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[spoiler=chapter 1 THE NEW YEAR]

Outside Of Duel Acadamy

 

"im late im late for the entrence exam"screamed Rex.Rex ran to the door of duel acadamy when someone in a blue coat came out the door."ha ha ha an freshman in the entrence exam whos late definetly an slifer slacker"Muttered the blue coated person.

 

"Who are you im Rex"anounced Rex.The blue person laughed so hard it seemed he would choke."You don't know me im the famous powerful duelist rapter oblist blue"said rapter when he was dancing while Rex went into duel acadamy.

 

Duel Arena

 

"looks like we are fins-"shouted the vice chancler.

"nope im hear for the enternce exam"screached Rex.In the duel area was 2 duels steve vs mid mag and destruct vs old mag.

 

STEVE VS MID MAG

 

most of duel stipped

steve 3700 life points,mid mag 3000 life points.

steve has alpha the magnet warrior in attack mode (atk 1400)

mid mag has 1 face down

 

"my turn ",shouted steve"I draw".Steve summons gamma the magnet warrior(atk 1500) in atk mode then ends his turn.

 

"ha thats all scard of my face down"laughed the mid mag.Mid draws then activates his face down dark magick curten (mid 1500 life points) to specil summon dark magician then dark magician attacks alpha(steve 2600) then ends.

 

"come on if I don't draw the card now its over for me maybe"said steve.Steve draws then has a smile and activates ring of destruction destroying gamma and inflicting 1500 points of damage to both players (mid 0/steve 1100).

 

DESTRUCT VS OLD MAGICIAN

 

most of duel skipped

destruct has 2300 life points,old magician has 1600 life points

 

destruct activates premuture berrial (destruct 1500) to specil summon elemental hero sparkman from his graveyard (atk 1600) then attacked old magiacian dirrectly (old 0)

 

Back To Adiance

 

"please im begging you to still put me I was just late"begged Rex

"Fine you will duel the young mag but if you lose youre out"muttered vice chanceler.

 

REX VS YOUNG

 

Rex draws then summoned sonic chick(def 300) then sets 1 face down.

 

Young draws and activates dark magick curten to specil summon dark magician(young 2000) then equips it with fariy medior crush then attacks sonic chick(but not destyroyed) .Thanks to fariy medior crush the difference between dark magicians atk and sonic chicks def is inflicted to rex (rex 1800)"ha thats not all Rex"said young.Young activates tremendous fire (young 1500,Rex 800).

 

Rex draws then activates his face down double summon summoning speed warrior and junk warrior but still tributes speed warrior(lv2) and junk warrior(lv3) to synchro summon junk warrior(lv5) junk warriors effect gains equal atk from sonic chick making junk warriors atk(2600).Rex activates his face down synchro boost equiping to junk warrior(3100 atk).But Rex isn't finished he activates shadow spell equiping to dark magician(1800 atk) Junk warrior attacks dark magican (young 200) and sonic chick attacks young dirrectly (young 0)

 

"new people go to your homes then come back tommorro for the results"said vice chancel.

"and I betted on young mag to destroy the weakling but he lost arrghh that wimp will lose the next duel he does ha ha ha"shouted rapter(in his mind)

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 2

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 2 DRAGON'S TEST]

AT DUEL ARENA

 

"welcome new students to duel acadamy"said the vice chanceler"and welcome chanceler jeff"There was a curten and out came someone with black hair and black suit."hello new students look at the board for witch dorms you are in"anounced jeff.

 

name duel points written points question points total

DRAG TAMER/oblisk blue/10th place

 

DESTRUCT/ra yellow/75th place

STEVE/ra yellow/99th place

 

TOM/slifer red/101th place

REX/slifer red/149th place

 

"if youre at the bottem youre silfer red,middle ra yellow,top oblisk blue"muttered vice chanceler"now to your dorms"

 

SLIFER RED DORM/REX'S ROOM

 

"now what look at my deck yep"said rex.KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK Rex opened the door and their was 2 oblisk blues their."im the amazing dragon tamer and I need you to duel tom and lose but don't make it look like that just summon youre junk warrior and hope he beats it ok"said dragon tamer.Rex was thinking what should he do.

"im alice an elite oblisk if you do it then dragon tamer will give you a tuner monster"she said."we will go to see the duel ok".

 

 

SLIFER RED DORM/OUTSIDE

 

"tom tom lets duel"shouted Rex

"ok fine but im not a challege"signed Tom

 

REX VS TOM

 

its Toms turn and he summons gyroid(atk 1000) in atk mode then ends his turn.

 

Its rexs turn and he summons speed warrior(atk 900) in atk mode."thats not all tom speed warriors atk doubles to 1800 on the turn its summoned so speed warrior attack gyroid"tom has an face of fear as the attack hit(tom 3200)but gyroids not destroyed because of its effect

 

tom draws then summons patroid(atk 1200) in atk mode and attacks speed warrior (rex 3700) and gyroid attacks rex(rex 2700)then sets a card with an sad face.

 

Rex draws then summons junk synchron(atk 1300) in atk mode."oh no"said tom.

"thats not all junk synchrons effect activates summoning 1 lv2 or lower monster from my graveyard and thats speed warrior then im going to synchro summon junk warrior"said rex.junk warrior(atk 2300) and junk warrior atks patroid tom(2100).then sets a face down.

 

"im going to lose I just know it I can't beat junk warrior"signed tom

"you can do it tom"both rex and dragon tamer said.

"ok then"shouted tom.

 

Tom draws then summons steamroid(atk 1800) in atk mode.As he crossed his fingers he activated his face down limeter removal doubling his machien monsters atk steamroid(atk 3600).Then steamroid attacks junk warrior and steamroid's atk increases by 500 when it atks steamroid(atk 4100) (rex 900) then gyroid attacks rex but rex activates scrap iron scarcrow negating the attack and sprap iron scarcrow goes face down.

 

"see you can do it tom"said rex.

"nope because limeter removal destroyes steamroid and gyroid"signed tom.

 

its rex's turn he draws then summons sonic chick(atk 300) in atk mode then equips it with synchro boost making its atk 800 and sonic chick attacks tom(tom 1300).

 

its toms turn he draws and has a big smille as he summons amouther gyroid(atk 1000) and activates dust tornado destroying scarap iron scarcrow and gyroid attacks sonic chick (rex 700) then activates final flame inficking 600 points of damage to rex(rex 100)

 

rex activates monster recarnation discarding 1 card to get speed warrior in his hand then summons speed warrior(atk 1800) then equips it with horn of the unicorn making speed warriors atk 2500 and speed warrior attacks gyroid (tom 0)

 

"great duel rex ive now got comifidnce to keep on dueling with risks like my limeter removal"said tom.

