Moonlight Princess Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Hi, I won't say so much, so plz read and comment. A month passed after North Academy accepted the new students of the year. The entrance exam was hard but not hard for those who were destined to be the next king of games. Well, actually nothing was any different from the last year, though there were finally a girl's dorm at North Academy. Not so many girls were at North, but some who didn't want to live in an island, they were there resting in there rooms...3 girls had to stay in one dorm and the dorm was banned for boys just like in the Duel Academy. For the girl's dormitory, North Academy should hire a female teacher and with a great effort they achieved convincing Mai Valentine for the job. So far every freshman was relaxing in their rooms just before the first exam day. "Hey, Essence, are you sleeping?" said Eva, who was the most beautiful and the most gorgeous lady around there."Well, I couldn't answer if I were..." said Essence,usually called Scent by her buddies and also a great master of dueling. " Oh, great now I can turn on the lights!" said Eva and pushed the button." Hey, somebody's trying to sleep!" shouted Kyra, probably the smartest girl around but also as cute as others." Well, we are not.." said Eva." Oh, so you are not... I don't care, turn it off." answered Kyra." We are two, we are majority, and we are.." said Eva." Probably the worst friends ever. I haven't seen anyone else as selfish, rude...."" Here we go again...." said Essence" bad, egotist..........(after a long time), dorkish as you are." said Kyra" Zzzzzzz....zzzz""Hey, are you awake? Whatever, where was I, irritating......." Girls needed to share rooms but boys didn't. So Aaron, Ryan, Ethan and Noah were resting in there own rooms. Aaron, who wasn't that happy all the time, were reorganizing his Pyro deck. He was usually bored but in duels he was extremely funny and peaceful. After he was done, he turned off the lights and started to dream new strategies for the exam duel. Ryan, was absolutely different, he was funny, he loved living but that wasn't changing the truth that he didn't know how to duel well. So he was probably hopeless about the next day and hoping he can do good in the written exam. Ethan was a real whizzkid. He was doing his homeworks, studying... He always got the best results in the pre-school exams. And he was good in dueling but not the best. And Noah, the best of all freshmen, a total duel bomb he wasn't even worried about the next day he was just hoping that he could finally duel Ethan and Essence, who were also good... TO BE CONTINUEDComment Please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 You need a WEATHER REPORT.Hi' date=' I won't say so much, so plz read and comment.Plz? PLZ!?!? Plz isn't English, it's CHATSPEAK!!!!! Chatspeak makes writers look dumb, unless their story is called ttyl or something, in which case it's fine. But this is....eeewwwww, gross.A month passed after North Academy accepted the new students of the year. If Duel Academy teaches kids about dueling, NORTH Academy teaches kids about CARDINAL DIRECTIONS! What a dumb school. The entrance exam was hard but not hard for those who were destined to be the next king of games. If you tell us the difficulty setting of the entry exams, why don't you show the whole scene? Hard but not hard for the DESTINED person and/or people? How can TWO people be ONE king, anyways!? I think you mean 'hard for everyone but the Marty Stu', missy. Well, actually nothing was any different from the last year, so the NEW students were THERE LAST YEAR. Huh. though there were (WAS) finally a girl's dorm at North Academy. The school was SO poor that there was only ONE dorm, which they stuffed FEMALES AND MALES into. EEEEEWWWWWWWWW. How small was this dorm, may I ask? Not so many girls were at North, but some who didn't want to live in an island I didn't know they were on an island in the first place. If they DIDN'T WANT to go, WHY DID THEY FREAKIN' GO!?!?, they were there resting in there rooms...3 THREE girls had to stay in one dorm because twenty girls in a massive dorm would be a travesty considering what they went through last year! and the dorm was banned for boys just like in the Duel Academy. Well, THAT was a run-on. For the girl's dormitory, North Academy should hire a female teacher and with a great effort they achieved convincing Mai Valentine for the job. Breaking the fourth wall was dreadfully unnecessary for this one, wot wot. And wha? A school teaching cardinal directions hires a failure of a female duelist to