Alexis Rhodes Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 This is a duel from my fan-fic i am doing a decided to post this because i am still thinking of an opening enjoy everyone :) Yuki Fuso V Masked Demon - Blue " I`ll Start of " shouted Yuki" My Draw," Yuki smiled " I`ll start by summoning Titan Beast - Cyber " as he said this a floating creature emerged from the ground " I end why turn " Yuki said "I Draw" Said the masked demon in a low voice"I`ll set a monster and place a card face down " As he said this 2 cards came up from the ground " I end my Turn " Said the Masked Demon " Ok lets get this duel really started , i draw " Said Yuki " I summon Titan Beast - Sun in attack mode " As he said this a beam came down from the sky and a monster with a dog like face bacame visable " , And then i will attack you face down monster with him " Yuki exclaimed The face down card was destroyed with a shatter " And now Titan Beast - Cyber will attack your life points directly " Yuki said pointing at the masked demon. Yuki - 4000Masked Demon - Blue - 2000 " My turn and i draw " Said the deep Voiced masked Demon " I activate my spell card Lightning Vortex and now by discarding my Gren, Tactician of Dark World all of your monsters are destoyed " A bolt of loghtning struck both of Yuki`s monsters and they where destoyed leaving Yuki`s field emty." I now summon Brron, Mad King of Dark World and attack your life points directly " A chained demon came from the ground and then slashed Yuki in the face. Yuki - 2200Masked Demon - Blue - 2000 TO BE CONTINUED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Did you just make a Wiki for your own fan fiction?! That's so useless!! you put too much effort into it all!! And your grammar is really bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 i'm sure everyone has wanted to see there fanfic somewhere on another site like wiki, but the only reason to go off and make a wiki for your fanfic is if its EXTREMELY popular, not kinda a 5D's rip, and no one else has done it in a ridiculously long amount of time, during which the fanfic was EXTREMELY popular. its a cool idea, but this fic is not developed enough yet to warrant its own wiki, and sorry, but it will probably never be that good.i want to clear something up. i'm not saying that your writing is aweful, it just needs work. if you need grammar help or someone to edit your work before you post it from time to time, pm me. i can help with card grammar too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrcMan321 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Yusei Fudo - FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yuki Fuso - WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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