"you may have won the duel but you made tom do better in dueling so then ill give you the tuner magna draco here you go"wispered dragon tamer.

"thanks"shouted rex.

"huh"said tom"you know I can here you"

they all ran to the dorms as rapter was watching in a glare

 

"hmm not bad that wimp beat one of his slacker and almost lost that shows ill beat that wimp so bad he will get expelled ah ill plan to get him expelled smart rapter"said rapter in his head.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 3

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 3 RAPTERS MYSTERY DECK PART 1]

DUEL ARENA

 

"attencion students we now are having the practice day where I pick 2 students to duel each other"anounced the vice chanceler"steve and rapter duel now".

"ive been tested and this test ill not fail even if it is to beat one of the best students"said steve.

"this will be easy for me"laughed rapter"ha ha ha"

"and its my chance to see how powerful they are"smiled Rex

"hello its me dragon tamer ive dueled rapter and drawed"muttered dragon

 

RAPTER VS STEVE

 

"don't mide I go first"smilled Steve

"ok since you'll be needing it"laughed rapter.

 

steve drawed then summoned gamma the magnet warrior(atk 1500) in atk mode then sets 3 cards.

 

"3 cards their must be a good card in them"said Rex

"exactly but rapter knows what to do"smilled dragon tamer

"huh what"questioned Rex.

 

"ha ha ha"laughed rapter"a ra yellow student would of did that move oh well I draw".As rapter drew his grin went big as he summoned 1 monster face down defence mode and set 1 card and ended his turn.

 

"thats all hmm seemed odd"said rex

"shut up slacker"screemed rapter

"rapters got steve in a hole see the rest of the duel"said dragon

 

steve activates 1 of his face downs shield crush destroying the defence monster and gamma attacked rapter dirrectly(rapter 2500) then steve activated his face down card destruction discarding both players hand.Rapter had an frown as one of his best cards when to the graveyard.then activated 2 tremendous fire (steve 3000/rapter 500).

 

Rapter lied on the ground then drawed as he lept up and activates monster recarnation then put an monster face down def mode then sets 2 cards.

 

steve summons alpha(atk 1400) then alpha attacks the def monster and gamma attacks rapter but before the attack rapter activates emergancy pervission destroying his 2 face down to gain 2000 life points (rapter 1000).

 

rapter activates his face down monsters ability to specil summon an monster with 2000 defence or less like red eyes zombie dragon."ha you've lost because red eyes zombie dragon is my 2nd best monster you know why 1 activate zombie world"red eyes attacks gamma (steve 2100) then gamma comes to rapters side of the field and gamma attacks alpha (steve 2000)

 

"ha ha ha you will lose the duel as ill slash youre field to zero"laughed rapter.

"urghh ive been wining on life points and ill win this duel also once ive got gamma in my graveyard"fround steve

"Rex you saw how first rapter was losing and once he had is powerful zombie he has taken some of steves monsters"anounced dragon

"now I have to draw my swift dragon or ill be deafeated"said steve in his mind.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 4

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 4 RAPTERS MYSTERY DECK PART 2]

CONTINUED FROM CHAPTER 3 DUEL STEVE VS RAPTER

 

rapter has 1000 life points and steve has 2000 life points

rapter had red eyes zombie dragon(atk 2400) and gamma(atk 1500)

 

"i draw yes I summon the powerful luster dragon in atk mode"luster dragon(atk 1900) luster dragon attacks gamma (rapter 600) then sets a card.

 

rapter activates dragons treasure equiping to red eyes(atk 2700) then red eyes attacks luster dragon(steve 1200) then luster dragon attacks steve but steve activates his face down half attack halfing luster dragons attack to 950 (steve 250)

 

"arrguh im still going to win"shouted steve

"ha im wining ill just set 1 card"laughed rapter

 

steve draws then activates 2 graceful charity discard 4 cards draw 6 then sets a card and activates emergancy pervision tributing that card to gain 1000 life points then activates brain control(steve 450) controling luster dragon and tributes it to summon luster dragon 2(atk 2400) then activates 2 dragon treasure making luster dragons atk 3000 then luster dragon attacks red eyes (rapter 300)

 

"arrghh oh ill win now"laughed rapter

 

rapter activates call of the haunted specil summoning desper of the dark(atk 2800) then activates sheild and sword switching the atk of both monsters the desper from the dark attacks luster dragon (steve 0)

 

"no my deck is finished"frowned steve

"wow that duel was amazing I didn't get to see despere from the dark"said dragon

"yep its some power ill might can beat it"said destruct

"huh you were there"questioned rex

"yes he was and I was their to"laughed tom

"ha ha ha you weakling your like an slifer red"laughed rapter

"NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!"fround steve.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 5

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 5 TOKENS + EQUIP =???]

AT THE RA YELLOW DORM/DESTRUCTS ROOM

 

"urrh Steve get over it Rapter is powerful he could beat me get over it"shouted destruct.

"but his victory was easy"Steve said

"fine how about a duel to chear you up in the dock and ill get Rex and Tom"madly said destruct

 

DUEL ACADAMY DOCK

 

"lets duel"shouted Destruct and Steve.

"who goes first"questioned Tom

"hmmmm Steve would"thought Rex

 

"ok then I draw"laughed steve,"hmm my newest card is in my hand".Steve summoned vorse raider(atk 1900) in atk mode then sets a card.

 

"ok not bad but ill win"lauged destruct.destruct ativates double fusion (destruct 2000) so he can fuse elemental hero avian and burstinitrix to make flame wingman also to fuse flame wingman and sparkman to make shining flare wingman."their more ill win because I activate call of the haunted to bring sparkman back".They all gasped because destruct can win this on his first turn."I can win this if I activate this when his shining flare wingman attacks my vorse raider ill actiate mirro gate to inflict 3400 points of damage to destruct but urghh I can't do it"said steve in his mind.as the attack coladed the big expolsion hit steve making him back to himself(steve 600) then sparkman attacked steve then he activated mirro gate(destruct 400) then sets a card

 

steve draws then discards alpha,beta and gamma to specil summon valkion the magnet warrior(atk 3500)valkion attacks sparkman but destruct activates his face down mirro force destroying valkion.

 

"oh no"fround steve

"yep I won still powerful monster"laughed destruct"now for pain".

 

sparkman attacks steve(steve 0)

 

"I lost oh well thanks to you ive gained my comfuidence"thanked steve.

"wait oh class"forgot destruct

 

AT THE DUEL ARENA

 

"hello students next duel ninj vs Rex"ancounced jeff"both slifers by the way.