teach? She has stooped to a new low, ladies and gents. A NEW LOW. So far every freshman was relaxing in their rooms just before the first exam day. The way you said that, it sounds like the whole entire time (and how long have they been in that school, anyway?) they've been lounging around, doing nothing?This enter press is unnecessary. It's a UEP! "Hey, Essence, are you sleeping?" said Eva, who was the most beautiful and the most gorgeous lady around there. And she looked like...And, uh, if she were sleeping she wouldn't answer. The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish "Well, I couldn't answer if I were..." Like I said... The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish said Essence,insert space hereusually called Scent by her buddies and also a great master of dueling. Well, why would you call someone Essence Scent? A better nickname would be, what, Magazine. And it's a two-syllable name. How hard could that be to say? And she looks like..." Oh, great now I can turn on the lights!" said Eva and pushed the button. She couldn't have already? LIKE I SAID... The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish " Hey, somebody's trying to sleep!" shouted Kyra, probably the smartest girl around but also as cute as others. And the others would be...By the way, their beds are globs of gelatin, yah? And the dorm itself is painted feces brown!" Well, we are not.." said Eva. Strangely enough, with two periods. And also, The most beautiful mannequins are often the most inconsiderate.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish " Oh, so you are not... I don't care, turn it off." answered Kyra. And ALSO, The smartest cute old men are often the most self-centered.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish" We are two, we are majority, and we are.." said Eva. Strangely enough, with two periods. And why does everyone say instead of complain, or scream, or cry, or ask, or reply? By the way, why is there always a space after the first quotation mark? Odd." Probably the worst friends ever. I haven't seen anyone else as selfish, rude...."" Here we go again...." said Essence PERIOD. If they're so selfish why don't they just, y'know, not be friends in the first place?" LEARN TO CAPITALIZE bad, egotist..........(after a long time), dorkish as you are." said Kyra PERIOD So she said (after a long time)? You could have ended the quote there and INSTEAD said, "Bad, egotist..." she paused for a while, "dorkish as you are." Now THAT'S an improvement if I do say so myself. And I did! Then it's an improvement!" Zzzzzzz....zzzz" Nobody really says "Zeezeezeezeezee" in real life when they sleep. That's just a cartoonish term for snoring."Hey, are you awake? Whatever, where was I, irritating......." Girls needed to share rooms but boys didn't. I wonder... Girls NEED company because they're too frail and weak to survive on their own, but boys, ohoho, THEY'RE strong enough! Huh...WARNING: Big images ahead in the following spoiler.[spoiler=A sentence.]So Aaron,Ryan,Ethanand Noahwere resting in there (THEIR) own rooms. Aaron, who wasn't that happy all the time, were he's two people!? reorganizing his Pyro deck. His Yu-Cardinal Directions-Oh deck? Wha? He was usually bored but in duels he was extremely funny and peaceful. SHOW NOT TELL. After he was done, he turned off the lights in Noah's ark, crowded with animals as usual and obviously outfitted with electricity and started to dream new strategies for the exam duel. Was that really necessary? Ryan unnecessary comma was absolutely different, he was funny, he loved living but that wasn't changing the truth that he didn't know how to duel well. RUN-ON So he was probably hopeless about the next day and hoping he can do good in the written exam. Once again...SHOW NOT TELL. I won't comment on the next sentences all that much. They shouldn't exist. Ethan was a real whizzkid. He was doing his homeworks, studying... He always got the best results in the pre-school exams. And he was good in dueling but not the best. And Noah, the best of all freshmen, a total duel bomb he wasn't even worried about the next day he was just hoping that he could finally duel Ethan and Essence, who were also good... So the males get thorough personality descriptions but not the females. AND FEMINISM MARCHES ON!! What's a duel bomb? TO BE CONTINUEDPLEASE read other fanfiction once in your lifetime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Ok, (wow, it sure took you for a long time), I'll change the mistakes soon, I love the main idea and characters, so I won't change them, still thanks for commenting... EDIT: Wow, you are even noticing the spaces between characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 I notice a lot of things, Moonlight Princess. A lot of things. *_* *slowly fades away* And your welcome. *shakes hand* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Its good... I think.............. Good idea...................