ThatPhantomGuy Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 TEMPAST-SAN!!!Where are you Tempast-san?! I know your online!!! Get out here!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlinFan Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Username: Carlinfan Your Characters: (Currently) Uchiha Saizo, Wencai, Darth Princeps, Jacob Greene, Christopher Payne A GOOD RP Sample: Christopher stepped into the hallway, a black duffel bag hanging from his right shoulder. He paced to the end, opening the door to the stairway and carefully closing the door behind him before breaking into a sprint.Two stories to the top floor. Christopher's mind was racing, tactical risks being assessed and various approaches considered. He sharpened his senses momentarily, one of the many abilities being an Angel granted him. Two guards outside the staircase... a third by the window and a fourth at the opposite end of the hallway. Easy enough.Christopher slammed the stairwell door open, stunning one of the guards as he drew a combat knife and sliced through the tendons in the other's right arm in one fluid motion. Before the other guards had a chance to react, Christopher buried his knife in the second guard's skull and drew a silenced Sig Sauer P229, executing a literally perfect double-tap on the window guard. As the surviving door guard regained his bearings, Christopher kicked through the door, snapping it in half and allowing him to pull his knife from the other guard's head and impale the first guard through the heart. As the fourth guard reached to draw his sidearm, Christopher fired three rounds into his forehead.The entire exchange had taken approximately 0.483 seconds. The second guard's body thudded to the floor, crimson blood pooling on the drab gray carpet.Christopher holstered the gun and sheathed the knife, setting the duffel on the ground and unzipping it. From the bag, Christopher removed the barrel, scope, and firing apparatus of an M39 EMR sniper rifle. Christopher swiftly assembled the rifle, screwing the barrel into place and snapping the scope onto the top of the firing apparatus.Christopher stepped back two paces, distancing himself from the window by about two feet. He knelt, drawing in a deep breath before peering through the scope.Across the street was the UN building. Christopher had been hired to eliminate the Chinese ambassador, who had ties to the Triad. The Yakuza had offered good money, and Christopher loved killing scumbags like Bai Dazhong almost as much as he enjoyed demon hunting.Christopher lined up a shot on the ambassador, who was just emerging through the doorway. Reaching out with his mind, Christopher seized Dazhong in a telekinetic vise. He could only hold the grip for a few seconds at this distance, but that was enough. Christopher's finger contracted once. A 7.92 Kurz FMJ round flew from the scope to its destination, Dazhong's right temple.The Chinese ambassador crumpled to the ground. Christopher exhaled smoothly. That was $10,000,000 more towards his 'hobby'. He hoped the demons were watching. Targets could be so stupid when they were afraid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Questions: No. Also, is that copy/pasted? Anyways, I'll have senpai read it when he gets on... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlinFan Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Questions: No. Also' date=' is that copy/pasted? Anyways, I'll have senpai read it when he gets on...[/quote'] Yes, it was copy/pasted; I used it in the Star Wars RP "Battle of Peace & Passion". Was I supposed to write a new RP sample for my application? I thought a relatively recent sample would suffice. Apologies if I was incorrect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 NO, it has to be on the spot, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlinFan Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Alright, apologies; I'll go back to the original application and replace that RP sample with an on-the-spot one. May I use a character I've already created, or should I use a character spontaneously created? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 The character can be old, but the sample has to be brand new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 l wasn't on...And i'm not staying here! It's a funking sheet hole full of bastards, funk faces, sheet addicts, and many more cencored obscentities!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Hi Tempest! ^_^ I have all the pokemon for you... But my WiFi is locked. Also Marsuvees, Tempest.... Can I send you each a copy of my application for Jake's Myth Reborn RP? I would like your opinions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlinFan Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 App updated as of 8:23 Pacific Coast time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Yes, and alright... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 What is Tempest complaining about now? *gets off of sofa* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Nothing, jake. Yes, you may send it andrew. Goodnight everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 I sent it. So who's online? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 I guess just me. I am off today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 l'm here, but not for very long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 l'm here' date=' but not for very long.[/quote'] Senpai, I need you to read Carlin Fan's app... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Who's? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 ... Up on the page... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 It needs . . . spacing . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Eh... I didn't read it yet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 It is very difficult with the way it was posted . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Jake, I swear, you do NOT have to space it to make it readale! There should be a space between paragraphs, but that's it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 No need to get testy Black . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 .. .Sorry... just ill.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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