 

NINJ VS REX

 

Rex summons sonic chick in def mode(300 def) then sets 2 face downs.

 

"ha I can beat that"laughed ninj"I set 2 face downs then by cards I activate heavy storm destroying all spell and traps on the field"

"no not my scrap iron scarecrow and my sakeresu armor"fround rex

2 wicked tower tokens appeared on the field then ninj activated token blast destroying those 2 tokens to inflick 2000 points of damage to rex(rex 2000) then summons mad sword beast and equips it with horn of the unicorn (mad sword beast atk=2100) and mad sword beast attacks sonic chick (rex 200).

 

"ha ha lucky my sonic chick isn't destroyed because your monster has over 1900 atk"laughed rex

"doh I forgot about that but you get the pain"laughed ninj

 

rex actiates card destruction discarding both players hands then summons junk synchron(lv3) then activates its ability to spcil summon one of the cards he discarded speed warrior(lv2) then tributes them to synchro summon junk warrior then activates synchro boast and horn of the unicorn + sonic chicks atk goes to junk warrior making his atk 3800 junk warrior attacks mad sword beast (ninj 2300).

 

"oh no my best card in my deck defeated plus I horn of the unicorn goes to the top of my deck means I end my turn"signed ninj.

 

"so junk warrior attack him directly making his life points 0"laughed Rex

"NOOOOO I LOST!!!!"signed ninj

"it was a great duel you are an great duelist but strenthen youre deck with more powerful atk monsters"explained Rex

"ill give you a card for youre help heres turbo warrior thiers a problem I don't have the syncron"signed ninj

"ok ill give you my sackeretsu armor"said Rex

"urgggh that Rexs wining streak continues ill end it by getting ya yellows to beat him since oblisks can only duel slifer slackers in exans ha ha ha"thought rapter in his mind.

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 6 VICE SHOWDOWN]

REX VS RA YELLOW STUDENT

 

 

most of duel skiped

Rex has 3800 life points

ra yellow student has 1800

 

"my move I draw"laughed Rex

"come on I still hae a chance to beat you if you see my hand"knew the ya yellow student

"ok then you think but youre wrong"laughed Rex

 

Rex summoned speed warrior(atk 900) but its atk doubles to 1800 then speed warrior attacks the ya yellow student directly(ra 0).

 

"yes you said that if I win you give me a card or something"laughed Rex.

"fine heres um turbo boaster"said the ra student as he ran away.

"Rex this is odd this week ra yellow students were dueling you they all said that if you lose you will be explelled"signed Tom.

"yes oh yeah ive remembered something the exam destructs doing lets go"shouted steve.

 

DUEL ARENA

 

"good morning students today is the dorm switch exam ill pick 2 people to duel the winner is promoted to the higher up dorm now rapter,destruct down here"anounced the chanceler

"Im oblisk what if I win"questioned rapter

"ha ha ha same as allways you go into the 3 elites"laughed chanceler jeff

"so im duelling an elite"questioned rapter

 

DESTRUCT VS VICE CHANCELER

 

destruct sets 2 face down cards then summons avian(atk 1000) in atk mode then ends his turn.

 

"how boring I see you have a few traps so you would stop by monster then hit my life points with avian im correct"laughed vice

 

vice activates heavy storm destroying destructs 2 face downs then plays ancient gear castle and summons ancient gear soldier(atk 1300) but gains 300 atk so 1600.ancient gear soldier attacks avian(destruct 3400)

 

"gosh"said steve.

"what"questioned tom and rex

"vice has the ancient gears he might have the ultimate ancient gear"suggested steve

"is that the golem"questioned tom

"nope the monsters called ultimate ancient gear golem fused from ancient gear golem and 2 other ancient gears"said steve.

"well well well gold star for you steve your right and I have 1 monster in my extra deck so continue with the duel"laughed vice

 

destruct sets 1 monster and sets 2 face downs and ends his turn.

 

"ha ha ha"laughed vice"is that all"

"yes can't handle it"questioned destruct.

"I know what the monster is"laughed vice.

 

vice sets a card and then summons another ancient gear soldier.then get 1 of the ancient gear soldier to attack the monster.before the attack landed vice said"it's elemental hero clayman am I correct".destruct had a shock as the monster was clayman vice(3600)

 

"how did you know and why did you do it"questioned destruct.

"ha my ancient gear castle gains a counter ever time a monster is normal summoned,specil summoned and flipped summoned we all have to give up life points to win"laughed vice

"steve you know about the counter thing what does it do"asked tom

"the counters are used for tribute ancient gear golem has 8 stars he needs 1 more counter to summon him without tributing destructs monsters ok and its destructs turn if destruct summons a monster then well then ancient gear castle will get 1 counter and vice will summon ancient gear golem if he doesn't vice will summon anouther monster and win"signed steve

 

destruct was looking at his hand an thought until he came up with a solution.he activated monster recarnation discarding a card to bring clayman to his hand then activated polmisation to fuse sparkman and clayman to fuse thunder giant.he activated thunder giants ability to discard 1 card from his hand to destroy ancient gear soldier then attacked ancient gear soldier(vice 2800) leaving vice with no monsters then destruct set a card face down.

 

"impressive ill give you an oppotunity if you lose and I have less that 1000 life points then your in oblisk blue but ill go harder on you"anounced vice

"deal"said destruct.

 

vice actiates the effect of ancient gear castle so he tributes with the 4 counters to summon ancient gear golem(atk 3000) then activates his face down ancient gear canon equiping to ancient gear golem(atk 3600) then activates polmisation fusing ancient gear golem,ancient gear golem and ancient gear gagetrom dragon to form ultimate ancient gear golem but destruct activates his face down tormental tribute destroying all monster of the field but the cannon effect activates(destruct 2800) and an ancient gear golem comes on vices side of the field but he doesn't attack.

 

"why didn't you"questioned destruct

"ill give you 1 chance"ok said vice

 

destruct summons wrotweiler(def 1200) in def mode then sets 2 cards.

 

vice gets ancient gear golem to atk wrotweiler (destruct 1000)but destruct gets sparkman and an polmisation back

 

next destruct ativates pemuture berulal to specil summon avian(destruct 200) then activates double fusion(destruct 100) fusing burstrinitx and avian to make flame wingman and flame wingman and spatkman to make shining flare wingman(atk 4300) shining flare wingman attacks ancient gear golem (vice 0)

 

"great duel"said the vice canceler as they shaked.

"ive won the duel against that elite yay"shouted rapter.

"congrads destruct and rapter on your victorys pact your stuff to your new dorm destruct and rapter welcome to the oblisk blue elites"anounced vice

"wow that duel was amazing"said rex

"students back to your dorms the next dorm switch exam will be tommor"shouted canceler jeff.