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:~WhiteTiger~:. Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Hmmm..........well,pretty good........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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RyanAtlus Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 [spoiler=BLAH BLAH BLAAAARGHHHH!!!]You need a WEATHER REPORT.Hi' date=' I won't say so much, so plz read and comment.Plz? PLZ!?!? Plz isn't English, it's CHATSPEAK!!!!! Chatspeak makes writers look dumb, unless their story is called ttyl or something, in which case it's fine. But this is....eeewwwww, gross.A month passed after North Academy accepted the new students of the year. If Duel Academy teaches kids about dueling, NORTH Academy teaches kids about CARDINAL DIRECTIONS! What a dumb school. The entrance exam was hard but not hard for those who were destined to be the next king of games. If you tell us the difficulty setting of the entry exams, why don't you show the whole scene? Hard but not hard for the DESTINED person and/or people? How can TWO people be ONE king, anyways!? I think you mean 'hard for everyone but the Marty Stu', missy. Well, actually nothing was any different from the last year, so the NEW students were THERE LAST YEAR. Huh. though there were (WAS) finally a girl's dorm at North Academy. The school was SO poor that there was only ONE dorm, which they stuffed FEMALES AND MALES into. EEEEEWWWWWWWWW. How small was this dorm, may I ask? Not so many girls were at North, but some who didn't want to live in an island I didn't know they were on an island in the first place. If they DIDN'T WANT to go, WHY DID THEY FREAKIN' GO!?!?, they were there resting in there rooms...3 THREE girls had to stay in one dorm because twenty girls in a massive dorm would be a travesty considering what they went through last year! and the dorm was banned for boys just like in the Duel Academy. Well, THAT was a run-on. For the girl's dormitory, North Academy should hire a female teacher and with a great effort they achieved convincing Mai Valentine for the job. Breaking the fourth wall was dreadfully unnecessary for this one, wot wot. And wha? A school teaching cardinal directions hires a failure of a female duelist to teach? She has stooped to a new low, ladies and gents. A NEW LOW. So far every freshman was relaxing in their rooms just before the first exam day. The way you said that, it sounds like the whole entire time (and how long have they been in that school, anyway?) they've been lounging around, doing nothing?This enter press is unnecessary. It's a UEP! "Hey, Essence, are you sleeping?" said Eva, who was the most beautiful and the most gorgeous lady around there. And she looked like...And, uh, if she were sleeping she wouldn't answer. The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish "Well, I couldn't answer if I were..." Like I said... The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish said Essence,insert space hereusually called Scent by her buddies and also a great master of dueling. Well, why would you call someone Essence Scent? A better nickname would be, what, Magazine. And it's a two-syllable name. How hard could that be to say? And she looks like..." Oh, great now I can turn on the lights!" said Eva and pushed the button. She couldn't have already? LIKE I SAID... The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish " Hey, somebody's trying to sleep!" shouted Kyra, probably the smartest girl around but also as cute as others. And the others would be...By the way, their beds are globs of gelatin, yah? And the dorm itself is painted feces brown!" Well, we are not.." said Eva. Strangely enough, with two periods. And also, The most beautiful mannequins are often the most inconsiderate.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish " Oh, so you are not... I don't care, turn it off." answered Kyra. And ALSO, The smartest cute old men are often the most self-centered.