Greek Prince Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Well after making my first new card I kind of like this community, everyone is helpful and kind so I decided to stick around and make some more cards. I made my first new card yesterday and decided to remake it see if it's any better than before, so here is my second attempt, enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 WOW,what great cards you made!!9.8/10!(I lowerd it from 9.99 because your striden blaze is overpowered)I like the most the ruination,the cyber defender!---->It is perferct.So considering your strident blaze,I would recommend this----> You must pay 800 of your Life Points to activate this card's effect.During the turn this card is activated,your "Cyber End Dragon" on your side of the field must attack all of your opponent's monsters on his/her side of the field with its effect negated until the end of your turn and its attck must be first.After this card attacked all of your opponent's monsters successfully,your Battle Phase immediatly ends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wicket Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 8/10 Cyber cards, not original, but the pics are excellent. Oh, and the 2nd to last card, should be typed "Super Strident Blast". It's from the anime, hopefully, that's what you tried to to say. (A few grammar problems, but nothing much) Also, Attack Designator Unit seems a bit overpowered. At least have a cost for the effect, like 500 points or something. Barrier's effect is powerful, you need a cost. Also, when you have a Trap that's considered as an equip, you don't use the equip symbol. Here. This card is considered an equip card, but does not have the equip symbol. Get it? I hope my advice helped. Can't wait to see more, just need to work a little more with your cards, that's all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Balvarine - Thanks!! I do think the Striden Blaze is a little overpowered but it's hard enough getting End dragon on the field and having that spell card when you do so I thought to forget the drawbacks. Having it's effect negated is a cool idea though. Makes it fair ^_^ Wicket - Haha yes i'm fully aware in the anime but I liked the blaze better so I done that instead. ^_^You are right though I literall added that cost part, 500LP during each of your standy phases but I took it out *shrugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 nice cards love the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 da-clown-of-hell - Thanks! I tried not to go voerboard, but i didn't want to make them weak either, glad you like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danlee66 Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 Nice cybers, how did you come up them? :) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 I'm very creative ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 those are pretty nice 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 wow dude your my proto-type lol, im liking the cards 9/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 WHOA!!!!!! Awesome cards.... especially for a beginner......I'm like... really wowed right now..... =pHmmm..... 9.618 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 24, 2007 Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 u rock dude i not rating those im rating your overall cardmaking skill and u 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 CrazyKev - Glad you think so ^^ Bloodrun - Lol, just call me Proto-Prince glasstin10 - Yay I made someone "Wow!" but you rated them 9.618.. why not 9.619? card maker - Thanks so much man, i'm still learning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 I love those! 10/10 Excellent OCG (Original Card Grammar). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 Very good. Alittle grammar problems, but overall, great job. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted November 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 Thanks guys and Yay!! I have 2 Reputation points! Thanks God Gak!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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