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 7 REX VS THE BEST STUDENT PART 1]

 

REX VS AN SLIFER RED

 

most of duel skipped

slifer red student has 500 life points and big koala(atk 2700)

Rex has 1000 life points and has magna draco(1400)

 

"come on heart of the cards yes bingo"shouted Rex.He summons junk synchron(lv3) and activates his effect bringing back speed warrior(lv2)

then tributes junk synchron and speed warrior to synchro summon junk warror(lv 5 atk 2300 but atk becomes 3700 because of magna draco).

"oh no"shocked the slifer"you win your the best slifer red"

"junk warrior destroy big koala"said Rex as he won the duel.

"Rex class"shouted steve and Tom.

 

CLASSROOM

 

"ok students since im always bored of teaching things over and over again so top student jack black will teach you"shouted Vice as he left.

an chatter in the classroom came up.

"who is he?"questioned Rex and Tom

"hes the top duelest that all us oblisks knew and people from last year he went on a duel journey and came back today"explained destruct.

"correct"shouted jack"wait a minute the slifer next to you ummm whats his name oh yeah tom I remember when I dueled you and won"

"gosh can I duel you jack"asked Rex

"fine but if you lose you get a bad grade meaning you would be closer to failing duel adadamy"explained jack

 

REX VS JACK

 

jack summons mediam piece golem(atk 1600) the sets to face downs.

 

"Rex be careful about jacks cards he can quickly dominate the game"said Tom

 

Rex activates double summon summoning junk synchron(lv3) and speed warrior(lv2) then tributes them to synchro summon junk warrior(atk 2300) but jack activates tuner capture getting junk synchron on his side of the field.But that doesn't stop Rex attacks junk synchron but jack activates sakerstsu armor destroying junk warrior.

 

"see those 2 traps lead jack closer for a direct attack with his star"shouted tom but steve got him to shut up.

 

jack then tributes junk synchron and mediam piece golem to synchro summon stardust dragon(atk 2500) then sets a card and finaly commands stardust dragon to attack Rex(Rex 1500).

 

"haaaaa you can't win my monsters will strike your life points to zero"laughed jack

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 8

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 8 REX VS THE BEST STUDENT PART 2]

REX VS JACK CONTINUED FROM CHAPTER 7

 

continued from chapter 7

jack has 4000 life points,star dust dragon(atk 2500 def 2000) and a face down.

Rex has 1500 life points.

 

"this isn't over until the last card is played"shouted Rex

"hmm thats some words"suggested one of the oblisks.

"who are you"questioned destruct.

"im zaber and thats morph"answered zaber.

"I think its just rubish I end my turn"shouted jack

 

"ok my move"Rex said as he drawed and had a smile.He summons a monster face down def mode then sets 2 cards face down.

 

"ha thats youre smille come on"laughed jack as he drew"perfect I activate card destruction means both players discard all cards in their hands then they draw the same amount".as jack discarded his hand rex sees turbo synchro in jacks hand and feels a screech in his mind.Then jack summons maradin captin(atk 1200) but he doesn't activate its effect."now stardust dragon blast the mystery monster to a million pieces"laughed jack as the attack hit out came out des koala"gasp"

"yep des koala inflicts 400 points of damage to you for every card in your hand my count 800"laughed Rex.(jack 3200)

"not bad most slifers when my stardust is up they just keep fearing it and eventaly I strike them oh yeah maradin captin attack"as the attack came rex activated his face down scrap iron scarecrow but jack activates his face down dust tornado (rex 300).

 

"wow Rex decks amazing how about you and rex duels me and zaber"asked morph to destruct.

"I accep--"said steve but destruct pushed him off the seat.

"not you"shouted destruct.

"why I could beat rex in a duel"said steve as he got up.

"hey"shouted rex.

 

Rex summons goblin attack force(atk 2300) then activates emegancy pervision destroying his 2 face downs to gain 2000 life points(rex 2300) then goblin attack force attacks maradin captin (jack 2100)."the best part is the attack force switches to defence position"laughed rex.

"no slifer red will beat me or be winning the duel I still have my star"madly shouted jack.

"yay rex is wining"shouted tom.

"he may be wining on life points but jack is wining on monsters"explained steve.

 

jack orders stardust dragon to destroy goblin attack force.

"ahhhggg ive got less monsters to help me"sighed rex

 

Rex looks at the card he drawed then thinks"rex rex use jacks turbo warrior for an advantage its me turbo warrior"shouted turbo warrior.Rex activates red potion (rex 2800) then activates wicked rebirth(rex 2000) to specil summon junk warrior(lv 5) "what in the world"questioned jack.Then rex activates atomic action until (rex 500) to bring turbo synchron to his field(lv 1) "hmmm oddd whats going on"asked jack.then he tributes junk warrior and turbo synchron to synchro summon turbo warrior(lv 6 atk 2500)"my turbo warrior has an advantage by the way he halfs your stardust dragons atk down to 1250"shouted rex.turbo warrior attacks stardust dragon (jack 850)

 

"not bad but ill still win"laughed jack.

"urrghh im out of here"shouted rapter as he followed an light.

 

jack activates pot of greed draws 2 cards then has a little smille as he specil summoned vice dragon(lv5) then summons morthtronic scopon(lv3) then tributes them to synchro summon red dragon archfiend(lv 8 atk 3000 halfed to 1500)"next I set 2 cards and your move"laughed jack.

 

rex orders turbo warrior to attack but jack activates shadow spell (turbo warrior atk 1800).

 

jack activates axe of despair making red dragon archfiends atk 2500 then sends red dragon archfiend to attack turbo warrior(rex 0)

"oh no rex has lost"said steve,destruct,morph and zaber.

"still you were impressive in that duel infact you were the best slifer red ive dueled"shouted jack"so you will get a high grade".

"yes"shouted rex.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 9

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 9 RAPTERS REVENGE]

 

VICE'S ROOM

 

"rapter you are chosen on this mission you must not fail"shouted vice

"yes master"asked rapter as he bowed.

"those ra yellows has failed their mission you must defeat rex you must win or duel adamamys reputation will be down and you will be demoted to ra yellow"shouted vice.

"you can do it rapter"shouted the elites.

 

SLIFER RED DORM/REX'S ROOM

 

"rex ill explain what happened the blast from the stardust dragon made you see us spirtes"explained junk warrior and turbo warrior.

"hello hello im here to tell you something"shouted jack as he and alice came."rapter is going to duel you and this card will help you my turbo synchron keep it".

