Hellopayton Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 Hey, people! I am working on something called "Dragons of the Blue Plains" and needed your critism. Here are the current cards: I will add more soon. Edit: Did they show up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 wow..........we can't see them. you need to use photobucket to host them..or even tinypic. this doesn't cut the ice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hellopayton Posted November 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 Yea, I am new here. I am still learning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 Ok, it's fine. Just fix that. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 you img is down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hellopayton Posted November 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 I will fix it soon. I have one question though; can I upload the pictures to a website hoster like "Wordpress"? Becuase in an old forum I was on, that worked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 I will fix it soon. I have one question though; can I upload the pictures to a website hoster like "Wordpress"? Becuase in an old forum I was on' date=' that worked.[/quote'] its better to use things like tinypic.com or photobucket.com, but in this case, all your have to do with these pic that have right now, is switch you img, to IMG =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hellopayton Posted November 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 I will fix it soon. I have one question though; can I upload the pictures to a website hoster like "Wordpress"? Becuase in an old forum I was on' date=' that worked.[/quote'] its better to use things like tinypic.com or photobucket.com, but in this case, all your have to do with these pic that have right now, is switch you img, to IMG =) I use Wordpress (a blog hoster) to upload them and so far they are fine. The only problem with Tinypic and Photobucket (plus a few others) is that it messes up my computer and causes a lag. Also, I am using my parents computer until I get my own, so I don't want to mess it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 ok they showed up, but i gotta tell yeah man, b4 people start getting at you, you have a lot of mistakes, heres a few:your Dragon, doesnt need have 'Dragon' around it, um when your righting numbers, put them in number like 3 not in letter form like three, k? and hmm, tings like Graveyard, Life Points, are capitalzied, other then grammar, your doing pretty good, 8/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jak35 Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 Very good cards i like the effects. I think dragon of flame is perfect. try looking at my mortal kombat cards. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=16463 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 Very good cards i like the effects. I think dragon of flame is perfect. try looking at my mortal kombat cards. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=16463 man your not suppose to advertise your own threads... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 The cards are a bit overpowered. The grammar needs some help. For example, the word Defense does not need to have ' ' with it. Just fix up those things and the cards will be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 Yeah I noticed that too. He posts that on all his comments... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 ok 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 Hmmm... it needs work, especially your grammar. If you need help with stuff like this, feel free to Private Message me. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hellopayton Posted November 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 I think in the "card" language is where I lack. It has been a year or two now since I have played Yu-Gi-Oh, and I need to review how to actually write the effects. The grammar is something I am perfecting, for none of us are perfect. I will come back with some better effects. I like to use the words instead of number symbols, though. Example- Three.3. ~Hellopayton~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 I think that flame dragon is simply perfect. the grammar is just a bit off. nothing big at all is wrong with these. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted November 26, 2007 Report Share Posted November 26, 2007 I like the Spell Card the best. Cool effects 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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