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish" We are two, we are majority, and we are.." said Eva. Strangely enough, with two periods. And why does everyone say instead of complain, or scream, or cry, or ask, or reply? By the way, why is there always a space after the first quotation mark? Odd." Probably the worst friends ever. I haven't seen anyone else as selfish, rude...."" Here we go again...." said Essence PERIOD. If they're so selfish why don't they just, y'know, not be friends in the first place?" LEARN TO CAPITALIZE bad, egotist..........(after a long time), dorkish as you are." said Kyra PERIOD So she said (after a long time)? You could have ended the quote there and INSTEAD said, "Bad, egotist..." she paused for a while, "dorkish as you are." Now THAT'S an improvement if I do say so myself. And I did! Then it's an improvement!" Zzzzzzz....zzzz" Nobody really says "Zeezeezeezeezee" in real life when they sleep. That's just a cartoonish term for snoring."Hey, are you awake? Whatever, where was I, irritating......." Girls needed to share rooms but boys didn't. I wonder... Girls NEED company because they're too frail and weak to survive on their own, but boys, ohoho, THEY'RE strong enough! Huh...WARNING: Big images ahead in the following spoiler.[spoiler=A sentence.]So Aaron,Ryan,Ethanand Noahwere resting in there (THEIR) own rooms. Aaron, who wasn't that happy all the time, were he's two people!? reorganizing his Pyro deck. His Yu-Cardinal Directions-Oh deck? Wha? He was usually bored but in duels he was extremely funny and peaceful. SHOW NOT TELL. After he was done, he turned off the lights in Noah's ark, crowded with animals as usual and obviously outfitted with electricity and started to dream new strategies for the exam duel. Was that really necessary? Ryan unnecessary comma was absolutely different, he was funny, he loved living but that wasn't changing the truth that he didn't know how to duel well. RUN-ON So he was probably hopeless about the next day and hoping he can do good in the written exam. Once again...SHOW NOT TELL. I won't comment on the next sentences all that much. They shouldn't exist. Ethan was a real whizzkid. He was doing his homeworks, studying... He always got the best results in the pre-school exams. And he was good in dueling but not the best. And Noah, the best of all freshmen, a total duel bomb he wasn't even worried about the next day he was just hoping that he could finally duel Ethan and Essence, who were also good... So the males get thorough personality descriptions but not the females. AND FEMINISM MARCHES ON!! What's a duel bomb? TO BE CONTINUEDPLEASE read other fanfiction once in your lifetime. I love it when you do that... :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charming Leo Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 You need a WEATHER REPORT.Hi' date=' I won't say so much, so plz read and comment.Plz? PLZ!?!? Plz isn't English, it's CHATSPEAK!!!!! Chatspeak makes writers look dumb, unless their story is called ttyl or something, in which case it's fine. But this is....eeewwwww, gross.A month passed after North Academy accepted the new students of the year. If Duel Academy teaches kids about dueling, NORTH Academy teaches kids about CARDINAL DIRECTIONS! What a dumb school. The entrance exam was hard but not hard for those who were destined to be the next king of games. If you tell us the difficulty setting of the entry exams, why don't you show the whole scene? Hard but not hard for the DESTINED person and/or people? How can TWO people be ONE king, anyways!? I think you mean 'hard for everyone but the Marty Stu', missy. Well, actually nothing was any different from the last year, so the NEW students were THERE LAST YEAR. Huh. though there were (WAS) finally a girl's dorm at North Academy. The school was SO poor that there was only ONE dorm, which they stuffed FEMALES AND MALES into. EEEEEWWWWWWWWW. How small was this dorm, may I ask? Not so many girls were at North, but some who didn't want to live in an island I didn't know they were on an island in the first place. If they DIDN'T WANT to go, WHY DID THEY FREAKIN' GO!?!?, they were there resting in there rooms...3 THREE girls had to stay in one dorm because twenty girls in a massive dorm would be a travesty considering what they went through last year! and the dorm was banned for boys just like in the Duel Academy. Well, THAT was a run-on. For the girl's dormitory, North Academy should hire a female teacher and with a great effort they achieved convincing Mai Valentine for the job. Breaking the fourth wall was dreadfully unnecessary for this one, wot wot. And wha? A school teaching cardinal directions hires a failure of a female duelist to teach? She has stooped to a new low, ladies and gents. A NEW LOW. So far every freshman was relaxing in their rooms just before the first exam day. The