"rex do you see that the spirts that jack has stardust dragon and red dragon archfiend"explained junk warrior as rex noded.

"I may not have a spirt but I know you have one jack explained it to me"explained alice.

"I remember you alice you were there near the begining of the year"questioned rex.

"yes I see rapter now duel him and win it or who knows what will happen"said alice.

 

OUTSIDE DORM

 

"ready lets duel"shouted rex and rapter.

 

REX VS RAPTER

 

"my move ill oblivarate you"said rapter as he drawed"first I set a monster last I set a card your move wimp"

 

"ok get ready"shouted rex as he drawed.He summons speed warrior(atk 1800) then attacks the monster.as the attack landed rapter laughed saying"ha poison mummys flip effect activates means you lose 500 points of damage"(rex 3500) then rex sets a card.

 

"ok me,tom and destruct is here what happened"asked steve.

"listen rapters dueling rex if rapter wins rex is expelled"answered jack

 

rapter activates his face down call of the haunted bringing back poision mummy then activates call of the mummy specil summoning red eyes zombie dragon(atk 2400)"your lucky ive not drawn zombie world but im going to do a major attack"laughed rapter.red eyes attacks speed warrior (rex 2000) then poison mummy attacks rex (rex 1000).

 

"ha loser you can't win against me weakling"laughed rapter.

"urghhh"sighned rex"I beive in the heart of the cards"

"ha you belive in this rubish"laughed rapter.

 

rex summons junk synchron(lv 2) then activates its effect specil summoning speed warrior(lv 3) tributing them to synchro summoning junk warrior(lv 5 atk 2300)"so it can't beat my red eyes"laughed rapter.but then rex activates his face down double summon summoning magna draco(atk 1400) making junk warriors attack 3700."oh no"scared rapter.as junk warrior attacked red eyes (rapter 2700) then magna draco attacks poison mummy(rapter 2300)

 

"urrghh my red eyes zombie defeated by that wimp that makes me made"shouted rapter

"hmm impressive rex turned it around with power"laughed steve.

 

rapter activates anouther call of the mummy specil summoning vampire lord(atk 2000) sets a card then gets vampire lord to attack magna draco(rex 600).

 

Rex summons turbo synchron(lv 1)"wait you never had it"questioned rapter.

"jack gave it to me"shouted rex.then he tributes them to synchro summon turbo warrior(lv 5 atk 2500) then equips turbo warrior with 2 neckless(turbo warrior atk 3500) then rex activates dust tornado destroying rapters face down."noooo"screemed rapter.Turbo warrior attacks vampire lord(rapter 800) "ha im still standing"laughed rapter.

"nope I activate heavy storm destroying everything making your life points 0"laughed rex as he won.

 

"me an oblisk elite lost to a slifer slack impossible"screemed rapter as he left.

 

IN THE JUNGLE

 

"urghhh must be stronger"sighed rapter.

"ha ha ha lets duel"laughed ???."if you lose then you join the darkness"

"ok then"shouted rapter.

 

AT THE DOCK

 

"im going bye"shouted tom and steve.

"ok rex we will be partenered in a duel tommorro against morph and zaber lets think stratagy"shouted destruct.

 

IN THE JUNGLE ??? VS RAPTER

 

most of duel skipped

??? has 2900 life points and no monsters but one face down

rapter has 300 life points and despeir from the dark(atk 2800)

 

despire from the dark attacks ??? (??? 100)

 

"by the way my names nightmare rapter"laughed nightmare

"whats going on"asked steve in his head whille hiding"nightmare is losing how can he be happy"

 

nightmare discards archfiend genral to get pandimoniam in his hand then activates it."oh no im seen"shouted steve.then nightmare activates call of the haunted bringing archfiend genral(atk 2100) but not destroyed by because pandimoniam on the field"your genrals too weak to beat my zombie"laughed rapter but steve was nodding.as nightmare summons infernal queen archfiend(atk 900)"that why I noded rapter infernal queen archfiend makes an archfiend gain 1000 atk"shouted steve.

"what ummm huh ive lost"questioned rapter.

"yes you both are destined to be in the darkness when you lose"laughed nightmare as the attack landed and rapter's life points when to 0 but steve runs away quickly.

"you can run but you can't hide from destiny"laughed nightmare.

"ahhh I feel the darkness master lead me to the hideout ha ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaa"laughed rapter.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 10

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 10 TAG TEAM SHOWDOWN]

 

AT THE CLASS ROOM

 

"hmm the tag team duels almost up ive made a deck that no one has faced"destruct said to rex.

"somethings odd wheres steve and rapter"questioned Tom

"I don't know"ansewered rex

"STUDENTS GET READY FOR THE TAG TEAM DUEL REX AND DESTRUCT VS MORPH AND ZABER"shouted jeff as he was out off breath.

 

REX AND DESTRUCT VS MORPH AND ZABER

 

"ha don't mind I go first I draw"shouted morph.He summons morphitronic celfon(atk 100) in atk mode as destruct grins and rex looks comfused."I activates morphitronic celfon's effect I roll a dice and I look at the top of my deck depending on the number then choose a morphitronic monster out of them"explained morph.it rolls 5 and out of them he chooses morphitronic magneton(600 I forgot) in def mode and sets a card.

 

"my move I draw"shouted destruct.he summons elemental hero sparkman(atk 1600) then I set 3 cards.

 

zaber summons blackwing-bora the spear(atk 1700) then sets a card.

 

Rex summons sonic chick(def 300) then sets a card.

 

morph summons anouther morphitronic magneton in defenhce mode then activates morphitronic celfon's effect by rolling a die it rolls 3 and he choses morphitonic borden(atk 500) destruct had an shock as he activated bordens effect means morphitronic monsters can do an direct attack (rex and destruct 7400).

 

destruct draws then summons elemental hero bustrinitix(atk 1200)and activates one of his face downs sparkgun equiping to sparkman.Sparkman switches both morphitonic magnetons to atk mode(1 left) then sparkman and berstrin attacks both of the magnetons (morph and zaber 6400)

 

"us the best tag team getting owned by a new oblisk but zaber your bora will change it"said morph

"what"questioned rex

"bora's effect look at what zabers going to do"explained destruct

 

zaber summons blackwing-shira the blue flame then gets bora to attack sonic chick (rex and destruct 6000)"how did oh life points drop"asked rex

"ok listen when bora attacks a monster in def mode whos attack is lower than his the difference is subtracted from our life points"answered destruct as zaber was noding.Then shira attacks birstrin (rex and destruct 5400)but destruct activates his face down destiny signal specil summoning destiny hero dimond dude(atk 1400)"wow a new card"said rex

"ha ha ha you will lose"said both morph and zaber.

