zane trusedale Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 great job man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 nice episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted December 7, 2007 Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 cool! nice episode and good job on the duels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest setojim Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 good job, especially on the end. but it made it a lil weird....didnt tyaro duel riley in ep. 1 of season 2?? If so, then he would no that he had the gladiator deck....but newho....i saw the ending...and then thought...SUPER SPECIAL AWESOME PLOT TWIST! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Awsome episode Twilight cant wait for the next one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Champster Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Nice, kewl Episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Nice plot in this episode! My ratings go up again!!!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 episode 33 will be out soon lets hope! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 [align=center]уυgισн: нι∂∂єи ℓєgα¢у єριѕσ∂є 33: ℓєтѕ gєт gℓα∂ιαℓ! Steven walked slowly down the street, then stopped at a Card Shop, and opened the door, walking into the shop. The Card Shop Owner was nervous as Steven entered, because he had an evil look to him. Card Shop Owner: Can I help you, sir? Steven: Surprisingly, you can. I would like one Booster Pack please. Card Shop Owner: One Booster Pack? What one? Steven: That one. The Booster Pack Steven was talking about had Gladiator Beast Heraklinos on the front. Card Shop Owner: This is a new Booster Pack, It arrived to... Steven: I don't care about your story. Steven gave the money to the Shop Owner, took his Booster Pack, and walked out. He continued down the street. Steven didn't open the Booster Pack, he placed the pack in his pocket. ____________________________________________________ Riley and Ace entered the Card Shop. They didn't know that Steven was there earlier. Card Shop Owner: Hi Riley, Ace, how can I help you? Riley looked at the Booster Packs, and smiled when he looked at the Booster Pack with Gladiator Beast Heraklinos on it. Riley: You got a new Booster Pack, I see. Card Shop Owner: Yes, the Booster Pack arrived this morning. I've sold one today. Ace: I would like a Booster Pack that has Water monsters in it. The Card Shop Owner gave Ace a Booster Pack, and Ace gave him money. Riley: I will take three of the new Booster Packs please. Riley payed for the three Booster Packs, and he and Ace walked out of the Card Shop. Ace: I'm going to open my Booster Pack. Riley: Alright, I will open my Booster Packs too. Ace opened his Booster Packs, and looked at each card. He didn't think he was going to get any good cards, until he looked at the last card in the Pack. It was an Ultra Rare Mirror Force. Ace: Awesome! I got Mirror Force! Riley: That's awesome. I will open mine now. Riley opened each pack, and looked at the rares from each one. His first rare was a card known as Orb of Security, his second rare was a card known as Crystal Seer, and his third rare was known as Test Tiger. Riley smiled upon seeing Test Tiger, because it was an Ultra Rare Card that supported Gladiator Beasts. Ace: Get any good cards Riley? Riley: Yes, I got an Ultra Rare Test Tiger! Ace: Awesome! _____________________________________________ Steven: Tyaro, are you ready for this? Tyaro: Yes, I will duel and defeat Riley. ???: Would you like to duel me? A duelist walked up to Steven and Tyaro. He was about 15 years old, younger than Steven and older than Tyaro. Steven: We are talking about an important matter, kid, go away. ???: Your name is Steven, no? Steven: How?! You know my name? ???: Yes, I do. I want to duel you, is that alright? Steven didn't know how this kid knew his name, although he had an idea. Steven: I will duel you, and when I win, you have to open this Booster Pack I have, alright? ???: You won't win. Steven and the duelist took out their Duel Disks, and placed their Decks on the Duel Disks. Steven: You go first, kid. ???: Ok. I summon Twilight Armor Mage in attack mode. The monster the duelist summoned had negative 500 attack points. Steven: What the? Your monster has negative attack points? That has to be against the rules! ???: Minus monsters are a new type of Monster, and they aren't against the rules. You will understand this more as the duel continues. Next Episode: Minus Blizzard Dragon! Ice Barrage! [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 Well, its pretty good so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Champster Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 Thats good (In fact, its Excellent)...but how long is this Episode O.oSince i see that "This isn't the end of the Episode, I will add the rest in a while." Was that a Typo? a Mistake? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 nice episode, very cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 I l;ike the wat your incorporating your own cards, its original, and easy to follow =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 17, 2007 Report Share Posted December 17, 2007 Nice episode but kinda short 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zane trusedale Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Great job once again man.I really like how you described this chapter really well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 anybody who is fed up of waiting for star to put ep. 4 of seaspn hidden legacy up should look at my fic: Hidden Destiny (not to do with hidden legacy in anyway). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 I have decided to let StevenBray continue this fan-fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=36066 Here is the new thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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