Bleach: The Warrior Returns (chapter 1 & 2)

[Captain_Angelo3]

This is my little story of bleach made by me containing some of my characters

[spoiler=chapter1]

"Attention all Captains Head Captain Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto has called a Captains meeting." said a Hell Butterfly to all 13 Captains.

 

"Oh great, we have another meeting thats the fourth in 3 days." said the newly appointed Captain of Squad 3 Angelo Santiago.

 

"Why does it matter we have nothing else to do but train this at least gets us out of that." said the newly appointed squad 9 Captain Apollo Andreas.

 

"You to should be quiet and not complain The Head Captain can call a meeting when he wants and you have no say in it." said Captain Kuchiki.

 

"Attention Captains we have found proof that Aizen has found a new Weapon to use against the Soul Society. Its a warrior who was sealed away years ago by the Central 46. This warrior is called Helios Armade." said the Head Captain.

 

"So Head Captain what should we do to stop this attack?" asked Captain Hitsugaya "Do we need to destroy the monster that lies sealed below the Central 46 Chamber?"

 

"We have not yet decided Captain Hitsugaya thats is why i have called you here to ask you should we try and protect this Hollow or let him go and try and defeat him?" asked Head Captain Yamamoto.

 

"So Head Captain we are putting this to a vote between us?" asked Captain Soi Fon

 

"That is correct Captain Soi Fon. So Captains what is your decision?" asked Head Captain Yamamoto

 

"I vote that we keep him sealed then Aizen and his Arrancar will have to come to us and they are weaker here." said Captain Angelo.

 

"All in favor of Captain Angelo's plan say I." said the Head Captain

 

"I" said Byakuya

 

"I" said Apollo

 

"I" said Soi Fon

 

"I" said Kyōraku

 

"I" said Youma the newly appointed Captain of Squad 5

 

"That is enough we will stay here and try to hold off Aizen's plan to get the Warrior Helios." said Head Captain Yamamoto

 

The End.

 

 

[Captain_Angelo3]

[spoiler=chapter2]

"We shall take turns guarding the warrior the first squad to guard will be Squad 7 Captain Komamura get your squad into position." said Head Captain Yamamoto

 

"Yes Head Captain." was all Captain Komamura could say.

 

"This meeting is dismissed." said the Head Captain

 

(the Captains quickly leave the room and go on their own ways)

 

"So Captain Santiago i think you made a bad decision keeping this warrior alive we should kill him and get it over with." said Captain Hitsugaya

 

"Well Captain i don't think you see the why i am keeping him alive it will hopefully save more lives in Karakura Town." said Captain Santiago

 

"Well what do we have here two Captains arguing." said Captain Andreas walking out of the Head Captain's office."

 

"The young Captain Hitsugaya doesnt want to listen to reason behind keeping the warrior alive." said Captain Santiago.

 

"Captain Santiago you were left a message at in your office." Izuru was yelling this while running up the hill to his new Captain.

 

"What Izuru how could you let someone in my room?" asked Captain Santiago looking very upset with Izuru.

 

"I walked in to see if you were there and i saw a figure use shunpo as soon as i walked in here is the note though." said Izuru handing Captain Santiago the note

 

"Dear Captain Santiago will you and your fellow Captains with you right now Hitsugaya and Andreas to please leave the arrior unguarded so we can have him and no one gets hurt...." Captain Santiago was reading the letter in shocked they would ask for them to hand over the warrior.

 

"Izuru did you get a good look at who left this message were you able to get a look at his zanpakutō you need to tell me all the details!" said Captain Santiago looking directly into Izuru's eyes "What did he look like don't just stand there tell me."

 

The End of Chapter 2

 

 

[Captain_Angelo3]

[spoiler=chapter 3]

"I swear Captain i didnt see anything about this person they were in all black and i couldnt see them very well either." said Izuru

 

"Well Izuru come with me we must tell the Head Captain what you saw and about this note it may need to be told to Captain Komamura it may help him." said Angelo grabbing Izuru and dragging him back into the Head Captains office.