 

Rex summons speed warrior(lv2) then ativates double summon."oh no"said zaber.summoning junk synchron(lv3) his effect specil summons sonic chick(def 300) then tributes junk synchron and speed warrior to synchro summon junk warrior(lv5 atk becomes 2600)."oh yes"shouted rex as he commanded junk warrior to attack bora (morph and zaber 5500)"ha we are still wining and will be closer"shouted morph.

 

Morph actiates 1 face down on the field and one from his hand junk box specil summoning 2 magnetons(atk 600)all morphitronic do a direct attack (rex and destruct 3600)"ha ha ha"shouted morph.but the magnetons are destroyed.

 

destruct tributes sparkman to summon destriny hero dasher(atk 2100)then activates from his hand destiny draw discarding destiny hero captin tenosous to draw 2 cards then activates call of the haunted bringing captin bact(atk 800) he activates dashers ability by tributing dimond dude he could gain 1000 atk making it 3100 atk but he activates his face down destiny mirage bringing dimond dude back(atk 1400) "oh no"shouted zaber and morph.destruct get tenousious to atk celfon(morph and zaber 4800) dimond dude to attack borden (morph and zaber 3900) then dasher to attack (morph and zaber 2600)

 

"wait stop the duel"shouted steve

"why"shouted everyone else.

"rapter has gone to the darkness and will take over the world"shouted steve

"HA HA HA CORRECT STEVE"shouted rapter from the darkness

"tommoro lets duel steve ill win and you will join me muhha"shouted rapter as he left.

 

TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 11

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 11 DARK FUTURE]

AT THE DOCK

 

"hey jack and alice"said rex as he ran to them.

"yes if its about rapter"answered jack and red dragon archfiend.

"I still am comfused"said tom"whats about it"

"yes we all are"said alice.

"huh my phones ringing"answered jack"yes what is it"

"steve and rapter are going to duel"said the messanger.

"who was it"questioned rex as jacks still chating to whos on the phone.

"we must hurry steve and rapter is going to duel in the classroom they both have a new deck but we know rapter has an deck of darkness so steve doesn't stand a chance we must stop the duel destruct was the one who phoned me"anounced jack as they ran.

 

AT THE CLASSROOM

 

there was about 10 people exept rapter,nightmare and 2 other chatting.

"ok time to duel and start"said steve as the team ran in.

 

STEVE VS RAPTER

 

"ha second duel weve faced and ill win it"laughed rapter as he drew.Rapter summons poison mummy(atk 1000) then equips it with black penant making its atk 1500.

 

"hmm I guess rapter doesn't have a new deck steve has a chance as long as he has a new deck"said destruct

"yep guys I do have a new deck ill test"laughed steve

"fools they are shadow,x what should we do"questioned nightmare

"you know that dark lord will rise soon the more we spred the more powerful the rital"laughed shadow

"we can beat everyone to oblivion"laughed x

 

"my move I draw"said steve as he looked at his card.steve activates tremendous fire (rapter 3000/steve 3500)"still weak move ha"laughed rapter.steve summons trap reactor(atk 800) as rapter has his thumb down but steve activates shield and sword(trap reator 1800)then trap reactor attacks poison mummy (rapter 2700/steve 3000) then steve sets a card.

 

"ive seen better"laughed rapter as he sent a monster face down def mode then sets 2 face downs and activate emergancy pervision destroying them (rapter 4700).

 

steve plays sheild crush destroying the monster then summons spell reactor(atk 1200) they both direct attack rapter (rapter 2600)but he still smiles.

 

Rapter summons master kinosi(atk 1750) then master kinosi attacks trap reactor (steve 2150) but steve activates fake explosion means trap reactor isn't destroyed also he can specil summon summon reacter(atk 2000)"oh well I end my turn"laughed rapter.

 

"somethings odd"questioned rex and tom.

"its simple rapters tricking steve"explained jack

 

steve gets summon reator to attack master kinosy(rapter 2450) then trap reator and spell reator attacks rapter(rapter 350)"arghh darkness come to me"shouted rapter as rex saw a spirt.

 

rapter summons dark knight lancer(atk 1400) as it was summoned everyone was confused about the monster and why rapter didn't lose life points"ha dark knight lancer is uneffected by monsters effects plus I can discard I card to make him attack twice"laughed rapter. some how a dark mist gose around dark knight lancer making his atk 1900."whats that"questioned steve.

"oh I discarded dark knight swordsman which when its in the graveyard all dark knight monsters gains 500 atk"laughed rapter.dark knight launcer attacks trap reator and spell reactor (steve 350)"we are even ha"laughed rapter.

 

steve looks at the card he drew with a smille and sets it face down then he commands summon reator to attack dark knight launcer (rapter 250)

"im still going to win"laughed rapter.

 

rapter activates monster recarnation discarding dark knight swordsman to return lancer to rapters hand."oh no but if I activate my face down sakarutu armor that dark knight will be destroyed and I know rapter can't do anything with no cards in his hand so ill do a direct attack and win but why don't I want to"said steve in his mind.rapter summons dark knight launcer(atk 2400)"don't think about activating it"shouted a dark spirt in steves mind.dark knight launcer attacks summon reactor"wait theres a dark spirt stopping steve from playing it"shouted rex.as the attack landed steve landed in the ground with a shock.

 

"all hail the darness"said the dark people as steve put the coat of darkness on.

"steve what happened"questioned rex and destruct with a shock.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 12

 

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 12 TRICKY THE TRICKSTER PART 1]

 

AT THE DOCKS

 

"hmmm what should I do my decks getting better oh well ill look"said destruct.

"hello"said nightmare talking to someone

"whats that"wispeared destruct"its nightmare and some mystery"

"will you defeat rex tricky"laughed nightmare.

"yes"said tricky in a sliy voice.

 

AT THE SLIFER RED DORM

 

"now what"said Rex

"huh"questioned tom

"most of the oblisk blue dorms are taken over and steve plus rapter's deck is powerful how can I beat it oh wait ill sort my deck out"explained rex while editing his deck.

"STOPP"laughed trick"you there duel me if you win ill give you a card if you lose well then you join the darkness"

"too busy editing my deck"laughed rex.

"hmmm oh yeah duel me when your ready at the docks"laughed tricky as he left.

"hey it me destruct nightmare hired him to defeat you it would be almost impossible to beat him so here you go"said destruct.

 

AT THE DOCKS

 

"oh your here nooby wimp duel him and lose"laughed rapter.

 

REX VS TRICKY

 

tricky sets 2 cards then sets a monster face down.

