Somthing is wrong with the Effect, help me out

[dwhkiller]

[RestLess-BoTics]

How about:

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, both players are only allowed to have 4 cards in their hand. Discard the remainder of the cards if there are more than 4 cards in either player's hand. During each of your Standby Phases, pay 700 Life Points. If not, send this card from the field to the Graveyard.

 

 

Ok, I changed some things around and made it a bit more complex. I like the picture, but try and change the name into something longer.... If you need any help with anything, feel free to Private Message me.

[Dragon Master]

ok 8/10

[dwhkiller]

How about:

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' both players are only allowed to have 4 cards in their hand. Discard the remainder of the cards if there are more than 4 cards in either player's hand. During each of your Standby Phases, pay 700 Life Points. If not, send this card from the field to the Graveyard.

 

 

Ok, I changed some things around and made it a bit more complex. I like the picture, but try and change the name into something longer.... If you need any help with anything, feel free to Private Message me.

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umm okay i'll change it and UPDATE MORE~

[RestLess-BoTics]

Lightning Strike : When a monster on your side of the field is targeted with an opponent's spell card, nagate its effect and destroy it.

 

Secret Tunnel : This card can only be activated when "Invasion Commander" is face-up on your side of the field. By paying 500 Life points each turn, select one Level 4 or lower monster on your side of the field with "Invasion" in its name. During this turn, the selected monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

 

Miracle : This card can only be activated if you discard 1 card from your hand each turn. For each monster with the word "Invasion" in its name, increase both its ATK and DEF by 200 points and increase your Life Points by 200 points.

[Bloodrun]

ok, im sure what to help, becuase i thnk i am alittle late in opening this thred, and they are probably updated so...... 9/10 :o

[Yankee]

Nice cards, i don't know what they where before, but good. 8/10

[jemjosher]

i would re word mirical to say ....... increas you life points by 200 for every monster with"invasion" in it's name that is face up on the field. all monsters with "invasion in their name gain 200 to their original ATK and DEF during the turn that this card is activated.

[dwhkiller]

ok' date=' im sure what to help, becuase i thnk i am alittle late in opening this thred, and they are probably updated so...... 9/10 :o

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not going to update them =O untill my set comes out just change the wrong part which u think its not right~

[Alordzynix]

I sure like balance the perfect card to negate exodia.

[MasterOfMagicians]

Here are some grammar changes for the cards. Otherwise they are nice. 7/10

Good effort.

 

Balance -

'Both players can only have 4 cards in their hand. If there is more than 4 cards in either player's hand, discard cards until only each player holds only 4 cards in their respective hands.'

'Pay 700 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases to keep this card active on the field. If you cannot, this card is destroyed.'

 

Secret Tunnel -

'This card's effect can only be activated when there is at least 1 "Invasion Commander" on your side of the field. Once per turn you may pay 500 Life Points to select 1 Level 4 or lower monster on your side of the field with "Invasion" in its name (except "Invasion Commander") and attack your opponent's Life Points directly.'

 

Lightning Strike -

'When your opponent activates a Spell Card that targets a monster on your side of the field, negate the activation of the Spell Card and destroy it.'

 

Miracle -

'Discard 1 card from your hand in order to increase your Life Points by 200 for every monster on your side of the field that has "Invasion" in its card name. All monsters with "Invasion" in its card name gain 200 ATK and DEF during the turn this card is activated.'