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Dark Storm PKMN SET 3 "99.9% Complete" [100% Must View]


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[spoiler=Minor Errors] arceus- one=1

deoxys- every=each

latias- Life points=Life Points

venusaur- Then remove 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard.=add "from play" at end

glalie- opponents is missing an apostrophe

mawile- monsters is missing an apostrophe

steelix- every=each and COunter=Counter

onix- every=each

snorunt- put a comma after Summoned

relic fragment- tha=the

hidden land- i believe monsters is capitalized after Synchro, and shudnt primal dialga be a ritual monster then?

march of the emperors- the first this=turn

sableye- in last sentence, EARTH monsters shud be singular

heracross- period is needed after (max. 1) and in following sentence, take out the comma

aerodactyl- its' Battle Position=take out the apostrophe

delibird- 2nd sentence, take out "placed"

zoroark- capitalize battle damage and DEF position=Defense Position

new beginnings- beginnings is missing an n and lowercase Monster in last sentence

 

I went thru ur whole set and sought out the minor errors, hope this helps, great cards, u shud do kyogre next

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arceus- every=each

deoxys- one=1

 

 

 

I went thru ur whole set and sought out the minor errors' date=' hope this helps, great cards, u shud do kyogre next

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You switched up the errors on Arceus DRD, and Deoxys. Arceus will be a pain to do since I have to then reholo it, but I think it still makes sense.

 

Heracross->Delibird can't do anything about.

 

And I was thinking of adding Kyogre next, but that will have to wait.

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Basic Water Support.

 

When this card is Special Summoned, place 1 Rain Counter on each WATER monster on the field. Increase the ATK of all WATER monsters on the field by 100 for each Rain Counter on the field. Once during your End Phase, as long as there is a face-up Groudon on the field, remove 1 Rain Counter from the field. You didn't place a Rain Counter on the field, you placed a Rain Counter on all WATER monsters on the field. So it would be remove 1 Rain Counter from 1 monster on the field. Something like that.

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