yugioh/das chapter 4

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

CONTINUED FROM CHAPTER 3 DUEL STEVE VS RAPTER

 

rapter has 1000 life points and steve has 2000 life points

rapter had red eyes zombie dragon(atk 2400) and gamma(atk 1500)

 

"i draw yes I summon the powerful luster dragon in atk mode"luster dragon(atk 1900) luster dragon attacks gamma (rapter 600) then sets a card.

 

rapter activates dragons treasure equiping to red eyes(atk 2700) then red eyes attacks luster dragon(steve 1200) then luster dragon attacks steve but steve activates his face down half attack halfing luster dragons attack to 950 (steve 250)

 

"arrguh im still going to win"shouted steve

"ha im wining ill just set 1 card"laughed rapter

 

steve draws then activates 2 graceful charity discard 4 cards draw 6 then sets a card and activates emergancy pervision tributing that card to gain 1000 life points then activates brain control(steve 450) controling luster dragon and tributes it to summon luster dragon 2(atk 2400) then activates 2 dragon treasure making luster dragons atk 3000 then luster dragon attacks red eyes (rapter 300)

 

"arrghh oh ill win now"laughed rapter

 

rapter activates call of the haunted specil summoning desper of the dark(atk 2800) then activates sheild and sword switching the atk of both monsters the desper from the dark attacks luster dragon (steve 0)

 

"no my deck is finished"frowned steve

"wow that duel was amazing I didn't get to see despere from the dark"said dragon

"yep its some power ill might can beat it"said destruct

"huh you were there"questioned rex

"yes he was and I was their to"laughed tom

"ha ha ha you weakling your like an slifer red"laughed rapter

"NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!"fround steve.

 

TO BE CONTINUED ON CHAPTER 5

[Silent Omega]

Ah, a bit of some advice.

 

Put all the chapters in one thread.

 

Use correct grammar and spelling ._.

 

I pretty much skimmed through the whole thing though.

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

youre right but I mostly focus on the duel so I forget to put all the main characters in until sometime after the duel and well each time theirs new characters but like miror ones that are in only 1-3 chapters well nice advice.