King-Shadow Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 1] A loud voice came off of an intercom saying, “The first match of the tournament will be Kaos against the almighty Omaga”. Sebastian stared into my eyes and nodded as he said, “Kaos, you can win this, you have been training for over a year for this opportunity. Now seize it.” I nodded to my trainer Sebastian and walked over to the circular ring. The ring was a circular form about 20 feet in diameter, the rules are if you step out of the ring you lose. Both opponents start at separate sides of the ring and attack from there. There were no rules; you could do whatever you want. Bite, scratch, even kicking below the belt. The tournament was to save the world in all, no biggie. I quickly scanned the arena, ready to charge at my opponent who standing straight up was about 8 feet tall. He was a muscular… thing… He had horns on the top of his head. Omaga’s arms looked like cannons get hit by him, you will feel it. Omaga had to be the biggest man I have ever seen in my life. Omaga looked to be about two hundred and fifty pounds all together. All muscle, I was barely one hundred and ninety five soaking wet. This would not be an easy victory. The bell rang and the fight was on, Omaga quickly for his size charged at me, swinging his cannon sized arms at my face. I swiftly grabbed his left arm and twisted till he hit the ground. He sent out a yelp in pain, I put my foot to his chest hoping to take away his ability to breath. Wrong, he grabbed my foot and stood up my head about two feet from the ground. I did a sit-up and as I sat up I head-butted Omaga in the nose. He shrieked as blood came flowing out of his nose. He then dropped me on my head, I became dizzy for a few seconds before I got up and was ready to bring this fight back into my favor. I ran around to his back where I grabbed his neck and put him in a choke, he went clashing to the ground. Omaga went face down, and I landed on his back. I grabbed his neck and pulled back as hard as I could before I heard him take his final wheeze. I have won, but that was only round one of the tournament there are still many rounds to go. I walked over to Sebastian, who was by his other trainees Syco, Leo and Krazy. Syco and Krazy were talking amongst themselves. I overheard Krazy say, “He barely beat that guy and he’s the best fighter out of us all”. I knew they were talking about me so I walked over to Sebastian who was with Leo. They were talking about me too, but they invited me into the conversation. Leo said “Kaos, you did good out there but you better be ready cause there will be harder people than Omaga. So we have to keep our training up. If we all can fight like you did then we will save earth and the world.” I answered his series of statements with “Yes brother, training is a key factor of winning this tournament. Its true the earth and the world are at stake in the tournament we must save earth for all of humanity.” Sebastian interrupted saying “ But Kaos, this was only round one. There are many rounds to go. So we must all be ready, oh and Kaos. I took the favor of entering myself in the tournament.” I flipped when I heard the news, “But… But… Sebastian, master… you’re so old… your 74 years old. How are you going to win this tournament? But… if you do win this tournament that means I might have to fight you… This really is hor…” Sebastian stopped me midsentance as he said “Kaos… this is for the sake of the world. I must do whatever I can to make sure the world will be ok.” I nodded trying to hold back my tears; for I knew I would end up fighting Sebastian very soon in the future. I walked to my room I was assigned; there was another man in the room, the man looked to be about twenty-seven years old. The man spoke gently to me saying, “What is your name? I am Kano.” As he sent his hand out to me for a shake. I shook his hand and told him my name was Kaos; we didn’t speak again all night. Instead he left the room, I didn’t know where he went but I just went to bed for the night. [spoiler=Character Profile 1-3] [spoiler=Kaos] Kaos: An athletic 17-year-old teenager. One of the best fighters the world has ever seen. Been fighting since he was 5 years old. Kaos is a 6 foot 175 pound man. With blaring red eyes and blond hair. Has a brother who is also a terrific fighter, Kaos trained the best fighter in the world. A 75-year-old man named Sebastian. Kaos is working his way up through the tournament to win and save the world. [spoiler=Leo] Leo: A 15-year-old fighter in the tournament. Big for his age, 5 foot 10 inches and 157 pounds pure muscle. Leo got in an accident when he was at the age of 8 and lost both his arms. So now for his arms he has metal shaped like arms. Sebastian and Kaos trained Leo. Leo has blue eyes and blond hair and a very strong build for his body. [spoiler=Sebastian] Sebastian: Sebastian is the light god; he is also Kaos, Leo, Syco, and Krazies trainer. Sebastian is now at the age of 75 and still one of the best fighters the world will ever see. Sebastian knows combinations that no one has ever heard of; you never know what you will get against him. He is a 6 foot 5 188 pounds man, with extremely light blue eyes and white hair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Nice beginning, can't wait to read the rest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Remove all the funky text formattings; it makes it hell to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 I agree with Rinne. If I hadn't read it already, I would have a headache reading it...but keep posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Plus, you need to fix your description. You describe nothing, at least from what I read. How am I supposed to know if this is a pokemon fic... OR SOMETHING ELSE?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 When you gonna put Chapter 2 up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King-Shadow Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Whenever I get the free time to write it Lol... Sorry should be tonight or tommorow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Oh, well I'm looking foward to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King-Shadow Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Awesome as am I ;D xD... I read your ch. 4 great job bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Thanks---- I'm gonna work on Chapter 5 after House Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Oh, it's real fair that Leo gets METAL ARMS when everyone else just has regular arms. JK, great bios. However, they should go on the first post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King-Shadow Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 oh well >.> Ill move them there XDD xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King-Shadow Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 imma work on chapter 2 right now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Cool, I'll read it when you post it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King-Shadow Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Its coming soon. Just wait about 20 minutes and it will be here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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