The D.M. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 ill take a look at it....im still not proud of my darefic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 @Jake-dono, Kira-kohai, and Raiden-otaku: HAVE SOME FAITH IN YOURSELF(VES)!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Sorry, I was just playing RE4, and that got pretty intense. But now I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Hey D-kun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Terribly sorry i was gone for a bit (stopped my baby brother from burning the house down) and now i NEED to cool off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira Magister Magi Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Both lol and wow... Both because I fixed it up and so you don't have to go back, here's the paragraph again lol: Zane walked to the door, early for his appointment, with a very strict schedule. He had about 15 seconds left, according to his watch. He walked in, unannounced, unnoticed, unknown. It was about midnight, and he was due upstairs to see his client, although said client had no clue of Zane's existence. Powers decreasing, Zane failed to see the coffee table in front of him, and sent a vase clattering to the floor. Alaric, Zane's ignorant client, awoke at the sound and grabbed a bat he kept in his room. He went down the hallway and saw a mysterious figure in black, moving across the house, seeming to be looking for something specific. Alaric followed, quickly, quietly. 5 seconds remained on Zane's clock, and Alaric was gaining on him. Zane turned around and his face seemed in the wrong place at the wrong time as there was a whack, and the bat made contact with his face. Alaric turned on the light and saw a skull in place of a face, and it was completely destroyed. Horrified, he stepped slowly back, and his back met the body of a gorgeous woman, presumably no more than 20. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Nice Grammar....i like the way it kinda grabbed me in the intro...you gave a good idea of what to expect of the main character and the work he does....i dont see any flaws frankly im impressed to no end 9.5/10 Just Short Of Godliness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira Magister Magi Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Looking it over, this is actually 2 paragraphs... You can seperate them at "something specific" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 .....HEY!!! i dont think anyone ever made me a member card...destron did'nt....i know that for sure and if jake or Black made me a card i would've sigged it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira Magister Magi Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Gaara made one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 HUZZAH!!! Thank you Gaara...erm...Black...er...WHATEVER XD also what was the Code for that card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Just click "Reply" and copy/cut it from there.I'm also gonna make one Post-NAme Changes. Who is your Favorite KH character, Raiden-otaku? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 My ABSOLUTE favorite character...Riku...i know its cliche but he's not a crybaby like Sora and he's the BEST you can play as on 358/2 days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Hai ^-^ What' happenin'?And why am l a normie like broxet on RPU?... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 PM Hayate about it. Or I will if you'd prefer. For whatever reason he made me admin, I have to wonder if he was just rushed when he went about restoring mod status to people and messed up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Rejected. Next favorite? No main Characters.Also, Hi Senpai nad Jade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 oh if that's the case then Demyxalso i dont suppose I could be a mod right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 So you gonna do it? ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Do what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Make us modz ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira Magister Magi Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 I wouldn't mind it either ^^ lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 lulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Exactly lets ALL be mods i could manage the Fanfic section...or the Anime section... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 If we are ALL Mods then Jade, Hayate, and I would be the only Super mods XD I can't make mods, but senpai is a shoo-in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 theeeeeen how about just ME XPalso i JIZZED myself when i saw that card....EPIC win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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