 

"Wow he seems upset about that note i wonder does he know who sent it cause i have an idea." said Captain Hitsugaya "I am going to check on Captain Komamura what we just learned and for him to be on his guard who knows what will happen at this point."

 

"You do that Captain i have the second watch so i must go make defense plans for my squad." said Captain Andreas.

 

(both Captains now use Hoho and they leave the scene)

 

"Head Captain Izuru said this was left in my office and he saw someone use a Shunpo once he got in the room." said Captain Santiago walking into Head Captain Yamamoto.

 

"So Izuru Kira you say you saw someone leave this in your Captain's office." said Captain Yamamoto "Chōjirō Sasakibe come and take notes on what Izuru saw i need to talk to Captain Santiago alone about this problem at hand."

 

"Yes Sir Izuru come with me." said Lt. Sasakibe walking with Izuru out of the room.

 

"Captain Santiago i am sure you know who left this message aren't you?" asked Head Captain Yamamoto

 

"Actually Head Captain i have no idea i thought it was Aizen, Gin, or even Tosen now that i look closer at it this is a handwriting I have never seen." said Captain Santiago stunned he didn't know this. "Captain this might be a new threat to the Soul Society. This is the fact that worries me the most."

 

"I am just as worried about having a new threat." said Head Captain Yamamoto.

 

 

[Kendo Fish]

Time for another WEATHER REPORT.

This is my little story of bleach made by me containing some of my characters

And a memory of your punctuation not existing. Yeah.

[spoiler=chapter1]

"Attention all Captains Head Captain Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto has called a Captains meeting." said a Hell Butterfly to all 13 Captains. First of all' date=' this punctuation is NONEXISTANT. Second, Hell Butterflies themselves DON'T TALK.[/color']

 

"Oh great, we have another meeting that APOSTROPHE s the fourth in THREE days." Fix your punctuation. said the newly appointed Captain of Squad 3 Angelo Santiago. Nothing says Hispanic like Angelo Santiago. AND HE LOOKS LIKE?

 

"Why does it matter PUNCTUATION we have nothing else to do but train PUNCTUATION this at least gets us out of that." said the newly appointed squad 9 Captain Apollo Andreas. [spoiler=AND HE LOOKS LIKE...]http://static.panoramio.com/photos/original/1716177.jpg' alt='1716177.jpg'>

 

 

"You toO should be quiet and not complain PUNC. The Head Captain can call a meeting when he wants and you have no say in it." said Captain Kuchiki. What's the point of this talk? Are they all in the same room together? Did they just stop by the Soul Society restroom? THE WOMAN'S RESTROOM!?!? Why did this conversation matter much?

 

"Attention Captains ," the loudspeaker in the toilet says. "We have found proof that Aizen has found a new oddly-capitalized Weapon to use against the Soul Society. It apostrophe s a warrior who was sealed away years ago by the Central 46. This warrior is called Helios Armade comma" said the Head Captain.

 

"So Head Captain comma what should we do to stop this attack?" asked Captain Hitsugaya PERIOD Wait, they automatically teleported there!? I don't think that's possible even in the Soul Society. "Do we need to destroy the monster that lies sealed below the Central 46 oddly-capitalized Chamber?" Warrior, monster, wha, which one is it? It can't really be both, that'd be dumb.

 

"We have not yet decided Captain Hitsugaya punc. that apostrophe s is why i (CAPITALIZE I. It's, like, basic English) have called you here to ask you punc. should we try and protect this Hollow WHICH Hollow? or let him go WHO go? and try and defeat him WHO?" asked Head Captain Yamamoto. I THINK I get what you're sayin' but still. Make it more clear, 'kaiiiiiiiiiiiii?

