after some friends.... Im am still going to make more, but thought I would post to see how im doing so far, let me know what you think! Thanks! p.s. I hope that i inserted the pic in here correctly..

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nice

 

just a little fyi numbers only have 3 digits not four and where you put the 1st set of numbers should be where you put bh and where bh is put 1st edition or limited edition

also

eric i would beef up by 50 and cut his def by 100

josh and jake 1600/1400

also skii and terra drop a star

over all 8/10

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great theme i like it' date=' since they're bounty hunters you should add some baddies like billy the kid or jesse james or something, i like the effects of the smaller cards but my fav would be huntress legend - white. oh by the way, where can i go to get the pics you got for your cards?

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i go to deviant art for the pics. and thanks!

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alrighty then this is my contructive criticism, i love the fact that ysomeone made a set like harpie ladies, a set that goes good with each other is what im trying to say, and i also like the name bounty hunter, ok now to the negatives:

You just have to realize that things like Life Points, Graveyard, Special Summon things like that, (Trap/Spell) all have to have there first letter capitalized, ok now to a card:

In your card Impatient Client you should maybe think about rewriting it to:

This card remains on your side of the field for 2 of your End Phases, after the activation of this card. When a face-up monster on your side of the field with "Bounty" in its name, attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, you may send this card to the Graveyard. Increase your Life Points equal to the amount of Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, during the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard. (You may not send another card with "Client" in its name to the Graveyard, while this is face-up on the field).

 

lol yeah something like that, 9/10 =0 just ask if you have any questions 8)

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alrighty then this is my contructive criticism' date=' i love the fact that ysomeone made a set like harpie ladies, a set that goes good with each other is what im trying to say, and i also like the name bounty hunter, ok now to the negatives:

You just have to realize that things like Life Points, Graveyard, Special Summon things like that, (Trap/Spell) all have to have there first letter capitalized, ok now to a card:

In your card Impatient Client you should maybe think about rewriting it to:

This card remains on your side of the field for 2 of your End Phases, after the activation of this card. When a face-up monster on your side of the field with "Bounty" in its name, attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, you may send this card to the Graveyard. Increase your Life Points equal to the amount of Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, during the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard. (You may not send another card with "Client" in its name to the Graveyard, while this is face-up on the field).

 

lol yeah something like that, 9/10 =0 just ask if you have any questions 8)

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i will work on that and it will be fix befor the set is complet thank you for letting me know

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