Blake Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I think he's a douche that deserved to die by whats-her-face's hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I am officially surrounded by lunaticz. *sits down, puts feet on table and reads magazine* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Username: Aragondom999Your Characters: Elnor of Endewaith(Lord of the Rings RP) Scarlett(A pokemon Rp) Leonardo Eleta(MY RP, STILL HASENT STARTED, NEED MORE RPers) Zanko Raquez (My Star Wars RP char) Zi'ron Dryant(ANother SW RP char, not my rp) Xinrath (In a Demigod RP) Xan Zania (Angel's Pride RP) Dominic(X-Men High RP)A GOOD RP Sample: [spoiler= RP sample]Leo scampered across the rooftops of Le Mans. Spotting his target 100 feet away."Time to die." He said before running arcross more rooftops. He tweaked his finger, then a Hidden blade appeared. The Target was in heavy armor, but no match for the Hidden Blade made by Leonardo Da Vinci himself. Leo jumped up high into the sky, landing in a pile of hay. Leo popped his head out, scanning the area, before jumping out. "The Creed must be answered by the followers."He said before approaching the target. He grabbed some coins, then threw them around the place. "Look, GOLD!"The guards tried to get the coins. The target stood there, looking confused. Leo Approached, then drove the blade into his back, then disperting poisen into his veins. Leo pulled out the blade, then clenched his fist, making the blade dissapear. The Body dropped to the ground. A girl screamed seeing the bleeding body.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 l think you should check your grammar and writing structure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 *Waves hand* *Guesses that this is still Tao-chan*Anyway as for a topic... well Black did you see the new chapter of my fanfic?Now then topic. I think this will help Dark Lighting form the Inuyasha RP. What exactly is there left to do with the plot of Inuyasha. It doesn't leave a whole lot of things ambiguous. What more could gone wrong with the world after Naraku dies?I think it should be like some other really evil demon is formed. Ya know, something like that... I'm sorry, I haven't had my thinking food today and I'm in a bit of a writer's block >.< @DN: App looks fine ^^ @Everyone: I was thinking about only allowing a certain number of Half-Demon apps, any thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 That app was actually pretty horrid in terms of how that played out. I'm pretty sure two guards won't scramble to pick up a couple of gold coins when someone clearly throws them saying, "LOOK. GOLD COINS." And I'm pretty sure the target would facepalm, more than just stand there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeroukoo Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 The app was okay. Nothing above average. If I had a say, I would say to make it with more detail. Oh yeah, If anyone didn't read my post from befreo, I'm back from my ban. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Hey Jeroukoo. I agree with Fenrir and Senpai. Redo the app. Also, don't hit enter for every quote. That makes it look weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Wow guys l only said to check his grammar so he won't feel bad :OToo late Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 *Shrug* I just said up it up, and redo. (I've seen him RP before, so I want a GOOD sample) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 So then he's a good RPer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Not really. He often uses I, me, etc. And look at the odd spacing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Ah!So he's not in disguise... what a shame. But! I was thinking, maybe we should invite Ayasato-chan, because l really liked his app in andx-sama's rp. I also think we should have some sort of member of the week. For members that impress us and such. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 *stares* I smell........... Half Vamp Riku! *searches the sections* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Senpai, I think she's a chick (I think Andx said she was) and sure, why not? And Kaisu too! And, I think member of the week's a good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Tempest' date=' I think she's a chick (I think Andx said she was) and sure, why not? And Kaisu too! And, I think member of the week's a good idea.[/quote'] l had a feeling she was a girl. Well... now we wait for phantom-san l guess XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 You guys should know about now that I will be picky when it comes to these apps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 XD Well, he'll be back tomorrow. Today is Tao-chan's last day... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 T.T really? And all this time I was searching for Riku! Anyways, I gotta get more active in this club........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Yes, yes you do need to be more active. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 l'm getting ready to go to the library, to make an app in Saiba's rp (He keeps saying he's gonna join but never does =/), and Otaku's too.I have an hour to make two huge apps. l hope l can make it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! Today is my last day here!!! (For a while though. . .) X3 820-dono! *Glomps* Where's everyone? =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeroukoo Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Soory for me being inactive, being kicked off. ALOT. And the sad part is, it's my sister. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Hey tao-chan! ^-^I dunno, sleep? l g2g too, but for a small while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Bye Senpai D= Good luck =D Hey Tao-chan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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