 

rex summons sonic chick(def 300) and sets a card

 

tricky summons trick soldier(atk 1500) then flips up trick soldier(atk 1500)"what 2 monsters hmmm"questioned rex.then tricky activates his face down stop defence switching sonic chick to atk mode(atk 300)"ha ha ha"laughed tricky.tricky activates his face down trick defence means if rex activates a face down then trick gains 1000 and rex loses 1000 for 1 turn.trick soldier attacks sonic chick but rex activates sakarutsu armor (rex 3000/tricky 5000)then the other tricky attacks sonic chick(rex 1800)

 

"arghuu"sighned rex.

"rex you can do it"cheered tom

 

rex summons speed warrior(atk 1800) then speed warrior attacks trick soldier (tricky 4700) then sets 2 cards

 

"hmm oh well you will still lose"laughed tricky

"yep the dark masters predictions says tricky will win and the dark master knows all"shouted shadow.

 

tricky activates trick grave means he can give up 500 life points to specil summon 1 trick monster from his graveyard.(tricky 3700) to specil summon 2 trick soldiers(atk 1500)"ha ha ha its over"laughed tricky.trick soldier attacks speed warrior(rex 1200) then trick soldier attacks rex but he activates emergancy pervision destroying his 1 face down to gain 1000 life points(rex 700).

 

"you may of suvived this turn but next turn you will be in the darkness ha ha ha ha ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaa"shouted tricky.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 13

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 13 TRICKY THE TRICKSTER PART 2]

CONTINUED FROM CHAPTER 12 DUEL REX VS TRICKY

 

tricky has 3700 life points and 2 trick soldiers on the field and trick grave

rex has 700 life points.

 

rex summons junk synchron(lv3) then activates it effect to speci summon speed warrior(lv2) both of them tributed to synchro summon junk warrior(lv 5 atk 2300)"oh no"shocked trick.Then rex activates double summon also summoning an manga drago(atk 1400) making junk warriors atk 3700. then rex activates ojama trio summoning 3 ojama tokens to tricks side of the field giving him a shock.junk warrior attacks trick soldier (trick 1500) then magna draco attacks 1 ojama token (trick 1200)making magna dracos atk 1600.

 

"arguuh just luck yep luck"laughed tricky.

"why are you laughing?"questioned rex.

"because ill still win"laughed tricky.

"im leaving this rubish"laughed rapter,shadow and x as they left.

"so its me left guys resurect our lord"shouted nightmare to rapter.

 

tricky discards 1 card to specil summon the tricky(atk 2000) then tributes the 2 ojama tokens(trick 600) and trick soldier to summon trick dragon(atk 2500) then tricky attacks magna drago (rex 300) and trick dragon attacks junk warrior (rex 100) then trick dragons effect activates if it destroys a monster in battle specil summon 2 trick tokens and gain 4000 life points(trick 4600) then trick activates his dragons second effect by sending tricky to the graveyard he can draw until he has 6 cards in his hand then he sets a card.

 

"ha ha ha now im wining"laughed tricky

"not for long"laughed rex as he drew.

 

trick dragons final effect activates halfing rex's life points(rex 50)"ha ha ha rex will soon see the darkness as the next card tricky draws will win the duel I predict"laughed nightmare.Rex activates pot of greed so he draws 2 cards.rex specil summons vice dragon(lv 5)"what you don't have that card"sighned tricky.

"destruct gave it to me for this duel"laughed rex.next he summons nitro synchron (lv2) and tributes them to synchro summon nitro warrior(atk 2800)"he more powerful than my dragon no"signed tricky.nitro synchrons effect makes rex draw a card then he activates synchro blast wave destroying trickys face down"no not sakarutsu armor"signed tricky.

"theres more trick nitro warrior gains 1000 atk"laughed rex.

nitro warrior attacks trick dragon(tricky 3300) then one of the tokens switches to atk mode(atk 0) then nitro warrior attacks it."NOOO!!!"shouted tricky as the attack landed and he lost.as he looked at the top card of his deck and found out its spark he was gutted.

 

"hmmm rex beat my prediction impossible"shouted nightmare as he left.

"yes"shouted rex.

"hello im here I saw the duel quite good and well the dark people has taken over the oblisk dorm and now its the dark dorm also the remaning of us is staying at your dorm to know"explained jack as he entered.

 

AT THE DARK DORM/HALL OF DARKNESS

 

"now the dark master should rise"shouted nightmare as a dark cloud came and out came the dark master.

"spred the darkness"shouted the dark master.

"YESSSS"shouted the aduance

"steve,nightmare,x and shadow leave duel acadamy and spread the darkness"shouted the dark master.

 

TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 14

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 14 MACHIEN VS GOLEM]

 

OUTSIDE DUEL ACADAMY

 

"rex about those dark people what are they planning do you think"questioned tom

"I don't know"laughed rex

"whats funny"questioned tom

"look its dragon"laughed rex.

 

DRAGON TAMER VS JACK BLACK

 

most of duel skipped

jack has 1000 life points small piece golem(atk 1100),medim piece golem(atk 1600) and big piece golem(atk 2100)

dragon has 300 life points with vice dragon(atk becomes 2300) equiped with dragon tresure.

 

jack activates polmisation fusing the golems into mixed piece golem(atk 2600) and big piece golem attacks vice dragon(dragon 0)

 

"great duel" shouted dragon tamer as he got up and shaked jacks hand.

"can I duel you jack"shouted tom as rex put a frown.

"ok in the forest"laughed jack as he left.

 

AT THE DOCKS

 

"bye rapter"shouted steve whille leaving duel acadamy island.

"urghuu why does it feel like an bore being in the darkness"sighned rapter.

"don't listen to those fools"shouted the dark spirt in rapter.

"ha ha ha"shouted a voice"thats what brainwashes people"

"who is it show yourseles"shouted rapter as destruct jumps out.

"ahhh you see spirts too then argguuuu I see your duel monster spirt"laughed rapter as destruct left.

 

AT THE FOREST

 

"ha lets put the past behind us"laughed jack"the one I beat you before you got here"

"forget that because ill win"laughed tom

"LETS DUEL"they shouted.

 

TOM VS JACK

 

"ill go first with a monster face down def mode then then 2 face downs"laughed jack

 

"I activate double summon summoning gyroid(atk 1000) and steamroid(atk 1800)"laughed tom.tom ordered steamroid to attack the monster its destroyed then gyroid attacks jack but jack actiates call of the haunted bringing the monster that was small piece golem(atk 1100)(tom 3900) and gyroids not destroyed.

