ObsoleteAcc Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 my latest drawing!video:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=snizQfpBvFwpic:[spoiler=Grim Reaper] plz comment! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 his left hand is terriblebut i like the rest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 As with all your drawings before, the shading is too overdone, and is all over the place.I would suggest lightening up on your pencil, and doing light finger-smudged shading instead of the heavy pencil shading you see now. It makes your drawing look incredibly unrealistic that they should be that heavily and awkwardly shaded.I would also suggest going outside and drawing and studying natural forms (trees, rocks, etc), to get a better sense of how light plays on the surface of a solid object, because your lighting and shading don't seem to evoke a very strong or entirely clear light source, but instead of light area, a general section of the drawing that is shaded, and another part that is not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 his left hand is terriblebut i like the restum' date=' thx As with all your drawings before, the shading is too overdone, and is all over the place.I would suggest lightening up on your pencil, and doing light finger-smudged shading instead of the heavy pencil shading you see now. It makes your drawing look incredibly unrealistic that they should be that heavily and awkwardly shaded.I would also suggest going outside and drawing and studying natural forms (trees, rocks, etc), to get a better sense of how light plays on the surface of a solid object, because your lighting and shading don't seem to evoke a very strong or entirely clear light source, but instead of light area, a general section of the drawing that is shaded, and another part that is not. ok, i can honestly say i dont agree with anything u just said. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 i did not agree with him eatherits quite realistici enjoy watching it made ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 i did not agree with him eatherits quite realistici enjoy watching it made ;Dlol thx, i thought so to ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Real things are not that overcontrasted, and do not have such hard and heavy shading.I would suggest going on deviantART and some art portfolio sites, and looking at professional drawing art. Hardly any of it is done with such heavy and unrealistic shading, unless it is part of the a larger style. In this case, it is not, it is just poorly done shading.I would be more than happy to provide links to places where you can see some quality drawing work if you would like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 wow i like it not your best though the left hand sorta looks like the right, or the roght looks like the left, well you catch my drift i love the shading, and the sword is kinda random iv never seen grim with a sword Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 The hands suck, but the drawing itself is better than most of the crap around here. :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 The hands are, like everyone else said, a bit dodgy, but apart from that, you've done well. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Real things are not that overcontrasted' date=' and do not have such hard and heavy shading.I would suggest going on deviantART and some art portfolio sites, and looking at professional drawing art. Hardly any of it is done with such heavy and unrealistic shading, unless it is part of the a larger style. In this case, it is not, it is just poorly done shading.I would be more than happy to provide links to places where you can see some quality drawing work if you would like.[/quote']um, no. im fine thx.dont let the door hit u on the way out :Dwow i like it not your best though the left hand sorta looks like the right' date=' or the roght looks like the left, well you catch my drift i love the shading, and the sword is kinda random iv never seen grim with a sword[/quote']i wanted to do my own version of the reaper, and i got this :D The hands suck' date=' but the drawing itself is better than most of the crap around here. :\[/quote']um.....thx? The hands are' date=' like everyone else said, a bit dodgy, but apart from that, you've done well. Good job.[/quote']thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 right hand is.... backwards?? Shading on bottom doesn't match the light source from the corner. Not bad. Also, right thumb is over the scythe xD Provide a render? xD? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 right hand is.... backwards?? Shading on bottom doesn't match the light source from the corner. Not bad. Also' date=' right thumb is over the scythe xD Provide a render? xD?[/quote']no, the hands are right, thumb is on right side for both lol xDand yea, the thumb is supposed to be over the side, otherwise it would be hard to hold the sythe xDa render would be extremely difficult, because there is a lot of blur, but ur free to try. just give me credit and send me the link ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 His right hand is on backwards.I dislike the electric eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 His right hand is on backwards.I dislike the electric eyes. for the third time, his hand is not backwards, ur looking at it wrongalso, i dont think their electric, i made them to look like fiery antlers in a way... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 1- Get some better eyes, the thumb may be in the correct place, but the shading is entirely off on the hand.2- It it is supposed to be antlers, it looks bad and should be removed from the piece.3- Again the shading on this piece is a serious problem, and shows a lack of artistic judgment and greater skills. I would really suggest looking at some professional drawings, which, unless it's the Powerpuff girls, doesn't have such large black areas on a person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luke15buckley Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 [spoiler=NAME]stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 I can see where .frission is coming from on the shading. Its so contrasted the whole thing looks like its made out of...a liquid metal. Also, The hands suck' date=' but the drawing itself is better than most of the crap around here. :\[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 1- Get some better eyes' date=' the thumb may be in the correct place, but the shading is entirely off on the hand.2- It it is supposed to be antlers, it looks bad and should be removed from the piece.3- Again the shading on this piece is a serious problem, and shows a lack of artistic judgment and greater skills. I would really suggest looking at some professional drawings, which, unless it's the Powerpuff girls, doesn't have such large black areas on a person.