First card i made

[shaqpac]

Well i guess this is my first card if it look to small i would make it bigger

 

http://img530.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cardup6ss9.jpg

[RestLess-BoTics]

Hmmmm... you need to learn how to paste the card on the thread, because people will get tired of clicking links..... about the card..... hmmmm..... its kinda overpowered, the picture is blurred, and work on your OCG (Official Card Grammar) Since its your first card, I'll give you credit for effort, but, you need lots of improvement. 7.121 / 10

[Speed Dragon90]

Well let's see here:

 

Pic: 8/10-It was blurred.

Spelling/Grammar: 9/10- Pretty good for a first card you just need to remember to capitalize things like ATK and DEF.

Effect: 6.5/10-It's a little overpowered because it increase your lifepoints while improving your monsters ATK and DEF, that and it sound a bit like Relinquished.

Overall: 8/10-It's good, but it needs work.

[Instinct]

it's a bit overpowered but great for your first card

[shaqpac]

Ok thanks now i know what i need to improve on but i need to think of another card Hmm any ideas

[Aethercide]

Kinda overpowered, improve your OCG and

 

Idea: make a warrior or dragon type, because those kind of pics are really easy to find, plus they are really cool.

[Bloodrun]

hmm how about you change the effect to this, or rewrite it tis way:

When this card is attacked by your opponent's monster, this cards attribute, ATK, and DEF are that of your opponent's monster. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the controller of this card increases his/her Life Points by half of this monsters ATK, during each of his/her Standby Phases.

 

and you might wanna change it from divine, to a light, Dragon monster, 7/10 =)