yugioh 5ds king Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 If you Wanna make A character for Yugioh ZX then you need to Fill in this: Name:Age:Appearance:Duel Disk:Bio:Faction:(Shadow warriors, Light crusaders, Army of ice, Magnaflares, Renegades of each faction. Then send It to me on A PM And I will let you know what position (the top 10 will get into it.) Example:Name: Will ValenticeAge:unknownAppearance: unseenDuel Disk: UnseenBio: He is a Duel champion, and his cards All have no picture on them. This one duelist used to be human, but now he Is just a shadow of his former self. This one Duelist has puzzled the universe, and has never been beaten in a duel.Faction: shadow warrior renegadeIf you want to know the story of yugioh ZX then here it is. Many years ago, A God locked Powerful Spirits away into cards. then this game is reborn. then, a duelist is assassinated an reborn as a demon. And that duelist?Will valentice. Is he unstoppable? That may be, but a group of ten duelists unite against him. will they succeed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 Let me point out all of your errors.If you wanna make a character for Yugioh ZX then you need to fill in this:Also' date=' the 'Z' thing is either supposed to be a Dragonball rip-off, or means something stupid. Tell us what it means.[/color'] Name:Age:Appearance:Duel Disk:Bio:Faction:(Shadow Warriors, Light Crusaders, Army of Ice, Magnaflares, Renegades of each faction.) What's up with this? Why should we choose a faction when we have no idea what the heck they do in this story? Plus the names are dumb. Magnaflares?! Why not 'Inferno' or something? 'Army of Ice'? How generic! And what will these "renegades" be doing, too? Before signing a contract, you should always read the fine print. If there is no fine print, throw the contract away. Then send it to me on a PM And I will let you know what position (the top 7 will get into it.) ... you ended it with 'what position'. Um, what position you got in the top 7? What position you go in the story itself, which you were already trying to get? Fix it, please, and I will give you a cake picture. Example:Name: Will ValenticeAge:unknown Uh... don't make him a kid or teen, please. Duel Champions under 18? Not likely. Please don't make it a stereotypical teen...Appearance: unseen Is he invisible? It's not gonna be a huge spoiler if you tell us what he looks like.Duel Disk: Unseen Well, okay, since that WOULD be a spoiler.Bio: He is a Duel Champion, and his cards all have no pictures on them. This one duelist used to be human, but now he is just a shadow of his former self. This one duelist has puzzled the universe, and has never been beaten in a duel. The 'never beaten' thing... IS IMPOSSIBLE. YOU MEAN THAT WHEN HE WAS A 6-YEAR OLD HE STILL NEVER LOST, EVEN WITH A CRAPPY DECK?! And cards with no pictures on then sounds illegal. And weird. That's not something I'd include. Plus, the 'puzzled the universe' thing doesn't make sense. How do you do that? If you can prove it, you get TWO cake pictures.Faction: Shadow Warrior renegadeWell, there could be an explanation for that, and why he decided to quit...If you want to know the story of Yugioh ZX, then here it is. Many years ago, a god locked powerful spirits away into cards. Then the game is reborn What the heck does this even mean?!. Then, a duelist is assassinated and reborn as a demon. And that duelist? Will Valentice. Is he unstoppable? That may be, but a group of seven duelists unite against him. Will they succeed?I can't tell if he's the main good guy or the main antagonist now. I THINK it's the latter, but then again... though I don't know why people would want to assassinate card players. And how will he get reborn? That's YOUR job to make it make sense. Plus the spirit card thing has also been DREADFULLY overdone, but if you can use it in a GOOD way, I'll respect you. In order to make this preview look better in the eyes of the English and U.S. audience, you need to explain the factions-thing and use "proper" English capitalization. I don't blame you for the capital letters stuff if you're foreign and that's what you're used to, and thus you shall be forgiven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted September 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 Sorry.The Factions are clans.Good idea! Magnaflares are now inferno!Will valentice has to be stopped because he wants to destroy the world and send it into oblivion, while bringing the shadow world into it's place.Yes he is invisible. he's just a shadow.Renegades are the ones that betrayed their clan and now work alone.will valentice was assassinated by his arch nemesis.now do you get that bit?soz it's just My writing is a little rusty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 14, 2009 Report Share Posted September 14, 2009 It ALL MAKES SENSE NOW... MORE!! Thanks for explaining stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 what are the goals of each faction? also, how do the duelists who are fighting Will know of his plan, or even that he exists? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 what are the goals of each faction? also' date=' how do the duelists who are fighting Will know of his plan, or even that he exists?[/quote'] Let him try.When my fic started, I also had no idea of what the plot would be (I didn't even think about what'd happen in Chapter 2 lol.) My Spelling/Grammar were very very bad (They still are, according to my English teacher) and my characters were generic as hell. But eventually the second half of book 1 wasn't that bad, was it? @TC: are you inspirationless that soon? First write +/- 10 pages, and then ask for characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 How can he duel if he's an 2-dimensional projection of the absence of light? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 He's really Santa Claus, and Santa is magical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Watch it he was also a trained assassin, so watch out cos you're gonna get a swiss army knife up your butt if you don't shut it with the insults. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 But I wasn't insulting it, and neither were they. They're making valid points, and you should be able to make up at least the bare backbone of the series. Don't get nobishly defensive when they did nothing to you. OFFTOPIC: But your signature confuses me. What makes your deck so good if it's full of those "4000 ATK" monsters, a but the Spells and Traps won't help save it from, say, a Dark Skill Drain deck? And why don't you show us your Digi-Adopted dudes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted September 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 what are the goals of each faction? also' date=' how do the duelists who are fighting Will know of his plan, or even that he exists?[/quote'] They know he exists because he used to be a duel champion and the goals, Weak points and strong points of the factions were originally this: Inferno: Good with fire and rubbish with water as the name suggests,as well as being arch enemies with the army of ice and wanting to kill them.Army of ice: opposite of above.Shadow warriors: good with dark, rubbish with light, arch enemies with light crusaders.Light crusaders:opposite of above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Oh, your descriptions aren't very descriptive. The Inferno squad... burns stuff up and hates Ice for being there? There's GOTTA be a better reason... but before telling us what it is, start the story and post the first chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 But I wasn't insulting it' date=' and neither were they. They're making valid points, and you should be able to make up at least the bare backbone of the series. Don't get nobishly defensive when they did nothing to you. OFFTOPIC: But your signature confuses me. What makes your deck so good if it's full of those "4000 ATK" monsters, a but the Spells and Traps won't help save it from, say, a Dark Skill Drain deck? And why don't you show us your Digi-Adopted dudes?[/quote'] My Digi-adopt account... The site is stopping me from showing them.About 70 percent of my deck have 4000-X000 ATK and DEF points.fifteen percent is spells/traps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Only 15% amount of Spell and traps? Of course. Let's say you summon a super strong monster with....∞ ATK. You attack me directly. I use Magic Cylinder. You only have Monsters in your Hand. You lose the duel. You don't have much of a chance to draw a Spell or Trap Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 DAMN IT. Thanks for telling me now I can improve my deck and win every duel i come across! >:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 But I wasn't insulting it' date=' and neither were they. They're making valid points, and you should be able to make up at least the bare backbone of the series. Don't get nobishly defensive when they did nothing to you. OFFTOPIC: But your signature confuses me. What makes your deck so good if it's full of those "4000 ATK" monsters, a but the Spells and Traps won't help save it from, say, a Dark Skill Drain deck? And why don't you show us your Digi-Adopted dudes?[/quote'] My Digi-adopt account... The site is stopping me from showing them.About 70 percent of my deck have 4000-X000 ATK and DEF points.fifteen percent is spells/traps. 100% - (75% + 15%) = 15% ? Could you give me a Decklist? Most of the 4000+ ATK Monsters I know aren't in your main Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Still off-topic, you may want to get into Rescue Cat Synchro. It won a Shonen Jump Championship, and it's not that hard to look up. Anyways, what about those monsters you got there? ON TOPIC: What about the story? Could you please give us an awesome prologue so that we know what kind of guy would be good for the story's tone and stuff? It'll probably be interesting to read, I'm sure... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 when will it be made into chapters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Ok good ideaThnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 The chapters will be done once I have got info on all the duelists you PM/Email me about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 You mean we can't even get a prologue... OR what you use in your deck... WHY MUST THE WORLD HATE MEEEEEEEH?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted November 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 You mean we can't even get a prologue... OR what you use in your deck... WHY MUST THE WORLD HATE MEEEEEEEH?! ALRIGHT! I'll Post A decklist. But Umm... I don't know how to post cards:| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 You mean we can't even get a prologue... OR what you use in your deck... WHY MUST THE WORLD HATE MEEEEEEEH?! ALRIGHT! I'll Post A decklist. But Umm... I don't know how to post cards:| Like this: ---3x Vice Dragon2x Dark Resonator---3x Speed Spell-Baton Pass---2x Shadow Spell---1x Red Daemon's Dragon--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted December 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 ur an idiot i wanna post the pics of the cards how do i do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh 5ds king Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 whateva I've got these cards 3 X Black omegamon3 X Omegamon6 X Devimon10 X Earthbound immortal korax10 X Shadow Maniac Buzarihez1 X DemiDevimon3 X Lucemon Chaos Mode3 X Angemon1 X Love of the Angels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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