[/quote']y'know, ive asked nicely, but twice is enough, plz stop commenting here, i dont like ur negative criticism. three posts of practically the same thing is enough. [spoiler=NAME]stuff total spam. reported... I can see where .frission is coming from on the shading. Its so contrasted the whole thing looks like its made out of...a liquid metal. Also' date=' The hands suck, but the drawing itself is better than most of the crap around here. :\ok thx for ur input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 1- Get some better eyes' date=' the thumb may be in the correct place, but the shading is entirely off on the hand.2- It it is supposed to be antlers, it looks bad and should be removed from the piece.3- Again the shading on this piece is a serious problem, and shows a lack of artistic judgment and greater skills. I would really suggest looking at some professional drawings, which, unless it's the Powerpuff girls, doesn't have such large black areas on a person.[/quote'] y'know, ive asked nicely, but twice is enough, plz stop commenting here, i dont like ur negative criticism. three posts of practically the same thing is enough. Hey, don't pick on him.He is not giving you negative comments. He's giving you actual good advice on how to fix your drawing and giving you things to think about in the future.Also, the reason he's posted 3 times, is because you won't listen to him. I agree with everything .frission said. Listen to him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 1- Get some better eyes' date=' the thumb may be in the correct place, but the shading is entirely off on the hand.2- It it is supposed to be antlers, it looks bad and should be removed from the piece.3- Again the shading on this piece is a serious problem, and shows a lack of artistic judgment and greater skills. I would really suggest looking at some professional drawings, which, unless it's the Powerpuff girls, doesn't have such large black areas on a person.[/quote'] y'know, ive asked nicely, but twice is enough, plz stop commenting here, i dont like ur negative criticism. three posts of practically the same thing is enough. Hey, don't pick on him.He is not giving you negative comments. He's giving you actual good advice on how to fix your drawing and giving you things to think about in the future.Also, the reason he's posted 3 times, is because you won't listen to him. I agree with everything .frission said. Listen to him.dont pick on him? im...picking on him...?um, yea, no.theres other ways to "help".i dont agree with everything frission said, so....yea.i will not listen to him. if he wishes, he can draw the pic exactly the way he wants. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 1- Get some better eyes' date=' the thumb may be in the correct place, but the shading is entirely off on the hand.2- It it is supposed to be antlers, it looks bad and should be removed from the piece.3- Again the shading on this piece is a serious problem, and shows a lack of artistic judgment and greater skills. I would really suggest looking at some professional drawings, which, unless it's the Powerpuff girls, doesn't have such large black areas on a person.[/quote']y'know, ive asked nicely, but twice is enough, plz stop commenting here, i dont like ur negative criticism. three posts of practically the same thing is enough. I hate this kind of arrogance. He's trying to help you. You are never too good to not receive critique. But you know what? Hey .frission: he obviously isn't going to listen to you, let him stagnate as an artist; its no longer your problem. You tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 1- Get some better eyes' date=' the thumb may be in the correct place, but the shading is entirely off on the hand.2- It it is supposed to be antlers, it looks bad and should be removed from the piece.3- Again the shading on this piece is a serious problem, and shows a lack of artistic judgment and greater skills. I would really suggest looking at some professional drawings, which, unless it's the Powerpuff girls, doesn't have such large black areas on a person.[/quote']y'know, ive asked nicely, but twice is enough, plz stop commenting here, i dont like ur negative criticism. three posts of practically the same thing is enough. I hate this kind of arrogance. He's trying to help you. You are never too good to not receive critique. But you know what? Hey .frission: he obviously isn't going to listen to you, let him stagnate as an artist; its no longer your problem. You tried.im 14, and a positive of being 14 is i dont have to worry about being stagnant. so yea, its no longer his problem, it never was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 1- Get some better eyes' date=' the thumb may be in the correct place, but the shading is entirely off on the hand.2- It it is supposed to be antlers, it looks bad and should be removed from the piece.3- Again the shading on this piece is a serious problem, and shows a lack of artistic judgment and greater skills. I would really suggest looking at some professional drawings, which, unless it's the Powerpuff girls, doesn't have such large black areas on a person.[/quote']y'know, ive asked nicely, but twice is enough, plz stop commenting here, i dont like ur negative criticism. three posts of practically the same thing is enough. I hate this kind of arrogance. He's trying to help you. You are never too good to not receive critique. But you know what? Hey .frission: he obviously isn't going to listen to you, let him stagnate as an artist; its no longer your problem. You tried.im 14, and a positive of being 14 is i dont have to worry about being stagnant. so yea, its no longer his problem, it never was. I fail to see what age has to do with taking good advise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 1- Get some better eyes' date=' the thumb may be in the correct place, but the shading is entirely off on the hand.2- It it is supposed to be antlers, it looks bad and should be removed from the piece.3- Again the shading on this piece is a serious problem, and shows a lack of artistic judgment and greater skills. I would really suggest looking at some professional drawings, which, unless it's the Powerpuff girls, doesn't have such large black areas on a person.[/quote'] y'know, ive asked nicely, but twice is enough, plz stop commenting here, i dont like ur negative criticism. three posts of practically the same thing is enough. Hey, don't pick on him.He is not giving you negative comments. He's giving you actual good advice on how to fix your drawing and giving you things to think about in the future.Also, the reason he's posted 3 times, is because you won't listen to him. I agree with everything .frission said. Listen to him.dont pick on him? im...picking on him...?um, yea, no.theres other ways to "help".i dont agree with everything frission said, so....yea.i will not listen to him. if he wishes, he can draw the pic exactly the way he wants. :) I'm not saying you have to bow down to him and do everything he says.Just listen to his comments, even if you don't agree with them.I'm done here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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