way you said that, it sounds like the whole entire time (and how long have they been in that school, anyway?) they've been lounging around, doing nothing?This enter press is unnecessary. It's a UEP! "Hey, Essence, are you sleeping?" said Eva, who was the most beautiful and the most gorgeous lady around there. And she looked like...And, uh, if she were sleeping she wouldn't answer. The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish "Well, I couldn't answer if I were..." Like I said... The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish said Essence,insert space hereusually called Scent by her buddies and also a great master of dueling. Well, why would you call someone Essence Scent? A better nickname would be, what, Magazine. And it's a two-syllable name. How hard could that be to say? And she looks like..." Oh, great now I can turn on the lights!" said Eva and pushed the button. She couldn't have already? LIKE I SAID... The most beautiful mannequins are often the dumbest.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish " Hey, somebody's trying to sleep!" shouted Kyra, probably the smartest girl around but also as cute as others. And the others would be...By the way, their beds are globs of gelatin, yah? And the dorm itself is painted feces brown!" Well, we are not.." said Eva. Strangely enough, with two periods. And also, The most beautiful mannequins are often the most inconsiderate.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish " Oh, so you are not... I don't care, turn it off." answered Kyra. And ALSO, The smartest cute old men are often the most self-centered.~ Words of Wisdom, Kendo Fish" We are two, we are majority, and we are.." said Eva. Strangely enough, with two periods. And why does everyone say instead of complain, or scream, or cry, or ask, or reply? By the way, why is there always a space after the first quotation mark? Odd." Probably the worst friends ever. I haven't seen anyone else as selfish, rude...."" Here we go again...." said Essence PERIOD. If they're so selfish why don't they just, y'know, not be friends in the first place?" LEARN TO CAPITALIZE bad, egotist..........(after a long time), dorkish as you are." said Kyra PERIOD So she said (after a long time)? You could have ended the quote there and INSTEAD said, "Bad, egotist..." she paused for a while, "dorkish as you are." Now THAT'S an improvement if I do say so myself. And I did! Then it's an improvement!" Zzzzzzz....zzzz" Nobody really says "Zeezeezeezeezee" in real life when they sleep. That's just a cartoonish term for snoring."Hey, are you awake? Whatever, where was I, irritating......." Girls needed to share rooms but boys didn't. I wonder... Girls NEED company because they're too frail and weak to survive on their own, but boys, ohoho, THEY'RE strong enough! Huh...WARNING: Big images ahead in the following spoiler.[spoiler=A sentence.]So Aaron,Ryan,Ethanand Noahwere resting in there (THEIR) own rooms. Aaron, who wasn't that happy all the time, were he's two people!? reorganizing his Pyro deck. His Yu-Cardinal Directions-Oh deck? Wha? He was usually bored but in duels he was extremely funny and peaceful. SHOW NOT TELL. After he was done, he turned off the lights in Noah's ark, crowded with animals as usual and obviously outfitted with electricity and started to dream new strategies for the exam duel. Was that really necessary? Ryan unnecessary comma was absolutely different, he was funny, he loved living but that wasn't changing the truth that he didn't know how to duel well. RUN-ON So he was probably hopeless about the next day and hoping he can do good in the written exam. Once again...SHOW NOT TELL. I won't comment on the next sentences all that much. They shouldn't exist. Ethan was a real whizzkid. He was doing his homeworks, studying... He always got the best results in the pre-school exams. And he was good in dueling but not the best. And Noah, the best of all freshmen, a total duel bomb he wasn't even worried about the next day he was just hoping that he could finally duel Ethan and Essence, who were also good... So the males get thorough personality descriptions but not the females. AND FEMINISM MARCHES ON!! What's a duel bomb? TO BE CONTINUEDPLEASE read other fanfiction once in your lifetime. omg... did u have to do all that? i mean...does it really matter that much?all those little things?not cool dude :(i like it though! i dont care about mistakes. i like it coz its the thought of it that matters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 I didn't HAVE to do all that much...but I notice a lot of things...such as your username not being capitalized. What's up with that, dood!? Anyways, the characters DO show personality. Just try not to make them the diamond standard. By that I mean typical, like the guy who always wins and the jerk who wins a lot and the shy guy who sucks. Or if you do, FLESH'M OUT!! EDIT: And according to that Magic the Gathering quiz, my color is white and yours is red. I notice a lot of things...