 

"So Head Captain comma we are putting this to a vote between us?" asked Captain Soi Fon PERIOD

 

"That is correct comma Captain Soi Fon. So Captains what is your decision?" asked Head Captain Yamamoto PERIOD What's with their dialogue? It's like this:

"What should we do, Private Bob?" said Admiral Bill.

"I don't know, Admiral Bill. Let's call Vice President Bob," said Private Bob.

"Not sure, Private Bob. What about calling Giant Boy Detective?" said Admiral Bill.

"I'm already here, Admiral Bill and Private Bob," said Giant Boy Detective.

"Well, THAT'S a relief, Giant Boy Detective," said Admiral Bill.

 

"I vote that we keep him sealed punc. then Aizen and his Arrancar will have to come to us and they are weaker here." said Captain Angelo. What exactly would MAKE him have to come? What if this thing is stronger than you'd expected?

"Hey, guys! Let's go fight an ancient beast with unprecedented power!

 

"All in favor of Captain Angelo's plan say I." said the Head Captain PERIOD All in favor of the Gary Stu's plan say duh.

 

"I" said Byakuya

 

"I" said Apollo

 

"I" said Soi Fon

 

"I" said Kyōraku

 

"I" said Youma the newly appointed Captain of Squad 5 who appeared JUST NOW.

 

You have no idea how unintentionally funny that was back there.

 

"That is enough PERIOD What a short conference we will stay here then it's NOT enough, idiot! and try to hold off Aizen's plan to get the Warrior Helios." He started planning that? said Head Captain Yamamoto PERIOD

 

The End.

Of the whole story!? Cool.

 

 

Read books and learn from them, 'kaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii? Good.

[Captain_Angelo3]

dude you have no i did about my story because you werent there when i made the character so you have no idea what they should look like and are you my english teacher no so you dont give me lesson ok.

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you were reported for abuse

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i dont care what you think i will keep writing since my friends liked them.

[Kendo Fish]

That was dumb for several reasons.

 

Before you respond to that comment, read this and evaluate.

dude you have no I have no? What does that mean? But I don't think this is the time for grammar judging' date=' so I'll stop now.[/b'] i did about my story because you werent there when i made the character so you have no idea what they should look like Of course I wasn't. That's what YOU, the AUTHOR, are supposed to tell us. You don't just say "Bob and Bill went to the store" unless you have illustrations or desriptions, or they're minor characters. and are you my english teacher no I never said I was. You're the one who published this thing, giving others on the Web the ability and right to comment on it, giving their true opinions. If you don't like it, either give me a GOOD REASON for such or don't show your wokr to the masses. Think of it this way. You're a painter. You try to sell your art. Somebody says, "I don't like it. The colors are all wrong." Do you have the right to defend your work? Of course. But you don't say, "You're not the judge of MY work. Are you the art teacher? No, so don't tell me what to do, okay?" Then buyers stay away from you and you don't make a profit. Not to mention being in denial of how meh, bad or horrible your work may be is bad. Humility and modesty, on the other hand... I hope you understand. so you dont give me lesson ok.

you were reported for abuse Abuse? ABUSE!?!? *laughs* I do this to every meh, bad or horrible story around these parts. (Not every one. that's a slight exaggeration. I do it a lot, though.) And how was I abusing you? When you keep a dog outside in the heat for days without food or water, THAT'S abuse. When you say somebody's fanfiction needs work, THAT'S constructive criticism. You, sir, are sadly mistaken.

i dont care what you think i will keep writing since my friends liked them. Brace yourself for people posting here to agree with me. And if you don't care what I think, maybe you shouldn't have shown this to the masses in the first place.

Listen, yo. There's a movie called Ed Wood. I haven't watched it but I've heard about it. Perhaps you should take a look at it.

[Weather Report - Stand]

You know, it's called critiquing, and she and I do this all the time, so yeah, stop thinking you're the only one who she does this too. Though I'm a bit less harsh in ways, but still, stop being such a baby.