Sander Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 NickLD only believes in positive reinforcement. In his case, only pointing out the good things and not even mentioning the faults. On topic: The hand that holds the scythe is off. Unless you are blind, you could see that the creature has two right hands. Even if you meant it to be like that, it's still not correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 NickLD only believes in positive reinforcement. In his case' date=' only pointing out the good things and not even mentioning the faults. On topic: The hand that holds the scythe is off. Unless you are blind, you could see that the creature has two right hands. Even if you meant it to be like that, it's still not correct.[/quote']no, i believe in positive criticism. and no, he doesnt have two right hands, i think the shading is throwing u off, thats all...the finger at the end thats sticking out on the sythe hand is the pinky lol, think of it as if he was holding a cub of tea, with his pinky up, i just decided to draw it like that xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Okay, I know you told me not to post again, but there are several things I want to clear up:- I am 14 years old, same as you.- You yourself just admitted that the shading on the hand is off.- Never once did I insult you or your work, I merely gave CnC, as every other thread ever made in this section has received. Thanks to everyone who defended me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Okay' date=' I know you told me not to post again, but there are several things I want to clear up:- I am 14 years old, same as you.- You yourself just admitted that the shading on the hand is off.- Never once did I insult you or your work, I merely gave CnC, as every other thread ever made in this section has received. Thanks to everyone who defended me.[/quote']of course its "off" but not as much as u people are saying it is :Pur exploiting it like its the worst mistake in art ever...its barely noticable to me...and u couldve given me "CnC" without being so rude....all u did was tell me to change things...>_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Okay' date=' I know you told me not to post again, but there are several things I want to clear up:- I am 14 years old, same as you.- You yourself just admitted that the shading on the hand is off.- Never once did I insult you or your work, I merely gave CnC, as every other thread ever made in this section has received. Thanks to everyone who defended me.[/quote']of course its "off" but not as much as u people are saying it is :Pur exploiting it like its the worst mistake in art ever...its barely noticable to me...and u couldve given me "CnC" without being so rude....all u did was tell me to change things...>_> Um. If everyone says it is, then it is. :/Not being able to draw =/= inability to see when something looks bad. The whole point of CnC is to point out your mistakes, so you can fix them... -_______- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 There's no such thing as "positive criticism". That's the part that's off. I wasn't talking about the damn pinky, either. The thumb is probably placed on the wrong position on the hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 His right hand is on backwards.I dislike the electric eyes. for the third time' date=' [b']his hand is not backwards, ur looking at it wrong[/b]also, i dont think their electric, i made them to look like fiery antlers in a way... I see it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Okay' date=' I know you told me not to post again, but there are several things I want to clear up:- I am 14 years old, same as you.- You yourself just admitted that the shading on the hand is off.- Never once did I insult you or your work, I merely gave CnC, as every other thread ever made in this section has received. Thanks to everyone who defended me.[/quote']of course its "off" but not as much as u people are saying it is :Pur exploiting it like its the worst mistake in art ever...its barely noticable to me...and u couldve given me "CnC" without being so rude....all u did was tell me to change things...>_> Um. If everyone says it is, then it is. :/Not being able to draw =/= inability to see when something looks bad. The whole point of CnC is to point out your mistakes, so you can fix them... -_______-everyone said the earth was flat...is it?just becuz everyone says something doesnt make it so... There's no such thing as "positive criticism". That's the part that's off. I wasn't talking about the damn pinky' date=' either. The thumb is probably placed on the wrong position on the hand.[/quote']um, that looks right to me....the thumb is on the right side, is it not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Nick, I have now talked to several different people in real life, showing them the drawing you made, every single one of them has said that the hand is wrong the second they looked at it, also, the people who have posted here have said that the hand is wrong. Accept it, you made a mistake, the hand is wrong. Fix it and move on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 I think you're a good artist, but right now, you're being an arrogant prick. You are far from perfect. Learn to accept mistakes and fix them in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 There's no such thing as "positive criticism". That's the part that's off. I wasn't talking about the damn pinky' date=' either. The thumb is probably placed on the wrong position on the hand.[/quote']um, that looks right to me....the thumb is on the right side, is it not? Compare your left hand with your right hand. Do you see the difference? If not, get some damn glasses. Seriously, how hard is it to understand what's wrong with it? Try grabbing something with your right hand, see how the thumb is places, and then make the fix to this picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 There's no such thing as "positive criticism". That's the part that's off. I wasn't talking about the damn pinky' date=' either. The thumb is probably placed on the wrong position on the hand.[/quote']um, that looks right to me....the thumb is on the right side, is it not? Compare your left hand with your right hand. Do you see the difference? If not, get some damn glasses. Seriously, how hard is it to understand what's wrong with it? Try grabbing something with your right hand, see how the thumb is places, and then make the fix to this picture.lmao, i get the problem now, my brother and me both looked at the pic, and we realized what everyone was talking about...do u guys think the knuckles are being shown on the sythe hand? if so, thats where ur looking at it wrong xDi didnt make the shadow dark enough i guess so u think the fingers and the palm are connected, but think of it as if the fingers are wrapping around the sythe, but the top knuckles are still behind the sythe....see what i mean? lol, i hope thats what u meant... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 I think you're a good artist' date=' but right now, you're being an arrogant prick. You are far from perfect. Learn to accept mistakes and fix them in the future.[/quote'] I was going to write a very long explaination on why you should accept some advice and not others, but OMGAKITTY pretty much took the words right out of my mouth and condensed them. Helpful advice is painful to take, nick. Like medicine, it will leave a sour taste in your mouth at first, but it will help you s lot in the long run. Take frission's advice, Nick. He kept posting because he wanted to see you grow better at drawing, not to insult you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 im gonna repeat myself for a billionth time, there IS something called positive criticism. its where u point out what could be better, but do so in a respectful manner, point out the bad yes, but point out the good as well, so i know i didnt completely fail in every aspect of the drawing, because i know i didnt. and like i said, i honestly dont agree with the shadowing/contrast thing. i think it looks fine, and exactly the way i was hoping when i drew it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Everyone's far from perfect, Nick. If you can learn different types of shading, you might be able to teach yourslef to put those shadings together in such a way that you like more that your previous method of shading. If it came out exactly the way you wanted it to come out, great. On the other hand, if you can learn different tips on shading, coloring, ect., you may want something to come out differently next time, and it will look even better. As for the positive criticsm, if you truely want to better yourself as an artist, you have to learn to take criticism from people who don't give it kindly, as well as those who do. Most likely, if they are going in-depth on what you could do to better your picture, they want to help. Try to listen to everyone, and try out what they tell you to do. If you don't like the end result, try it again with a different approach. After that, if you still don't like it, scrap the advice. As for the video, I think you should have used "This is Halloween," by Marilyn Manson. Just saying. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Oh hot damn. Thats really cool. I like it a lot. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Oh hot damn. Thats really cool. I like it a lot. ;D thx :) @fuzz: utube probably wouldve banned the audio for copyright crap, thats what happened with the first song i tried, which was perfectDont Fear the Reaper - Blue Oyster Cult Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 The song came back, if you noticed. Anyways, don't get me wrong Nick, it looks great. On the other hand, it's a lot more fun to make images when you can get better everytime, if you understand what I mean. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 The song came back' date=' if you noticed. Anyways, don't get me wrong Nick, it looks great. On the other hand, it's a lot more fun to make images when you can get better everytime, if you understand what I mean. ;)[/quote']yes, but i can get better without other people, thats why everyone of my new images is better then the last...i practice A LOT, and to me, thats all i need, i read a lot of comics, and look very closely at the art, so i can learn from it. thats just how i get better, thats my personal method. if u dont agree with it, thats fine, but let me do it my way, and u do it urs. and what came back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Nick, if you are going to completely ignore any comments or criticism posted here related to the improvement of your work, why the hell did you post the work in the first place? It is just to show off, to say "look at me, and how amazing my work is, I am so much better at this than everyone else here, I posted it just to laugh at the way you tried to cnc it". Really, if you don't want people to give criticism on your work, don't post.I'm sick of this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 I like your drawing a lot, I thought to tweak the left hand through photoshop so that is looks a little better hope you don't mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Nick' date=' if you are going to completely ignore any comments or criticism posted here related to the improvement of your work, why the hell did you post the work in the first place? It is just to show off, to say "look at me, and how amazing my work is, I am so much better at this than everyone else here, I posted it just to laugh at the way you tried to cnc it". Really, if you don't want people to give criticism on your work, don't post.I'm sick of this.[/quote']i posted it becuz their are to few drawings in showcase. feel free to cnc, but dont expect me to change anything simply because u told me to. @FANtomCore: thx, it looks pretty good, but it kinda threw me off at first, his fingers look kinda small/short. maybe if the hand was right between urs and mine, that way u could see the separation... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 I haven't been the only one to tell you there is a problem though. Almost everyone who has posted here has told you that there is a problem with the hand, and yet you have continued to say that it is everyone else's problem, and not yours, but no matter how good the rest of the drawing is, if one part is incorrect to everyone who looks at it, it has to be fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 The song came back' date=' if you noticed. Anyways, don't get me wrong Nick, it looks great. On the other hand, it's a lot more fun to make images when you can get better everytime, if you understand what I mean. ;)[/quote']yes, but i can get better without other people, thats why everyone of my new images is better then the last...i practice A LOT, and to me, thats all i need, i read a lot of comics, and look very closely at the art, so i can learn from it. thats just how i get better, thats my personal method. if u dont agree with it, thats fine, but let me do it my way, and u do it urs. and what came back? The song came back, as in the music, as in the audio, as in "Don't Fear the Reaper." It's great you are looking at other people's artwork to gain ideas, but that also accounts as people helping you. Also, you can learn a lot ore if you do both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 I hope I don't offend you by this, Nick, but I think the best thing to do right now is either delete the thread or let someone else lock it, as this is going nowhere. If you can't accept people's opinions, the whole thread is pointless. Sorry mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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