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*sighs*

... ... ... ...

*puts away Weapon and pulls out a little scroll shivering while doing so*

This is the scroll of fear... if I open it your greatest fear will come out...

*Opens the scroll*

... ... ... ...

*POOF*

*a copy of you appears standiing infront of you*

*The copy smiles and gives you a hug*

OH sheet! IT'S A NICE YOU! THE APOCALYPSE IS HERE!

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Whoa guys, taking this all the way to the top when the center's not done yet.

 

l never said now, and it's not my internet anymore, it has been fixed for a week. l always felt like l just shouldn't be here, is all. lt's nothing to delve too deep into, but the reality is finally setting in. l don't like this place. The club, yes. But l'm through being stuck in a dome shielded from other things.

 

Just saying that my leave isn't too far away. But we still have a grace period. Like 2012.

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Uh... Hi... I like RPing and so I thought an RP club seemed like a good club for me to join. *looks at time* Crud! I g2g so this will be quick. I can always change it, but hopefully it will be enough.

 

Username: Remnants

Your Characters: I switch a lot (haven't found 1 to stick with)

A GOOD RP Sample: Shikon burst into his office inside the Ookami clan compound, his door snapping off it's hinges and tumbling to the ground with a loud bang. He was sure that a few people beyond the hallway and the closer buildings would have heard the crash, but Shikon didn't really care. His blood was boiling within his body, and it was the first time in a long while he could feel his heart beating within his chest. He stepped over the fallen door, the wood cracking underneath his feet as he went. "I can't believe this! After all that I have done for this clan, after all my hard work, they want to remove me?!"

 

Shikon's hand grasped the edge of the sofa that sat nest to the right wall, with a flick of his arm the entire structure was sent cascading across the office room, and putting a large crack across the far wall as it hit the surface. Shikon felt his breath becoming heavy suddenly, and a searing heat ripped open his chest. He dropped to his knees, grasping at his vest and breaking open the zipper to reveal his skin. Just over his heart, Shikon's curse mark was glowing an eerie white and the skin around the mark was turning a bright red.

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So as i'm reading your sample l think to muself, 'Gee where have l heard that before? Oh yeah, everywhere.'

 

l am slightly impressed on how you used his anger to change the mood and give the reader a sense of interest and a very slight amount of sympathy. Either way, not the best i've seen, but not terrible. Your sample is the first i've actually read in months.

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