*_* *fades away* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Weather Reports are necessary for survival and the development of good Fan Fics. You do not question, insult, or harrass Kendo Fish or any of the Weather Reports she makes. If you do, you are not abiding by the law, and termination is required. Anyway, good intro, but you could do a lot more to make it more flavoured. (Yes, I said flavoured.) For example, I could turn this... A month passed after North Academy accepted the new students of the year. The entrance exam was hard but not hard for those who were destined to be the next king of games. Well' date=' actually nothing was any different from the last year, though there were finally a girl's dorm at North Academy. Not so many girls were at North, but some who didn't want to live in an island, they were there resting in there rooms...3 girls had to stay in one dorm and the dorm was banned for boys just like in the Duel Academy. For the girl's dormitory, North Academy should hire a female teacher and with a great effort they achieved convincing Mai Valentine for the job. So far every freshman was relaxing in their rooms just before the first exam day.[/quote'] Into... A long' date=' tiring month passed after North Academy, and academy for dueling, accepted the new students of the current year. The entrance exam was tedious and difficult, and only expert duelists could pass. The only changes made to the Acadamy's current status was a new Girls Dorm, which held about (insert maximum number here). This dorm is a semi-huge dorm, located on/in (insert location here), colored pink to indicate it was for the girls. The dorm was made of wood, specifically oak (Don't go building your home outta oak); the insides were (insert inside wall materials here) The halls were tall but narrow; these walls made up the simple layout of the dorm. The lights used florescent (sp?) bulbs suspended from the high ceiling, illuminating the hallway with a shade of brightness. The dorm had (insert number of floors here/insert number of wings here) floors/wings. Not so many girls were at North, but some who didn't want to live on an island, they were there resting in there rooms...(that was so very confusing)3 girls had to stay in one dorm; boys were restricted from entering, just like in the all-famous Duel Academy. [s']For the girl's dormitory, North Academy wanted hire a female teacher and [/s]The North Acadamy achieved in convincing Mai Valentine for the job of a female teacher for the Girl's Dorm. So farAt the moment, every freshman was relaxing in their rooms waiting for the first exam, scheduled for today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charming Leo Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 I didn't HAVE to do all that much...but I notice a lot of things...such as your username not being capitalized. What's up with that' date=' dood!? Anyways, the characters DO show personality. Just try not to make them the diamond standard. By that I mean typical, like the guy who always wins and the jerk who wins a lot and the shy guy who sucks. Or if you do, FLESH'M OUT!! EDIT: And according to that Magic the Gathering quiz, my color is white and yours is red. I notice a lot of things...*_* *fades away*[/quote'] ...no more questions your honour... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 I didn't HAVE to do all that much...but I notice a lot of things...such as your username not being capitalized. What's up with that' date=' dood!? Anyways, the characters DO show personality. Just try not to make them the diamond standard. By that I mean typical, like the guy who always wins and the jerk who wins a lot and the shy guy who sucks. Or if you do, FLESH'M OUT!! EDIT: And according to that Magic the Gathering quiz, my color is white and yours is red. I notice a lot of things...*_* *fades away*[/quote'] ...no more questions your honour... People outside of the General Section need new Sarcasm Detectors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lk123 Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 good i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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