The Twilight Saga-Dark Afterlife

[Curse Sasuke]

Note if you have not finished reading breaking dawn do not read this.

 

The Twilight Saga is and always will be written by Stephine Meyer I do not in any way take ownership over this franchise.

 

[spoiler=Dark Afterlife Part One]

 

When the sun rose this morning I thought to myself now that I can live forever there is a lot that I know have time and money for. I thought of how maybe I could start doing Dance again, but a flashback hit me in the face, or should I say the leg. To this day I still remember that one event when I was human, it haunts me. I always think to myself 'is he really dead' but then I remember that it is over and he is gone. I also got to thinking about renne, if I would ever see her again. Surprisingly her and Charlie are getting along pretty well. He actually called her to tell her that my eyesight was pretty bad so Edward bought me colored contacts. Well I guess thats better than her thinking I am sick. I was begining to worry about a phone call we recieved at 2:30 am this morning, it was from Zafrina, she said that there has been some "trouble" near her house. Appearently there was blood scattered everywhere in the snow. I didn't think to much of it at first, but then I got to thinking how Jacob and Nessie went to collage up there. It worries me so because I am a mother who really didn't get to see her daughter grow up. She just progressively is growing, but now she seems to have stopped. The other reason why I was so worried was because Jacob says that now he is no longer a virgin, and neither is she. Granted when he told me this I was pondering ripping his vainy werewolf neck off of his body, but none the less she is an adult now and she has to live like one.

 

 

[Kendo Fish]

Before I read this ugly-looking paragraph (that's advice - take it!) I must ask you...exactly why do you like Twilight? Tell me in detail, if you will. That means not saying "it's interesting" or "it's an OK love story". That means saying "the characters were fleshed-out, you could just FEEL the love between them, Edward Cullen's kewl" and such. But I don't like Edward as a character one bit.

 

And...no, I haven't read Twilight and I don't want to, really. But it's still an ugly paragraph! Split it up! Also answer my question.

[Weather Report - Stand]

Please don't post Twilight stuff here. Many people will ridicule you for it. Seriously, I'm two seconds from grilling you over it.

[legendhiro]

Please don't post Twilight stuff here. Many people will ridicule you for it. Seriously' date=' I'm two seconds from grilling you over it.

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seriously. twilight wasn't the worst thing i've read, but this is not the place for romace stories like twilight. find a better site for this, and it will probably take off.