LuffyLaxer Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 hey guys how was my first post in the Struggle for Powers RP? I need some feed back so I can do better by you guys in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 You posted in SoP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Yeah I'm Tiberius I'm on the last page. Second from the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 I'll check.Looks good ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 thanks. I wanted to set myself on a certain tone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Well, it was good. But watch it with the *'s. A lot of people will think you are scripting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 What do I see in Aqua Girl? Could it be . . . A.) The chance to have a female rper with usB.) A rare chance to get at Chaos Zero for almost ruining the rpC.) An even rarer oppertinuty to be pervertedD.) Just because I like her characterE.) Just because she is coolF.) I Had No Reason! *looks at list* Hmmm . . . actually . . . it was a couple of those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 scripting? oh those i use for my character's thoughts. besides i thought scripting was:Â Jake:HelloTim: Hello Friend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Yes it is, but instead of writing thoughts out like that, try this: "I am thinking""Now I am speaking" Do you see? Italizied words are read as though someone were thinking it. *taps foot* Though I will admit . . . you're more fliud in your writing than Aqua Girl (-_-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 What do I see in Aqua Girl? Could it be . . . A.) The chance to have a female rper with us Done and doneB.) A rare chance to get at Chaos Zero for almost ruining the rp How?C.) An even rarer oppertinuty to be perverted We can always be perverted.D.) Just because I like her character Umm' date=' no?[/b']E.) Just because she is cool Is she?F.) I Had No Reason! You're a sage, even if your title on your member card I made was "Oblivious Nightmare" *looks at list* Hmmm . . . actually . . . it was a couple of those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 LOL . . . then maybe I made a mistake letting her join Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Thanks. I guess it is from my English teachers and Writing my Story in the fan-fiction section. Those are tags to make it come out Italized? Can you show me how to do that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 XD You guys seem to be having quite a bit of problems in SOP. I wish you the best of luck, cuz I've also had to deal with annoying Rpers. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Just reply to my post, and you will she what I did. Or . . . []=begining[/]=end What goes in between []i= italicizedb= boldu= underlines=strikethroughhr= horizontal linesize=x-smallsize=xx-smallsize=x-largesize=xx-large What goes at endibushrsizeWell its just Aqua Girl. See seems to be completely off track and not even paying attention to anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 okay thanks Jake. hey i just realized that you guys, except for tempest, haven't read my fan-fic yet. It's in my sig if you guys get to read it. I would like some comments.  Thanks in advance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! *Door explodes*Â Salutations all. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 *catches door and throws it back at Phantom*Â Do you KNOW how many . . . *sigh* why the hell we don't just get a revolving door is beyond me . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 *blinks at Jake* Maybe cuz were broke...And that cheap door was all we could hope to afford 0.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 *catches door and throws it back at Phantom* Do you KNOW how many . . . *sigh* why the hell we don't just get a revolving door is beyond me . . . *Gets hit by door sending him flying backwards* I think getting revolving doors would be awesome! But it wouldn't be that dramatic to enter in...  As Manager of this club I will set it up right away! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 *floats over to the burnt door* How did we end up getting such a cheap door anyway? *looks at Phantom* How many times have we had to get a door replaced, exactly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 I lost count around the three hundreds . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Stupid dramatic entrances -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatPhantomGuy Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 It came with the club. Aha ha ha ha! We were a very small group back then... And this thing has been obliterated a bloody lot of times. *Picks up the door* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 LEEEERROOOYYYY.............. ah screw it, Broxet isn't even here, so hey guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Hey Proto ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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