Jak35 Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 Im not fully done with the card set yet but i will finish it. This was the first part of my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 nice 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jak35 Posted November 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 here is the seconed part of my card set.i hope you like my cards so please coment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 Why is this set bad? Here are some few answers: Somethings wrong in the attributes. E.g. Scorpion should be FIRE or DARK, Reptile EARTH/DARK, etc. The images aren't from Mortal Kombat Armageddon but Mortal Kombat Shaolin Monks and several other games like Deadly Alliance.  I would also decrease the stars and ATK points.  Don't invent sub-types of your own, just use the original ones. And it's Pyro not Phro. Also, Sektor and Cyrax should be MACHINE. You need to improve your Card Grammar, you can do that by reading more cards and seeing how Takahashi writes the effects. THE CARD GRAMMAR OF YOURS IS BAD. All of them have high attack points, ultimate rare foil, and some have overpowered effects and some underpowered. Why not trying reading Kazuki's cards and see methods of new cards you can create?  A tip: You can't start off with pop culture. It will be hard for you.. so just make random cards and learn from your mistakes. And this should be in Pop culture section more than it should be here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jak35 Posted November 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 here are five more cards i made. hope you enjoy and please commint Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 ^You didn't listen to a word I said. And you say 'commints' please. <_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeboy Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 i agree with mare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seligsalt Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 Good!!! 9.99/10!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jak35 Posted November 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 here mare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedMezu Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 GOOD CARDS BUT SEKTOR DOSN'T USE FIRE I AM PREETY SURE HE SHOULD BE DARK. BUT EVERYTHING ELSE WAS AWSOME 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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