+tr.Ryder Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Sorry Venasaur :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Kid Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Just to name a few problems:There are pieces missing from the render that are making the round parts straight and the render irregularly shapedBackground is just an ugly mess of colors, there isn't anything actually thereRender is taking up far too much of the sigNo lighting, depth, flow, or blending I'm not saying you're wrong, but Venusaur is kinda new to GFXing..shouldn't you be a little more gentle and explain what he should do to prevent those errors occurring again? Anyways...on Catman's tut, that was pretty simple and nice..also, quite a good outcome =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Yeah but how do you know what type of c4d render to use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Just to name a few problems:There are pieces missing from the render that are making the round parts straight and the render irregularly shapedBackground is just an ugly mess of colors' date=' there isn't anything actually thereRender is taking up far too much of the sigNo lighting, depth, flow, or blending[/quote'] I'm not saying you're wrong, but Venusaur is kinda new to GFXing..shouldn't you be a little more gentle and explain what he should do to prevent those errors occurring again? Newbie or not, a mistake is a mistake. Telling someone what they did wrong let's them know what to avoid in later sigs. Being nice isn't nearly as good of a motivator as the determination to prove yourself to someone. And telling exactly how to avoid and fix every problem can lead to him not being able to come up with his own style and methods for doing things.Even then, the few mistakes I did point out are all things that are pretty self explanatory or are simple concepts that have been defined numerous times on YCM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 I agree that you are being too harsh. Considering that he is a newbie, the sig isn't all that bad, he just needs to zoom in when rendering is all. Now, to stop this turning into a flame war, we need a new topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Name: ƠƲĕƇǶʞΪΠ ѓƠƇʞѕ GFX Status: Low BeginnerExample Of Work: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Cool new members. I always like that. New topics anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 no not really. got a sig though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 no not really. got a sig though Oh dear godThe colors in the background are just plain nasty, backgrounds for this should in no way ever be just a swirling mess of colors and should contain actual objectsThe c4ds are used really badly: they go off in different directions, both are either set to lighten or darken merely because they can be without either being used to provide an attractive effect or add anything appealing to the sig, the c4ds' styles clash and look bad together, both just seemed to be used just to say they're thereNo lighting, depth, blending, or flowTerrible text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcane the VII Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Can I join: Username: NotBot How good: Have no IDEA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 you need an example of work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 hows this sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Nice work I say 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 you need an example of work thanks for helping outhows this sig and there is no flow.. you used to many c4dsand no depth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 hows this sig Few things I noticed after a quick glance:Render is lq, at least by my standardsBackground is empty, literallyC4ds and their effects overlapping one another is causing a large ugly mash of various shades of greenRender doesn't fit in at allSome of the green seems overcontrastedThe yellow makes very little sense and doesn't really fit in with the restNo lighting, no source of light that happens to be in any lit environment ever to existNo blending, there was no attempt to try and make the render seem in placeNo flow, c4ds are shooting off in all directionsNo depth, there doesn't seem to be any distance between the render and the c4ds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 hows this sig Few things I noticed after a quick glance:Render is lq' date=' at least by my standardsBackground is empty, literallyC4ds and their effects overlapping one another is causing a large ugly mash of various shades of greenRender doesn't fit in at allSome of the green seems overcontrastedThe yellow makes very little sense and doesn't really fit in with the restNo lighting, no source of light that happens to be in any lit environment ever to existNo blending, there was no attempt to try and make the render seem in placeNo flow, c4ds are shooting off in all directionsNo depth, there doesn't seem to be any distance between the render and the c4ds[/quote'] You are being a bit harsh there. It isn't brilliant I know, but you don't have to shout at him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 sorry i have been inactive guys i was busy over the weekend and yesterday i had homework and yea i am sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 No prob ^-^How is this sig? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 You are being a bit harsh there. It isn't brilliant I know' date=' but you don't have to shout at him.[/quote'] Don't understand how it could be considered "shouting". I didn't type in all capital letters, so unless it's just you overreacting, no one was "shouting".I'm merely telling them what they are doing wrong, absolutely nothing harsh about that. If you can't stand complete, accurate, and helpful critique then you can simply ask for me to not cnc your work. If they don't complain, but you do, that means it's simply you overreacting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 will anyone rate mineHey guys how do you put the img code without the image appearing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Kid Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Hey guys how do you put the img code without the image appearing? If you mean spoiler, it's [spoiler*]image and contents here[/spoiler*] but remove the 2 * If you mean something else..I don't know.. How is this sig? I can see a little flow there.. Didn't feel any depth, but if you tried.. probably that it failed =P Lightsource is nice..your first "decent" tag with light source I reckoned... Blending was mehh and colours could improve greatly...but that's pretty cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 will anyone rate mineHey guys how do you put the img code without the image appearing? you have to put this[code*]item goes here[/code]with out the *and it should look like thisitem goes here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Oh thanks Ill try it out[img=http://i34.tinypic.com/2ebqonb.png] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Nice banner. I like the light effect. The render is pretty good and it flows very well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 hey lightningazn i made this for ya if ya want it bellow is the code[img=http://i35.tinypic.com/w2j9mc.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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