 

jack tributes small piece golem to summon big piece golem(atk 2100)then activates premuter berial(jack 3200) to bring small piece golem back(atk 1100)"ahhh flash back"signed tom"now you can specil summon mediam piece golem"as tom said it jack specil summoned mediam piece golem(1600).small piece golem attacks gyroid(tom 3800) and mediam piece golem attacks gyroid again(tom 3200)finaly gyroids destroyed.finaly big piece golem attacks steamroid(tom 2400) then jack sets a card.

 

"the same move as last time"laughed jack

"what do you mean"questioned rex

"well simple I know your decks and its weaknesses first you rex I used your synchros against you but since tom doesn't have any synchros I had to use my golems to quickly dominate the game"laughed jack.

 

tom activates refusion(tom 1600) to fuse the roids in the graveyard to make steamgyroid(atk 2200)"what you didn't have that in our last duel"shocked jack.as steamgyroid attacks small piece golem(jack 2100)but jack activates anouther call of the haunted bringing small piece golem back(atk 1100) then tom sets a card.

 

"I guess ill do this duel different than I did last time"suggested jack

 

jact activates polmisation fusing the golems to mixed piece golem(atk 2600)mixed piece golem attacks steamgyroid(tom 1200).

 

tom activates his face down premuter berial(tom 400) to bring steamroid(atk 2200) then activates anouther double summon summoning 2 submarienroids(atk 800) they attack jack(jack 500)then tom activates defusion on steamgyroid summoning gyroid(def 1000) and steam roid(def 1800) also the submarienroids swich to def mode(def 1800)

 

jack fills with anger but he still has a chance he activates difusion on the mixed piece golem making the 3 other one then he summons dark resinator(lv 3) then he tributes dark resinator and big piece golem to synchro summon red dragon archfiend(lv 5 atk 3000) then tributes small piece golem and mediam piece golem to synchro summon stradust dragon(lv 7 atk 2500) red dragon archfiend attachs steamroid atumaticly destroying all of toms monsters then stardust dragon attacks tom(tom 0)

 

"im a little impressed tom"said jack

"yay realy"questioned tom

"yep"explained jact

"rex I sence a dark figure"said junk warrior to rex.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 15

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 15 DARK KNIGHT DUEL]

 

AT CLASS ROOM

 

"hmm now what"questioned rex to jact and destruct

"ha ha ha"laughed jack"you don't know about the duel right in front of you"

"rapters dueling morph and zaber"laughed destruct whille changing his deck.

 

RAPTER VS MORPH AND ZABER

 

most of duel skipped

rapter has 3000 life points.

morph has 1900 life points with power tool dragon(atk 2300)

zaber has 1900 life points with blackwing armor master(atk 2500)

 

"ha blackwing-armor master attack rapter now e are wining"laughed zaber.(rapter 500)

"ha ha ha ill still win"laughed rapter as morph and zaber was comfused.

 

rapter activates dark hole destroying all monsters."nooo"shouted morph and zaber.then rapter summons dark knight launcer(atk becomes 1900)

morph and zaber looked comfused as rapter explained"their was a dark knight swordsman in my graveyard making launcer's attack 1900 also he can attack twice"(morph and zaber 0)

 

"ha"laughed rapter as he left.

 

AT DARK DORM/HIDEOUT

 

"master do I have a mission"bowed rapter.

"yes you must challenge rex and win and heres a card"said the dark master as he gave rapter a powerful card.

an dark shourd surrounded rapter as he laughed and his dark spirt felt massive power in it.

 

AT THE FOREST

 

"hmm what are we doing here"questioned rex.

"there is some information I have apparently this is where rapter lost"explained jack

"how do you know"questioned rex

"nevermind"laughed destruct

"LETS DUEL"laughed rapter from the shadows

 

REX VS RAPTER

 

rex summons sonic chick(def 300) then sets a card.

"you call that a move"laughed rapter"I call it loser"

 

rapter summons dark knight launcer(atk 1400)"theres more I discard dark knight swordsman for when my launcer attacks a monster the difference between atk and def is inflicted to you plus he gains 500 because of swordsman discarded"laughed rapter.(rex 800)

"sonic chicks not destroyed by the way"lauged rex.

"next turn you will lose"laughed rapter.

 

rex activtate double summon so he summons speed warrior(atk becomes 1800)as rapter laughed rex tributed his sonic chick to summon saber beetle(atk 2400)saber beetle attacks dark knight launcer(rapter 3500) then speed warrior(rapter 1700)"urhhh"signed rapter.

 

"muhha power"laughed the dark spirt in rapter as it went in rapter and went in a card.

 

rapter activates dark lurst destroying all cards on the field but rexs face down inflicts 1000 points of damage to rapter(rapter 700)both players get to discard 2 cards to specil summon any monster rapter first discards 2 swordsman to specil summon from his hand dark knight launcer(atk becomes 2900) rex discards 2 cards to specil summon from his hand goblin attacks force(atk 2300)"ha ha ha thanks to my dark lurst they have to be in atk mode"laughed rapter in an evil voice.(rex 300)

 

 

"ill win in the heart of the cards"laughed rex.

"ha ha ha you belive in rubbish theirs no way that you would win.

 

rex activates double summon summoning nitro synchron(lv 2) and junk synchron(lv 3) junk synchrons effect specil summons speed warrior(lv 2)

"ha ha ha ha HAAAAAAAAA"laughed rapter in an even powerful evil voice.

rex tributes junk synchron and speed warrior to synchro summon junk warrior(lv 5) "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"laughed rapter's spirt.last teh best rex tributes junk warrior and nitro synchron to synchro summon nitro warrior(lv 7 atk 2800)then rex activates pot of greed drawing 2 cards but more important making nitro warrior gain 1000 attack.nitro warrior attacks dark knight launcer(rapter 0)

 

"AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHH"screamed rapters dark spirt as is exploded by the light.

"ur what happened"said rapter.

"you got taken in the darkness and you dueled steve and won oh wait steve"shocked jack.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON YUGIOH/DAS 2

 

 

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the majority of this (okay, okay, i'll be honest - EVERYTHING you wrote here) made me want to gag. it's absolutely atrocious. horrible spelling, horrible grammar, and horrible dueling. the storyline is nonexistent, and the little dialogue you managed to produce is laughable. i could go on for ages here, but i think you get the picture...

 

also, if this is your main Fan Fic thread, ask a Mod to lock the other threads as they are all unnecessary and against the section rules. wait, you did read the rules before you decided to start this, yeah...?

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the point is not to see if you know what these things are, but to try and compel you to use them. when talking on the forum, your grammar, spelling and punctuation can be off, but when you are writing, you should try to do your very best at everything, including using correct spelling, correct grammar, and correct punctuation. you don't, and because you don't, your story is hard to read and will not pick up readers.

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